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Hello i am sorry if it’s upsetting that this book has not been continued, i am friends with the writer and he said that he personally didn’t like this story so he wanted To make something that people, including himself, would injoy just as much and would make people think what’s going to happen next and so forth. thank you so much for all reading this story and we hope that you could continue reading his works. 😀🙂🧐🤩😎
Why are the chapters deleted???.. . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . .
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So this is what I think, as the author of the book, in order. My writing is pretty good considering I'm quite young, but definitely not experienced, and that's why I'm writing. There isn't much of a story because this was just an idea I had, and plot holes might come later. Character design is meh, just made 3 chapters dedicated to it. I try and post a chapter daily, if it's longer, I either got stuck, or I had an IRL problem. And finally, there's not much of a work background because it's the multiverse, but I think I have a plan for getting back his home world, and slowly developing it and his emotions.
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Hey dude I really think that you should put more descriptions like what was his neighbourhood like, did he have friends or a social life? 🤨🧐 But other than that, I can’t wait for the next chapters!😃😁
Once again we see the brilliance of the author through his novel, although it's only 12 chapters, don't be fooled, the chapters are thorough and can be compared to the likes of LOTR and Game of Thrones, A true genius author has appeared in the world of novels.
Hello i am sorry if it’s upsetting that this book has not been continued, i am friends with the writer and he said that he personally didn’t like this story so he wanted To make something that people, including himself, would injoy just as much and would make people think what’s going to happen next and so forth. thank you so much for all reading this story and we hope that you could continue reading his works. 😀🙂🧐🤩😎
Why are the chapters deleted???.. . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . .
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So this is what I think, as the author of the book, in order. My writing is pretty good considering I'm quite young, but definitely not experienced, and that's why I'm writing. There isn't much of a story because this was just an idea I had, and plot holes might come later. Character design is meh, just made 3 chapters dedicated to it. I try and post a chapter daily, if it's longer, I either got stuck, or I had an IRL problem. And finally, there's not much of a work background because it's the multiverse, but I think I have a plan for getting back his home world, and slowly developing it and his emotions.
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Hey dude I really think that you should put more descriptions like what was his neighbourhood like, did he have friends or a social life? 🤨🧐 But other than that, I can’t wait for the next chapters!😃😁
Once again we see the brilliance of the author through his novel, although it's only 12 chapters, don't be fooled, the chapters are thorough and can be compared to the likes of LOTR and Game of Thrones, A true genius author has appeared in the world of novels.