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I really like the story and the characters (Love azzy and claire) but no matter how I think but reaching the end of this novel will be a challenge for the author. There are so many possibilities that it's complicated to see in which direction the novel will go (Ps I still have my little idea) In any case congratulations to the author for his work and can't wait to see the rest . is There a discord? And sorry for my bad english.
Hello, this is Author's review at Ch 432. There have been a few changes from how I wanted the novel to be when I started writing it, 18 months ago. If you are okay with spoilers, you can continue to read. These are the few things the readers can expect from Vol. 6. 1) MC will stay as OP as ever 2) MC finally moves from a good and naive fellow to a grey character, although his actions lean toward lesser evil from time to time, at least if seen through the lens of a third party. 3) MC gets back to his original timeline at Ch 421. 4) No Harem but cannot promise that he will stick to one girl until the end. It depends entirely on the flow of the story. 5) He will constantly make time travel to the past and the future, all over the novel, but they will be short trips, not like the one that dragged until Vol 5. 6) The gods from Greek mythology, Angels, Elves, and gods or characters from other mythologies will also make their appearance. However, please treat them like Marvel or DC characters. 7) Tournaments lasted quite long until now. In future chapters, even if there are any tournaments, I'll try my best to increase the chapter length on battles and lessen the number of chapters instead. 8) For those who have yet to start, I remind you that characters in the novel can live for hundreds or thousands of years. So, the earlier 1000-year headstart doesn't mean that MC is dead. He is only missing. 9) As for when we will get to Year 3015 when the story starts in the first chapter, it can only depend on the flow of the story. I, the author has no draft prepared beforehand. I just write the chapter on a daily basis and upload it on the same day. 10) Time Traveling is still a fictional concept to mankind. So, I don't need to follow the same rules displayed in some popular novels, tv series, or movies with time travel. Please be understanding even if the author's logic doesn't make sense to you. 11) Last but not least, I use English as a third language and I don't have any editor or translator. If there are mistakes in grammar, please correct me through paragraph comments. * Thank you *
Hello, I have started publishing the story I have written for two years. I find your story very successful, like everyone else. Therefore, I was going to ask you if you could review my story and tell me your comments My Novel Duorbis: Collision of worlds
The story was nice up until the 27 years in the past part. Also if Azzy (I totally didn't forget the spelling of his actual name) is the heir of the clan then why wasn't he getting better training for the first 3 years?
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I don't mean to criticize author but it's my third time I picked this book to read but dropped on first chapter where mentioned 1000 years ago means hero's clan dead hero gone and we get generalised ending here and my mood to down and i dropped book . life already had many complications don't want to think more in my leisure too
Very good work author!......................................................................................................................
I would like to appriciate the author work. There are a little bit mistakes here and there but considering that authors native language is not english so it is understandable but the thing which is bad is that you are displaying story of the angel 'Azrael'. You see, this is the thing that is not good here. If your novel become popular (it would most likely happen, i hope so) then there will be more haters than your lovers(fans) so if you like to hear my suggestion than i'll very pleased which is that you change the name of mc, story can go on as it is. I know it will be hard considering the chapters than it would simply be a masterpiece
4.2 Atfirst i really liked the story but after reading a few comments i started questioning some parts of the story and realized it had quite a few mistakes. Even then its was still pretty nice. I like it when people change up things, in this case mc went to the past. Keep up the good work
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Very good novel, not the greatest translation still reasonable. However very let down with Azrael being Azzy/Rael half the time also hate the romance with him and Claire. Honestly think its better to kill her off because the entire thing is trash even getting together was stupid.
Not bad, not that great either. The mc tho, haha. child be like that. exp. exp. exp. exp. exp. exp. exp. exp. exp. exp. exp. exp. exp. exp. exp. exp.
in all honesty I expected more from this novel. author is decently skilled in writing so reading chapter after chapter is a pleasure but. And here comes problems, MC is a kid, so he is inexperienced, lacking a skill to handle both fighting situations and daily decisions, which won't be a problem if not for a slow progress. he is overly reliant on his Arcana, which is a source of power unique for every awakened person and since the stronger Arcana the more intelligent it is, he is just played by it like a full and beeing manipulated. that's a main reason why I dropped this novel, this and idea of time travel which honestly was introduced too early into a story and created a massive mess. So basically is hard to enjoy reading about this puppet like MC. For a plus, side character are nicely written and they ve got a decent amount of time, but they just can't carry thus story alone.
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Decided to read a bit since it was rated so high. I was an idiot to fall for it again. As bad as the writing style and dialogues can be(are), the translation quality of the novels here just leaves me slack jawed and in awe of how the site can keep on putting up novels of such 'amazing' quality.
This a rare gem. The story concept while familiar finds it's self being unique not just in concept, but in story telling What other story sends you in past before building into the future.
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I absolutely love this book. I'm not all caught up yet but I've got the majority of it read so far. I love how the author set up everything plus how he explains the powers in this. it's a unique style I feel. also the MC is just great. I feel he knows what he wants and does whatever he can to accomplish this. Keep up the great work author!!!
This is all auto text from my phone. Xp. I’m not gonna go back yet I have a lot to go on but I’m still in the hospital with a bad migraine so I’m sick of my head hurts and I feel like I don’t know if I’ll get a hold on my bed too bad but I’m still sick of my bed too tired to go
This is nice to read, quite logical and a great mc ;). Nice world backgrounds and other things too. Keep it up author! with the novel :)[img=recommend]
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I'm still a chapter 11, yet i already know this book will undoubtedly be one of the best. I really hope the author will continue this book. keep up the good work dear author
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I really like the story and the characters (Love azzy and claire) but no matter how I think but reaching the end of this novel will be a challenge for the author. There are so many possibilities that it's complicated to see in which direction the novel will go (Ps I still have my little idea) In any case congratulations to the author for his work and can't wait to see the rest . is There a discord? And sorry for my bad english.
