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HEAVENLY DIVINE DOCTOR: ABANDONED CONCUBINE

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He is the cold-blooded prince of the Jin Kingdom,
strategizing and observing the world.
She was her princess and saved her life, but he wouldn't even see her.
The fire was spreading and death came, and she knew her existence was a joke!
Opening her eyes, she changed his state and was reborn two years ago.
Ye Zhen smiled slightly: in this life, she will trample on everyone who has deceived her and deceived her identity!
Let her taste the unforgettable pain of love sickness and the pain of unrequited love!

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richard_rick

The novel is intriguing and inspiring to read. please keep up the good work 😉 don't stop writing, I believe this novel will one day explore wonders beyond.

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Caimiz_Mudau

I like the plot very much so it pains me to say that the grammar needs a lot of work. Its sad cause I am reading this because I loved the the authors other stories. I also know that this may have been a direct translation issue. I wish it was better edited. Important to note are the gender flexible characters, overly repeated words and direct translation of Proverbs that lose meaning. Finally statements that place adjectives incorrectly. Just a few changes to this will make a difference to the great story. I hope to see even more of the authors work. Thank you for sharing your writing.

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