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Great story ,unexpected plot twists, full of surprises and unbelievable drama !! Loved this story and recommend it to everyone 🤩
Idk why this has so much rating...honestly it started off very good but then it has only and only misunderstandings...so much that you might even faint.
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It's a good story so far. The story development itself is engaging. I think this novel has a lot of potential. More power for the author. Keep up a good work! I give my 5-thumbs for this story. Can't wait for the next chappies!
Great story! I recommend The Silver Bullet by SAINT ZEMA, I’m currently reading it and it is xoxo intriguing. I wish we can all support the young writer in his mission to decry terrorism and female child abuse
I love you, romance novels that sometimes make me laugh with the main and second characters. recommended novels to be added to the collection and please provide appropriate reviews. This script does not do plagiarism so it should get a four or five star even perfect.
Yoi hanashi, omoshiroi kyarakutā. Watashi wa ikutsu ka no shō o yomimashita, soshite watashi wa sore o tsudzukeru tsumoridesu. Sutōrī ga dono yō ni shō ni tsuika sa re tsudzukeru ka o mite, sorekara hajimete, sukuriputo ga dorehodo yoi ka warui ka o handan dekimasu. Shikashi, hoka ni mo kyōmibukai ten ga arimasu
Good story, funny characters. I read a few chapters, and I'm going to get on with it. I will see how the story continues to add to chapters and only then can I judge how good or bad the script is. But will have other interesting points
Hi, I think you're an excellent writer given your outstanding writing skill. I'm Ms. Jornaliza, an editor at Goodnovel, a writing platform that helps authors get a reliable and long-term income through their books. We are currently approaching authors who have a nice plot, synopsis, writing structure, style, and strong characters to sign their stories with us. I want to invite you to sign a contract with us. If your story is approved, you will be receiving an attractive monthly update bonus and premium coins share income monthly till your contract with us lasts. If you are interested in joining us email me at msjornaliza.goodnovel@gmaill@gmail.com
i really like this novel! i like the setting and the way it's written. well done! i also really like how the characters are described. love it
I really love this novel. I love the writing, the characters, the plot, and the background. It was well written, many unique characters, and the background was described beautifully. I'm giving it a 5 starts. good job authors
Hey, I'm Ms. Jornaliza, an editor at Goodnovel, a writing platform that helps authors get a reliable and long-term income through their books. We are currently approaching authors who have a nice plot, synopsis, writing structure, style, and strong characters to sign their stories with us. If your story is approved, you will be receiving an attractive monthly update bonus and premium coins share income monthly till your contract with us lasts. If you are interested in joining us email me at msjornaliza.goodnovel@gmaill@gmail.com
OMG part awal aja udah hot banget bikin gerah hahahaha I like it 😍 Walaupun bhs inggris tapi dibacanya ringan bgt, penulisan rapih jadi dijamin betah bacanya 😍 Semangat ya author, dan ditunggu kelanjutannyaaa
I found the best novel in my opinion, and I really like the character Luna. the spirit continues the author, I will still wait for the latest chapter of this novel.
Wow, this is an interesting story. Luna is a good wife, willing to cook for her husband even though she only helps cook. And Ethan, it's only natural that he's busy. spirit of writing yes Author
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i falling in love with this story. I personality very like Luna, she is strong women. The plot make me so suprised. One word for me to this stori...WOW!
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Great story ,unexpected plot twists, full of surprises and unbelievable drama !! Loved this story and recommend it to everyone 🤩
Idk why this has so much rating...honestly it started off very good but then it has only and only misunderstandings...so much that you might even faint.
Spoiler de révélation It's a good story so far. The story development itself is engaging. I think this novel has a lot of potential. More power for the author. Keep up a good work! I give my 5-thumbs for this story. Can't wait for the next chappies!
Great story! I recommend The Silver Bullet by SAINT ZEMA, I’m currently reading it and it is xoxo intriguing. I wish we can all support the young writer in his mission to decry terrorism and female child abuse
I love you, romance novels that sometimes make me laugh with the main and second characters. recommended novels to be added to the collection and please provide appropriate reviews. This script does not do plagiarism so it should get a four or five star even perfect.
Yoi hanashi, omoshiroi kyarakutā. Watashi wa ikutsu ka no shō o yomimashita, soshite watashi wa sore o tsudzukeru tsumoridesu. Sutōrī ga dono yō ni shō ni tsuika sa re tsudzukeru ka o mite, sorekara hajimete, sukuriputo ga dorehodo yoi ka warui ka o handan dekimasu. Shikashi, hoka ni mo kyōmibukai ten ga arimasu
Good story, funny characters. I read a few chapters, and I'm going to get on with it. I will see how the story continues to add to chapters and only then can I judge how good or bad the script is. But will have other interesting points
Hi, I think you're an excellent writer given your outstanding writing skill. I'm Ms. Jornaliza, an editor at Goodnovel, a writing platform that helps authors get a reliable and long-term income through their books. We are currently approaching authors who have a nice plot, synopsis, writing structure, style, and strong characters to sign their stories with us. I want to invite you to sign a contract with us. If your story is approved, you will be receiving an attractive monthly update bonus and premium coins share income monthly till your contract with us lasts. If you are interested in joining us email me at msjornaliza.goodnovel@gmaill@gmail.com
i really like this novel! i like the setting and the way it's written. well done! i also really like how the characters are described. love it
I really love this novel. I love the writing, the characters, the plot, and the background. It was well written, many unique characters, and the background was described beautifully. I'm giving it a 5 starts. good job authors
Hey, I'm Ms. Jornaliza, an editor at Goodnovel, a writing platform that helps authors get a reliable and long-term income through their books. We are currently approaching authors who have a nice plot, synopsis, writing structure, style, and strong characters to sign their stories with us. If your story is approved, you will be receiving an attractive monthly update bonus and premium coins share income monthly till your contract with us lasts. If you are interested in joining us email me at msjornaliza.goodnovel@gmaill@gmail.com
OMG part awal aja udah hot banget bikin gerah hahahaha I like it 😍 Walaupun bhs inggris tapi dibacanya ringan bgt, penulisan rapih jadi dijamin betah bacanya 😍 Semangat ya author, dan ditunggu kelanjutannyaaa
I found the best novel in my opinion, and I really like the character Luna. the spirit continues the author, I will still wait for the latest chapter of this novel.
Wow, this is an interesting story. Luna is a good wife, willing to cook for her husband even though she only helps cook. And Ethan, it's only natural that he's busy. spirit of writing yes Author
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i falling in love with this story. I personality very like Luna, she is strong women. The plot make me so suprised. One word for me to this stori...WOW!
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