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Really good read! Has an interesting premise, just a shame about the lack of chapters
This is a great book I just just wished that it had more chapters. ............................................................................................
I love the authors implementation of the characters and the way the plot had headed, my only hope is that they may continue to write more in the future
THIS IS REALLY NICE. WITH INTERESTING PLOT. I WOULD BE GLAD TO READ MORE. KUDO TO THE AUTHOR..................................................
I love it. excellet writing. good story. Characters stay true to their lore and personality. Different from original yet interesting. Only bad thing is unstable update. Overall good.
I love this fanfiction, I think this is the first time I've enjoyed a story so much. The story manages to be original even though it's fanfiction and isn't rotten with harem or romance. The characters are respected and haven't been changed. I just hope this story is not abandoned because I really like this story. 👍👍👍👍👍💪❤️
This is... Good? Like, actually? It's a supremely strange concept, but I've really enjoyed reading it. I honestly can't think of any flaws this has in particular. I hope for more.
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It is aamazing book and use If the charaters that are in the story and the world development is done well alenough and it is done well of keeping story on track while changing small things to make them involed in it.
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It’s a good story, there are some grammar and math errors but they do not affect the story that much. The story telling and continuity are also good.
Deserves all the praise, takes a old concept lile reincarnation and refreshes it. Taking two different worlds like lol and shield hero and truly expanding on both while not destroying the base story like many other novels likes to do when introducing their mc.
5 stars really, even though the plot is the same as the storyline, you managed to blend kindred in between and make the story far more entertaining than i thought. and i really enjoy the conversations with lamb and wolf, so i really hope that you can continue on with this work. don't drop the novel please.
I found you you thought you could keep your identity a secret but it was I Es simp who found you.!.. .. ........ ................. .........
It one of the best Fan-Fics I have ever read no stupid harem no stupid unlogical overpowered no stupid MC no stupid story you have truly created a masterpiece in my eyes I really hope you don't drop this story and will post more, this story made me truly happy
It has everything i like. I don't have much to say. Hey ! it's just because I'm bad at writing things that's why I've nothing to say and yes I'm talking just for the 140 characters thing
I especially like how it follows the original canon quite closely yet still makes it seem that Kindred has an effect on the world. Overall, a very enjoyable series.
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it good but is this dropped?-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
I like this. Great and well thought out story. Not only that you capture the cannon characters perfectly but this is a great way to well I wanna say ‘promote’ your favorite character Kindred and it is almost ingenious because it’s working. Now I am very tempted to log into League of Legends right now, buy spirit blossom Kindred skin, learn how to be a good jungler, and proceed to put 200 hours into maining Kindred for the next 2 weeks. This is a well made fan-fic. I like where it is going and I implore you to not give up on this.
a good story shame it seems author dropped it, it's not updating any more give it a read if ur bored, it's good. grammar is good pacing is also good MC also doesnt interfere with plot too much and just pops in at the important bits.
Literally amazing. No complaints and I really like how normal the character is. Would like to see more updates. I don't expect to see romance which is fine.
I really wish it would update more often I love how this story is progressing and honestly wish it would update more it is worrying me that it possibly has been dropped
hahahahhahahahahahaha, yes, yet another hidden gem discovered, keep up the good work author really loving kindred and they way they interact with the story line of rising of the shield hero.
Really good read! Has an interesting premise, just a shame about the lack of chapters
This is a great book I just just wished that it had more chapters. ............................................................................................
I love the authors implementation of the characters and the way the plot had headed, my only hope is that they may continue to write more in the future
THIS IS REALLY NICE. WITH INTERESTING PLOT. I WOULD BE GLAD TO READ MORE. KUDO TO THE AUTHOR..................................................
I love it. excellet writing. good story. Characters stay true to their lore and personality. Different from original yet interesting. Only bad thing is unstable update. Overall good.
I love this fanfiction, I think this is the first time I've enjoyed a story so much. The story manages to be original even though it's fanfiction and isn't rotten with harem or romance. The characters are respected and haven't been changed. I just hope this story is not abandoned because I really like this story. 👍👍👍👍👍💪❤️
This is... Good? Like, actually? It's a supremely strange concept, but I've really enjoyed reading it. I honestly can't think of any flaws this has in particular. I hope for more.
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It is aamazing book and use If the charaters that are in the story and the world development is done well alenough and it is done well of keeping story on track while changing small things to make them involed in it.
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It’s a good story, there are some grammar and math errors but they do not affect the story that much. The story telling and continuity are also good.
Deserves all the praise, takes a old concept lile reincarnation and refreshes it. Taking two different worlds like lol and shield hero and truly expanding on both while not destroying the base story like many other novels likes to do when introducing their mc.
5 stars really, even though the plot is the same as the storyline, you managed to blend kindred in between and make the story far more entertaining than i thought. and i really enjoy the conversations with lamb and wolf, so i really hope that you can continue on with this work. don't drop the novel please.
I found you you thought you could keep your identity a secret but it was I Es simp who found you.!.. .. ........ ................. .........
It one of the best Fan-Fics I have ever read no stupid harem no stupid unlogical overpowered no stupid MC no stupid story you have truly created a masterpiece in my eyes I really hope you don't drop this story and will post more, this story made me truly happy
It has everything i like. I don't have much to say. Hey ! it's just because I'm bad at writing things that's why I've nothing to say and yes I'm talking just for the 140 characters thing
I especially like how it follows the original canon quite closely yet still makes it seem that Kindred has an effect on the world. Overall, a very enjoyable series.
Writing Quality................☆☆☆☆☆ Story Development.........☆☆☆☆☆ Charactet Design............☆☆☆☆☆ Updating stability............☆☆☆☆● World Background...........☆☆☆☆●
it good but is this dropped?-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
I like this. Great and well thought out story. Not only that you capture the cannon characters perfectly but this is a great way to well I wanna say ‘promote’ your favorite character Kindred and it is almost ingenious because it’s working. Now I am very tempted to log into League of Legends right now, buy spirit blossom Kindred skin, learn how to be a good jungler, and proceed to put 200 hours into maining Kindred for the next 2 weeks. This is a well made fan-fic. I like where it is going and I implore you to not give up on this.
a good story shame it seems author dropped it, it's not updating any more give it a read if ur bored, it's good. grammar is good pacing is also good MC also doesnt interfere with plot too much and just pops in at the important bits.
Literally amazing. No complaints and I really like how normal the character is. Would like to see more updates. I don't expect to see romance which is fine.
I really wish it would update more often I love how this story is progressing and honestly wish it would update more it is worrying me that it possibly has been dropped
hahahahhahahahahahaha, yes, yet another hidden gem discovered, keep up the good work author really loving kindred and they way they interact with the story line of rising of the shield hero.
I miss this story...