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Fantastic story. I like it. the story line makes me smile to myself I enjoyed it [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update] (つ≧▽≦)つ
wow amazing. The plot very interesting. Make me ''woah' The characters are very hot[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
the story is very interesting.. Recomended to you. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
A novel tells about a marriage without love, and ends with the love come. The plot of the story is simple and light but it can make happy. The writer describe the feeling softly without any burden to the main character and also the reader. This novel is good to be read....👍😀
it is like listening to a romantic love song. It is very sweet and makes the readers baper. or a little jealous and hurt seeing the intimacy of the couple in this novel. love comes from being used to it
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The secret love between two young people who love each other but are not disgusted in confession, is something that hurts and hurts to the point of hurting one's own feelings. But love comes out of habit. bear in mind that
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wow.. first impress, i Saw a hot cover. burning prolog, and others... really looking forward to the continuation. whether to like the cover and opening chapter. You make me hot and cold!
The struggle life of Luna, became very complicated when she was involved with her ex lover. you must have too, right? I also hate ex-viyfr who didn't move on! I wonder how She acted for her ex
Reading the first chapter, it can make me imagine far. they are such a lovely couple and they are my favorite characters. greetings of love to the author
Reading the first chapter, it can make me imagine far. Ethan and Luna are such a lovely couple and they are my favorite characters. greetings of love to the author ,❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
uwuuu, this is the best story that I have ever readdd~ I really fall in love with this storyy😭❤️❤️❤️❤️ I LOVE YOU AUTHORR!![img=update][img=update][img=update]
This story is very good. The author brings this story flowing beautifully. Always passionate to continue the next chapter. I wait. g[img=update]
the original story' Made me want read the other version, i wish we have some different sweet scenes here.. but everything, all of this story' really good to enjoy
let's enjoy this new welcoming stroy line.. hot and romantic, full of chemistry and complicated.. how Edward made scene of her brother and sister in law.. this is such a hadache for us as a reader
incredibl, surprised me at the start! this is a good story ', very recommended, the plot, the main character, the problematika, everything Made me as a reader is really curious
It's a great story, the started from wrong room that ended up being true love. Anyway, I love this story so much, I really recommend this novel[img=recommend][img=recommend]
The story is very good. His romance is wrapped in neat conflict. Very makes us curious to continue reading the next chap. I still wait the next chap.
I immediately put this story into my library. The story is very good, and makes us get carried away in it. So, you must update next chap soon thor. i wait you💖
i like this story. Nope.......I VERY LOVE THIS STORY! i can stopping read this. Because the plot make me coriously. Next thor, i always wait the next chap.
Hoo, Luna receive the unexpected accident. But because it she meet her love. this story is very amazing. i wait you up next chap thor. Love you❣
I am totally surprised by the first chapter of the story. The author really got me since I thought that she'll change the storyline but after read the second chapter I was convinced that she doesn't change the storyline but adding some lovey dovey scene. Man.... I do love the original story about this novel and read this back in english version makes everything better. I do smile when I read this for a long time
Romantic and hot. really like this story. I immediately put it into the library. I hope you guys like it too. [img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Hi guys, I hope you like and want to read my first work in the English version. If you wish, please support and post this story in your library. Thank you ❤️❤️
Amazing 👍👍👍😘😘😘😍😍😍💗💗💗💖💖💖💕💕💕 love this book 💛💛💛🧡🧡🧡💚💚💚[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Fantastic story. I like it. the story line makes me smile to myself I enjoyed it [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update] (つ≧▽≦)つ
wow amazing. The plot very interesting. Make me ''woah' The characters are very hot[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
the story is very interesting.. Recomended to you. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
A novel tells about a marriage without love, and ends with the love come. The plot of the story is simple and light but it can make happy. The writer describe the feeling softly without any burden to the main character and also the reader. This novel is good to be read....👍😀
it is like listening to a romantic love song. It is very sweet and makes the readers baper. or a little jealous and hurt seeing the intimacy of the couple in this novel. love comes from being used to it
Spoiler de révélation The secret love between two young people who love each other but are not disgusted in confession, is something that hurts and hurts to the point of hurting one's own feelings. But love comes out of habit. bear in mind that
Spoiler de révélation wow.. first impress, i Saw a hot cover. burning prolog, and others... really looking forward to the continuation. whether to like the cover and opening chapter. You make me hot and cold!
The struggle life of Luna, became very complicated when she was involved with her ex lover. you must have too, right? I also hate ex-viyfr who didn't move on! I wonder how She acted for her ex
Reading the first chapter, it can make me imagine far. they are such a lovely couple and they are my favorite characters. greetings of love to the author
Reading the first chapter, it can make me imagine far. Ethan and Luna are such a lovely couple and they are my favorite characters. greetings of love to the author ,❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
uwuuu, this is the best story that I have ever readdd~ I really fall in love with this storyy😭❤️❤️❤️❤️ I LOVE YOU AUTHORR!![img=update][img=update][img=update]
This story is very good. The author brings this story flowing beautifully. Always passionate to continue the next chapter. I wait. g[img=update]
the original story' Made me want read the other version, i wish we have some different sweet scenes here.. but everything, all of this story' really good to enjoy
let's enjoy this new welcoming stroy line.. hot and romantic, full of chemistry and complicated.. how Edward made scene of her brother and sister in law.. this is such a hadache for us as a reader
incredibl, surprised me at the start! this is a good story ', very recommended, the plot, the main character, the problematika, everything Made me as a reader is really curious
It's a great story, the started from wrong room that ended up being true love. Anyway, I love this story so much, I really recommend this novel[img=recommend][img=recommend]
The story is very good. His romance is wrapped in neat conflict. Very makes us curious to continue reading the next chap. I still wait the next chap.
I immediately put this story into my library. The story is very good, and makes us get carried away in it. So, you must update next chap soon thor. i wait you💖
i like this story. Nope.......I VERY LOVE THIS STORY! i can stopping read this. Because the plot make me coriously. Next thor, i always wait the next chap.
Hoo, Luna receive the unexpected accident. But because it she meet her love. this story is very amazing. i wait you up next chap thor. Love you❣
I am totally surprised by the first chapter of the story. The author really got me since I thought that she'll change the storyline but after read the second chapter I was convinced that she doesn't change the storyline but adding some lovey dovey scene. Man.... I do love the original story about this novel and read this back in english version makes everything better. I do smile when I read this for a long time
Romantic and hot. really like this story. I immediately put it into the library. I hope you guys like it too. [img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Hi guys, I hope you like and want to read my first work in the English version. If you wish, please support and post this story in your library. Thank you ❤️❤️
Amazing 👍👍👍😘😘😘😍😍😍💗💗💗💖💖💖💕💕💕 love this book 💛💛💛🧡🧡🧡💚💚💚[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]