Hello, this is Author's review at Ch 432. There have been a few changes from how I wanted the novel to be when I started writing it, 18 months ago. If you are okay with spoilers, you can continue to read. These are the few things the readers can expect from Vol. 6. 1) MC will stay as OP as ever 2) MC finally moves from a good and naive fellow to a grey character, although his actions lean toward lesser evil from time to time, at least if seen through the lens of a third party. 3) MC gets back to his original timeline at Ch 421. 4) No Harem but cannot promise that he will stick to one girl until the end. It depends entirely on the flow of the story. 5) He will constantly make time travel to the past and the future, all over the novel, but they will be short trips, not like the one that dragged until Vol 5. 6) The gods from Greek mythology, Angels, Elves, and gods or characters from other mythologies will also make their appearance. However, please treat them like Marvel or DC characters. 7) Tournaments lasted quite long until now. In future chapters, even if there are any tournaments, I'll try my best to increase the chapter length on battles and lessen the number of chapters instead. 8) For those who have yet to start, I remind you that characters in the novel can live for hundreds or thousands of years. So, the earlier 1000-year headstart doesn't mean that MC is dead. He is only missing. 9) As for when we will get to Year 3015 when the story starts in the first chapter, it can only depend on the flow of the story. I, the author has no draft prepared beforehand. I just write the chapter on a daily basis and upload it on the same day. 10) Time Traveling is still a fictional concept to mankind. So, I don't need to follow the same rules displayed in some popular novels, tv series, or movies with time travel. Please be understanding even if the author's logic doesn't make sense to you. 11) Last but not least, I use English as a third language and I don't have any editor or translator. If there are mistakes in grammar, please correct me through paragraph comments. * Thank you *
Hello, I have started publishing the story I have written for two years. I find your story very successful, like everyone else. Therefore, I was going to ask you if you could review my story and tell me your comments My Novel Duorbis: Collision of worlds
The story was nice up until the 27 years in the past part. Also if Azzy (I totally didn't forget the spelling of his actual name) is the heir of the clan then why wasn't he getting better training for the first 3 years?
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I don't mean to criticize author but it's my third time I picked this book to read but dropped on first chapter where mentioned 1000 years ago means hero's clan dead hero gone and we get generalised ending here and my mood to down and i dropped book . life already had many complications don't want to think more in my leisure too
Very good work author!......................................................................................................................
I would like to appriciate the author work. There are a little bit mistakes here and there but considering that authors native language is not english so it is understandable but the thing which is bad is that you are displaying story of the angel 'Azrael'. You see, this is the thing that is not good here. If your novel become popular (it would most likely happen, i hope so) then there will be more haters than your lovers(fans) so if you like to hear my suggestion than i'll very pleased which is that you change the name of mc, story can go on as it is. I know it will be hard considering the chapters than it would simply be a masterpiece
4.2 Atfirst i really liked the story but after reading a few comments i started questioning some parts of the story and realized it had quite a few mistakes. Even then its was still pretty nice. I like it when people change up things, in this case mc went to the past. Keep up the good work
Spoiler de révélation Very good novel, not the greatest translation still reasonable. However very let down with Azrael being Azzy/Rael half the time also hate the romance with him and Claire. Honestly think its better to kill her off because the entire thing is trash even getting together was stupid.
Not bad, not that great either. The mc tho, haha. child be like that. exp. exp. exp. exp. exp. exp. exp. exp. exp. exp. exp. exp. exp. exp. exp. exp.
in all honesty I expected more from this novel. author is decently skilled in writing so reading chapter after chapter is a pleasure but. And here comes problems, MC is a kid, so he is inexperienced, lacking a skill to handle both fighting situations and daily decisions, which won't be a problem if not for a slow progress. he is overly reliant on his Arcana, which is a source of power unique for every awakened person and since the stronger Arcana the more intelligent it is, he is just played by it like a full and beeing manipulated. that's a main reason why I dropped this novel, this and idea of time travel which honestly was introduced too early into a story and created a massive mess. So basically is hard to enjoy reading about this puppet like MC. For a plus, side character are nicely written and they ve got a decent amount of time, but they just can't carry thus story alone.
Just for Xp.------------------------- Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading.
Decided to read a bit since it was rated so high. I was an idiot to fall for it again. As bad as the writing style and dialogues can be(are), the translation quality of the novels here just leaves me slack jawed and in awe of how the site can keep on putting up novels of such 'amazing' quality.
This a rare gem. The story concept while familiar finds it's self being unique not just in concept, but in story telling What other story sends you in past before building into the future.
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Spoiler de révélation I absolutely love this book. I'm not all caught up yet but I've got the majority of it read so far. I love how the author set up everything plus how he explains the powers in this. it's a unique style I feel. also the MC is just great. I feel he knows what he wants and does whatever he can to accomplish this. Keep up the great work author!!!
This is all auto text from my phone. Xp. I’m not gonna go back yet I have a lot to go on but I’m still in the hospital with a bad migraine so I’m sick of my head hurts and I feel like I don’t know if I’ll get a hold on my bed too bad but I’m still sick of my bed too tired to go
This is nice to read, quite logical and a great mc ;). Nice world backgrounds and other things too. Keep it up author! with the novel :)[img=recommend]
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I'm still a chapter 11, yet i already know this book will undoubtedly be one of the best. I really hope the author will continue this book. keep up the good work dear author
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