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you give home all this stuff for his wishes and then give him more stuff just so he cant use it you basically nerfed him and writing the same story
I like it author so keep up............. 140114040140114040140114040140114040140114040140114040 140114040 140114040 140114040
This novel is kind of a late bloomer. The story follows same as the original with some minor changes until the Raiser arc but after that everything changes. Author just put something into it that will create a hype. The story gets better after the chapter 35. So u want to wait for it. Or you could just simply skip and read from chapter 35. that is good as well. Grammer is good. Writing quality is good. Overall it a good Fan-fic, at least for me.
So here's the thing, MC reincarnates as Issei and gets the Sharingan(+ every mangekyo ability, and can evolve to rinnegan), Yamato(DMC), and Gate of Babylon(it's called [Arsenal of Gods] but it's pretty much the GoB), sounds good right?.... Well, no, it actually isn't. Despite having a fundamentally different MC, with more power at his beck and call, the story follows canon as strictly as Grayfia takes her maid role. Also, the MC is a major simp for Rias, like holy hell, he just goes stupid whenever Rias so much as crosses his mind. Tl;dr: this is just a rehash of canon, while the level headed Issei and his various cheats, are nothing more than paraphernalia to attract readers.
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The MC gets powers and is able to train them for a little over a decade and is still weak as ****. This story painfully follows cannon so much so that it feels unnatural.
this is basically a copy paste of the original story whit little bit add on to it it could have been good whit the set up but mc just actes sa original one instead of being proactive and its beter to read the original story then this one mc hes good potential that is not used at all author should start over and mack the mc better by making them more assertive if he knows the plot he should prepare and be stronger then originale and use sharingan to try to use magic by observing himself use the intellect of lelouch and light and not being so weak willed or so ok whit being a slave when he knows that risa hes tricky the original by letting him die so she can have another member of her prestige to help her break marriage contract with riser the story is a disappointment i dropped it after 20ch because i just felt the story fell short of my expectations of the good set up and so close in likeness to the original story P.S sorry for any spelling errors
Good novel. Regular updates. Good grammer. Overall quite decent novel. Has many Slice of Life moments. The Fan-fic sticks to the original plot. Action scenes are quite good and easy to understand. Good novel.
Author promoting his own artwork. The pace of novel is slow. It has lots of slice of life moments like everyday life, some family moments. Novel will follow original plot most of the time with some minor changes in beginning of series and might be some major changes due to butterfly effect as the story progresses. Try few chapter. Liked it then add to library.
This is the best fanfic of dxd I ever read that does not change to much of the actual plot. The story is just like in the anime. But if I have to add something is that can you make the mc body grow stronger through mana/chakra or any other type of energy by enhancing his body since I can only picture BB by having a strong body
Story development is pretty average since this story is basically the same as the original, but Issei being more intelligent and more powerful with the wishes he gets, and less lustful than the original. His ‘goal’ or ‘dream’ or whatever you want to call it is a bit unrealistic, wanting to protect Rias’ smile but the author at least has a goal, unlike many others’ mindless and goalless adventure and action fanfics. Writing Quality is good, with minimal grammar mistakes and smooth sentence structure, making it readable and easy to understand what the author is trying to convey. Updating stability is okay, not too slow (for now) but not very fast either. What can I say about character design? This is a fanfic and the characters have similar personalities as their original. From what I noticed, Asia just seems to be a bit less airheaded than usual, and she jnows how the world actually works, but still a ditz and slight airhead, Rias is less spoiled, but still asks her servants to fight for her. Story development...this is a highschool DxD fanfic so what can we expect, it’s the exact same way the original develop, so unless author introduces an original plot that is trash, this section will remain 5 stars.
The writing quality is good. The grammer is mostly correct. The action scenes are not cringed and are well written. Looking forward to next chapter. Hope you keep up the good work and continue to novel
Personally I am liking this story. This is a Fan-fic so it's upto Author on what to write and what not. Besides stop complaining you aren't paying him to write. So it's a good Fan-fic I would recommend it. It's not overpowered but it has lots of potential.
the story is almost the same as the original one, I stopped. what good is their intelligence if not used. in the end he was just a slave..................................................................................
Really like the new Issei. Keep it up Author-sama. Just don´t make him to cringey. JOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
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The story is good, it is sticking to the main plot so far and there are some slice of life moments also there is decent amount of fan service. Let's see how the action scenes will be. Good Luck! Author-san
The story development is ho so far. the upload speed is decent and the chapters are good. let's see what twist we have in future, upto now it just seems that the author is writing a prologue. let's see.
