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I like the idea of the novel. At first, it appeared like it was similar to soul land but the concept of time travel changed it. Author claimed MC was dark but so far he's good. Let's hope MC will change soon enough.
Nice novel to read. I like the world development and the character design of the MC. But as it should be a dark novel in my opinion it will take some time for our MC to evolve and is still very very naive. I dont know but i think there is no darkness at all in the MC. Maybe he will after some major incident in the near future. Looking forward for new good changes in our MC.
Gettin' kinda "stir-crazy, " you heard this I wonder what the meaning of "lazy" or life without work is Kawaii shinigami at your service Mark your enemies, and I'll show them what hurt is! Merciless, but what else should I be? Sudden nice-guy gap, but that's honesty A blood price to be paid, but I promise, it's worth this On-demand-homicidal-circus! All ya really gotta do is sign on the dotted line It's probably fine, right? Sike! Your soul is mine It's all good, being a Dead Beat's got benefits We'll be "best friends, " that's the end of it Then I get a rush of adrenaline, I think I like you! Wanna feel my five-foot scythe inside you I would die for you!!! And that adorable scream Curious, would you die for me?
The story is interesting at the start and I enjoy it. Has original concepts like rewinding time so that he can walk on the different gravity staircase. Overall would recommended if you like this genre
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THİS NOVEL İS SO GOOD. hmm i dont like unemotional mc's but i like that mc because. he is emotional but cant show it. 1 i think mc needs a rival equal to him(rival should be same age as mc)(he can be like son of life or something like that ahadshahahahha) 2 İ think you should not give superabundant powers to mc You may find it difficult to control. 3 AND MOST İMPORTANT PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE describe characters. i cant remember the character you introduced to me 100 chapters ago 4 and i think you act like we can see what you dreamed of when you writing. you should describe places to us 5 dont missunderstand me this is one of best novels i have ever read so i dont want it go bad. i just write what i want to see. AND MOST İMPORTANT THİNG İ LOVE YOU PLEASE PLEASE MOST CHAPTERS(SORRY FOR BAD ENGLAND)
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Great Novel, Just keep pumping out these updates. There are few spelling mistakes here and there but that's not a major issue, This novel is recommended.
Truly a hidden gem. world background is really interesting and characters are all unique in their own way. thanks a lot author[img=update][img=recommend]
thanks for the novel ☺️ [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
just a very a very good book amazing concept and all that. would recommend. ___________________________________________________________________
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This is a very great series. The world building is fantastic, the characters pretty memorable, and the Op Mc is restrained within reason to allow for actual plot to develop. The world itself is also very interesting. However, the grammar is a bit awkward at times, and it seems sometimes there is a word missing. The person writing doesn't seem to have an editor to catch these small mistakes, but barring that, the story overall is great.
There are some typos, the world's setting is fascinating but a little confusing due to how its explained and the characters seem to rely on a lot of tropes. BUT the story, the plot, PHENOMENAL. Very interesting, really well developed, excellent pacing. I love it and can't woat for more.
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I am really enjoying reading this. The setting is really interesting to me because for some reason I thought it was medieval, but it's not it's modern.
I really like the idea of this book and hope it does well Sjsjjsnsnsnsmmsmdms dmsmmdnd dndndnndndndndnndndmdmmdmdmdmmdmdmdmdmmdmdmdmdmdmmdmdmd
Love the novel but it went premium too soon. Anyways, best of luck to author....,............. ............,..............................................
I like the idea of the novel. At first, it appeared like it was similar to soul land but the concept of time travel changed it. Author claimed MC was dark but so far he's good. Let's hope MC will change soon enough.
Nice novel to read. I like the world development and the character design of the MC. But as it should be a dark novel in my opinion it will take some time for our MC to evolve and is still very very naive. I dont know but i think there is no darkness at all in the MC. Maybe he will after some major incident in the near future. Looking forward for new good changes in our MC.
Gettin' kinda "stir-crazy, " you heard this I wonder what the meaning of "lazy" or life without work is Kawaii shinigami at your service Mark your enemies, and I'll show them what hurt is! Merciless, but what else should I be? Sudden nice-guy gap, but that's honesty A blood price to be paid, but I promise, it's worth this On-demand-homicidal-circus! All ya really gotta do is sign on the dotted line It's probably fine, right? Sike! Your soul is mine It's all good, being a Dead Beat's got benefits We'll be "best friends, " that's the end of it Then I get a rush of adrenaline, I think I like you! Wanna feel my five-foot scythe inside you I would die for you!!! And that adorable scream Curious, would you die for me?
The story is interesting at the start and I enjoy it. Has original concepts like rewinding time so that he can walk on the different gravity staircase. Overall would recommended if you like this genre
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THİS NOVEL İS SO GOOD. hmm i dont like unemotional mc's but i like that mc because. he is emotional but cant show it. 1 i think mc needs a rival equal to him(rival should be same age as mc)(he can be like son of life or something like that ahadshahahahha) 2 İ think you should not give superabundant powers to mc You may find it difficult to control. 3 AND MOST İMPORTANT PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE describe characters. i cant remember the character you introduced to me 100 chapters ago 4 and i think you act like we can see what you dreamed of when you writing. you should describe places to us 5 dont missunderstand me this is one of best novels i have ever read so i dont want it go bad. i just write what i want to see. AND MOST İMPORTANT THİNG İ LOVE YOU PLEASE PLEASE MOST CHAPTERS(SORRY FOR BAD ENGLAND)
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Great Novel, Just keep pumping out these updates. There are few spelling mistakes here and there but that's not a major issue, This novel is recommended.
Truly a hidden gem. world background is really interesting and characters are all unique in their own way. thanks a lot author[img=update][img=recommend]
thanks for the novel ☺️ [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
just a very a very good book amazing concept and all that. would recommend. ___________________________________________________________________
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This is a very great series. The world building is fantastic, the characters pretty memorable, and the Op Mc is restrained within reason to allow for actual plot to develop. The world itself is also very interesting. However, the grammar is a bit awkward at times, and it seems sometimes there is a word missing. The person writing doesn't seem to have an editor to catch these small mistakes, but barring that, the story overall is great.
There are some typos, the world's setting is fascinating but a little confusing due to how its explained and the characters seem to rely on a lot of tropes. BUT the story, the plot, PHENOMENAL. Very interesting, really well developed, excellent pacing. I love it and can't woat for more.
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I am really enjoying reading this. The setting is really interesting to me because for some reason I thought it was medieval, but it's not it's modern.
I really like the idea of this book and hope it does well Sjsjjsnsnsnsmmsmdms dmsmmdnd dndndnndndndndnndndmdmmdmdmdmmdmdmdmdmmdmdmdmdmdmmdmdmd
Love the novel but it went premium too soon. Anyways, best of luck to author....,............. ............,..............................................