Webnovel Author: Caimiz_Mudau - Novel Collection

I like the plot very much so it pains me to say that the grammar needs a lot of work. Its sad cause I am reading this because I loved the the authors other stories. I also know that this may have been a direct translation issue. I wish it was better edited. Important to note are the gender flexible characters, overly repeated words and direct translation of Proverbs that lose meaning. Finally statements that place adjectives incorrectly. Just a few changes to this will make a difference to the great story. I hope to see even more of the authors work. Thank you for sharing your writing.

I this avaliable in English. I like the art style and think it looks like a great read. just can read what they are saying. if there is an English translation please help me with the name so I can read it.

I love it please let it pass I have been praying 🙏 so much. The characters are all well written even the story keeps one wanting more. Keep up the good work