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Many seem to dislike this book because it follows the story it was based on. i dont really get that as personaly i am enjoying it greatly. the author is getting a lot of hate but this book is amazing. i highly recommend reading it. it has good character with even better writing and grammer. the world background is already set by a popular book so you can really ask much there. My only problem with the book is it leaves me wanting more chapters when there is none left.
i love this story!!!!!! don't drop it pls!!! ............................................................................................................
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This story really deserves 5 star rating. Story is currently among the best on the platform. Writing quality is also really good with no grammatical errors. Characters also are nicely introduced with a good background. Updating stability is also great as of now. If you want to read a FF this is one of them.
It's good! Keep up the good work! Although I would like for the Kindred to actually send some people to death like the sick ones or old ones...
I'm really enjoying it, keep it up, the story, writing, world scene etc. are very good, looking forward to future updates! (I love kindred, I never played with her, but kindred's story and design are my favorites in LOL)
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I love this story its really nicely writen and the story is nice and I like it that Lamp and wolf act like they should. Its really rare to find a good League of Legends fic.Nice work! And please continue this Story its a really nice read.
I loved this fanfic. Even if it follows the plot of the original linearly, it is not in a boring way but very interesting and there is still a lot of space for the author to start developing a separate path for the MC. I loved the fact that the mc was Kindred, but I think the author is being too faithful to the Game as to Kindred's skills. I don't know much about LoL's lore but I'm sure that many champions are nerfed in rift summoners, or beings like Aurelion Sol would crush Caitlyn, Jinx, Garen and etc. as if they were nothing. As Kindred is a powerful and ancient spirit I think it would make sense for her to have some spiritual skills related to death.
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A really good fanfiction. A random guy is reincarnated(?) into Kindred from LOL who is then isekai'd as the bow hero from the rising of the shield hero. MC was a dude but now is lamb. MC just informs Naofumi of common shit like how the kingdom is a matriarchy and stuff, and doesn't baby feed him like a certain other novel. It's really unique, I don't give a flying **** if MC isn't building a yuri harem, or if there's no romance in the novel at all. Fuck those guys that spam "is it a huge harem?" "is it a huge harem?" "is it a huge harem?" "is it a huge harem?" "is it a huge harem?" "is it a huge harem?" "is it a huge harem?" Like a thousand times. The story is fine, but it could use more MC than Naofumi, for example the MC using their knowledge on the world for their own benefit. I don't care about how canon went down or anything, I am not sure if I want MC to have additional party members besides wolf. If you do add party members, they should be blank slates, like pretty much Firo or Raphtalia were, just a bunch of no-knowledge noobs. I dislike everything about Motoyasu so please torture him or some shit later on if you have the time. I don't particularly like Naofumi as well, but don't fucking help him too much.
this is one of the hidden gems that are crazy good so plz update more often ....................................................................................................................................
I didnt even saw it but i already know it'll be awesome.................................................................................................
good concept I reccomend that kindred should go to different universe hunting villain entity aka the enemy of other protagonist in their specific universe worlds like marvel naruto and others it could be fun
I really like this but please don't add any sort of romance due to the fact that it would ruin the story. GL Author ..................................................................
The story sp far is quite nice. It’s paced out rather well, you don’t linger on one scene for to long. I have to say if you can keep this up ill definetly be sticking around.
this is actually really good its got a interesting plot and is very well written I really hope this continues and dosent get dropped........
Everything looks pretty good right now, and I really like shield hero but there aren't many fanfictions of it so I would appreciate if you continued this. having said that Good luck and have a nice day👍😁
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Many seem to dislike this book because it follows the story it was based on. i dont really get that as personaly i am enjoying it greatly. the author is getting a lot of hate but this book is amazing. i highly recommend reading it. it has good character with even better writing and grammer. the world background is already set by a popular book so you can really ask much there. My only problem with the book is it leaves me wanting more chapters when there is none left.
i love this story!!!!!! don't drop it pls!!! ............................................................................................................
yuri make it yuri . 👭👭👭👭👭👭👭👭👭👭👭👭👭👭👭👭👭👭👭👭👭👭👭👭👭👭👭👭👭👭👭👭👭👭👭👭👭👭👭👭👭😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘
This story really deserves 5 star rating. Story is currently among the best on the platform. Writing quality is also really good with no grammatical errors. Characters also are nicely introduced with a good background. Updating stability is also great as of now. If you want to read a FF this is one of them.
It's good! Keep up the good work! Although I would like for the Kindred to actually send some people to death like the sick ones or old ones...
I'm really enjoying it, keep it up, the story, writing, world scene etc. are very good, looking forward to future updates! (I love kindred, I never played with her, but kindred's story and design are my favorites in LOL)
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I love this story its really nicely writen and the story is nice and I like it that Lamp and wolf act like they should. Its really rare to find a good League of Legends fic.Nice work! And please continue this Story its a really nice read.
I loved this fanfic. Even if it follows the plot of the original linearly, it is not in a boring way but very interesting and there is still a lot of space for the author to start developing a separate path for the MC. I loved the fact that the mc was Kindred, but I think the author is being too faithful to the Game as to Kindred's skills. I don't know much about LoL's lore but I'm sure that many champions are nerfed in rift summoners, or beings like Aurelion Sol would crush Caitlyn, Jinx, Garen and etc. as if they were nothing. As Kindred is a powerful and ancient spirit I think it would make sense for her to have some spiritual skills related to death.
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A really good fanfiction. A random guy is reincarnated(?) into Kindred from LOL who is then isekai'd as the bow hero from the rising of the shield hero. MC was a dude but now is lamb. MC just informs Naofumi of common shit like how the kingdom is a matriarchy and stuff, and doesn't baby feed him like a certain other novel. It's really unique, I don't give a flying **** if MC isn't building a yuri harem, or if there's no romance in the novel at all. Fuck those guys that spam "is it a huge harem?" "is it a huge harem?" "is it a huge harem?" "is it a huge harem?" "is it a huge harem?" "is it a huge harem?" "is it a huge harem?" Like a thousand times. The story is fine, but it could use more MC than Naofumi, for example the MC using their knowledge on the world for their own benefit. I don't care about how canon went down or anything, I am not sure if I want MC to have additional party members besides wolf. If you do add party members, they should be blank slates, like pretty much Firo or Raphtalia were, just a bunch of no-knowledge noobs. I dislike everything about Motoyasu so please torture him or some shit later on if you have the time. I don't particularly like Naofumi as well, but don't fucking help him too much.
this is one of the hidden gems that are crazy good so plz update more often ....................................................................................................................................
I didnt even saw it but i already know it'll be awesome.................................................................................................
good concept I reccomend that kindred should go to different universe hunting villain entity aka the enemy of other protagonist in their specific universe worlds like marvel naruto and others it could be fun
I really like this but please don't add any sort of romance due to the fact that it would ruin the story. GL Author ..................................................................
The story sp far is quite nice. It’s paced out rather well, you don’t linger on one scene for to long. I have to say if you can keep this up ill definetly be sticking around.
this is actually really good its got a interesting plot and is very well written I really hope this continues and dosent get dropped........
Everything looks pretty good right now, and I really like shield hero but there aren't many fanfictions of it so I would appreciate if you continued this. having said that Good luck and have a nice day👍😁
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