This is the worst fanfic I've seen, it would be sensible if he didn't know the plot of dxd or if he didn't have yagami lights intelligence, there is little to no difference from the original story except the MC is slightly more powerful, this fanfic is honestly trash , no offense it just looks like u copied and pasted the light novel then just started adding modifications to it
you give home all this stuff for his wishes and then give him more stuff just so he cant use it you basically nerfed him and writing the same story
I like it author so keep up............. 140114040140114040140114040140114040140114040140114040 140114040 140114040 140114040
This novel is kind of a late bloomer. The story follows same as the original with some minor changes until the Raiser arc but after that everything changes. Author just put something into it that will create a hype. The story gets better after the chapter 35. So u want to wait for it. Or you could just simply skip and read from chapter 35. that is good as well. Grammer is good. Writing quality is good. Overall it a good Fan-fic, at least for me.
So here's the thing, MC reincarnates as Issei and gets the Sharingan(+ every mangekyo ability, and can evolve to rinnegan), Yamato(DMC), and Gate of Babylon(it's called [Arsenal of Gods] but it's pretty much the GoB), sounds good right?.... Well, no, it actually isn't. Despite having a fundamentally different MC, with more power at his beck and call, the story follows canon as strictly as Grayfia takes her maid role. Also, the MC is a major simp for Rias, like holy hell, he just goes stupid whenever Rias so much as crosses his mind. Tl;dr: this is just a rehash of canon, while the level headed Issei and his various cheats, are nothing more than paraphernalia to attract readers.
Spoiler de révélation The MC gets powers and is able to train them for a little over a decade and is still weak as ****. This story painfully follows cannon so much so that it feels unnatural.
this is basically a copy paste of the original story whit little bit add on to it it could have been good whit the set up but mc just actes sa original one instead of being proactive and its beter to read the original story then this one mc hes good potential that is not used at all author should start over and mack the mc better by making them more assertive if he knows the plot he should prepare and be stronger then originale and use sharingan to try to use magic by observing himself use the intellect of lelouch and light and not being so weak willed or so ok whit being a slave when he knows that risa hes tricky the original by letting him die so she can have another member of her prestige to help her break marriage contract with riser the story is a disappointment i dropped it after 20ch because i just felt the story fell short of my expectations of the good set up and so close in likeness to the original story P.S sorry for any spelling errors
Good novel. Regular updates. Good grammer. Overall quite decent novel. Has many Slice of Life moments. The Fan-fic sticks to the original plot. Action scenes are quite good and easy to understand. Good novel.
Author promoting his own artwork. The pace of novel is slow. It has lots of slice of life moments like everyday life, some family moments. Novel will follow original plot most of the time with some minor changes in beginning of series and might be some major changes due to butterfly effect as the story progresses. Try few chapter. Liked it then add to library.
This is the best fanfic of dxd I ever read that does not change to much of the actual plot. The story is just like in the anime. But if I have to add something is that can you make the mc body grow stronger through mana/chakra or any other type of energy by enhancing his body since I can only picture BB by having a strong body
Story development is pretty average since this story is basically the same as the original, but Issei being more intelligent and more powerful with the wishes he gets, and less lustful than the original. His ‘goal’ or ‘dream’ or whatever you want to call it is a bit unrealistic, wanting to protect Rias’ smile but the author at least has a goal, unlike many others’ mindless and goalless adventure and action fanfics. Writing Quality is good, with minimal grammar mistakes and smooth sentence structure, making it readable and easy to understand what the author is trying to convey. Updating stability is okay, not too slow (for now) but not very fast either. What can I say about character design? This is a fanfic and the characters have similar personalities as their original. From what I noticed, Asia just seems to be a bit less airheaded than usual, and she jnows how the world actually works, but still a ditz and slight airhead, Rias is less spoiled, but still asks her servants to fight for her. Story development...this is a highschool DxD fanfic so what can we expect, it’s the exact same way the original develop, so unless author introduces an original plot that is trash, this section will remain 5 stars.
The writing quality is good. The grammer is mostly correct. The action scenes are not cringed and are well written. Looking forward to next chapter. Hope you keep up the good work and continue to novel
Personally I am liking this story. This is a Fan-fic so it's upto Author on what to write and what not. Besides stop complaining you aren't paying him to write. So it's a good Fan-fic I would recommend it. It's not overpowered but it has lots of potential.
the story is almost the same as the original one, I stopped. what good is their intelligence if not used. in the end he was just a slave..................................................................................
Really like the new Issei. Keep it up Author-sama. Just don´t make him to cringey. JOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
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The story is good, it is sticking to the main plot so far and there are some slice of life moments also there is decent amount of fan service. Let's see how the action scenes will be. Good Luck! Author-san
The story development is ho so far. the upload speed is decent and the chapters are good. let's see what twist we have in future, upto now it just seems that the author is writing a prologue. let's see.
This is the worst fanfic I've seen, it would be sensible if he didn't know the plot of dxd or if he didn't have yagami lights intelligence, there is little to no difference from the original story except the MC is slightly more powerful, this fanfic is honestly trash , no offense it just looks like u copied and pasted the light novel then just started adding modifications to it