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This story is totally my type. And I know what it's based on. Your other doulou dalu story wasn't mine cause I never found interest in Jade Empereor. But it was also good. Keep up the good work because I need more.
I don't know if this will make a difference in update speed, but really liked your fic, I just bing read it whole. I love the extra aspects of the system, those beyond stats and skills, the humor present and the easy going and innate swag the MC has. Please update soon!
I loved your other fanfic so you can consider this one as your brain dead fan.(~‾▿‾)~(~‾▿‾)~(~‾▿‾)~〜(꒪꒳꒪)〜〜(꒪꒳꒪)〜〜(꒪꒳꒪)〜(~‾▿‾)~(~‾▿‾)~(~‾▿‾)~
One of the best dulou dalu fanfic. 👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯
Honest Opinion ; If you have read his other novel ,you know this fic is going to be gold.This author is one of the top 5 fanfic authors for me right along with sir Lucifer morningstar. In this fic you can expect good character development,badassmc,faceslapping, good world building,a awesome romance and one true love. The things you should not expect are maybe harem,Stupid MC,Coward MC,irrational power up , Fanboy MC. I can definitely say this is going to be one of the ,if not the best soul land fic expecting from his other novel which is sadly dropped. Definitely good to read!!!!!
I'd like a harem spoiler list, please. How much? Three power stones? Here! Nice story by the way. Good luck with the story! ~~~ .................................................................................................................................................
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Loving the story.🤩😙😛🥰😛🤣😆🙂🤩😚😚🤫🤑🤔🤨😈👽🤔😚🤗🤫😝🤫🤥😛🤒😝😋😚😑😏🤥😒😬😛😝😒🤨🤤😬😑🤬🥶🧐🤠🤓🙁🥴😔🥴🤪☺😚😥🙁😳😦🤮🥶🥶🤠🤓☹🤢🧐🥱😩🥱😢😥😱😠😖🤬😱👹😤
MC is a Coward and Reject Beauty, he let Yan has his way with Hu Liena evn though he's far stronger than yan. After she's preg nant will he pursue her. Dude, just plan something to be done in the dark, not avoid the problem like this. I don't have a hobby reading a story where mc let girls interested in mc be ignored and he goes on a lonely path so I Drop this. Good luck if you still want to read this piece of ... manmade gold.
I haven't really read this but because the author's other soul land fanfic is great although sadly its dropped I guess this will be a masterpiece like the other one so yeah and also about the harem thing I think it would be best if its just three girls so yeah good luck author and me I guess?
Pretty good story so far has great potential but will the story stay with the totorial to the end and if it doesnt how hard is the main game
I'm glad he is out of the tutorial. I hope its is used sparingly in order to give the MC the advantage that previous life training gave Tang san.
This story really promises to be very interesting, since our MC started not somewhere, but in the hall of spirits. This place is directly the main enemy of history and, as you can see, our hero managed to make friends with one of the main students of the Hall of Spirits. It will be interesting to see how the author will implement the idea of the harem if the MC stays in the hall of spirits and does not face Shrek's monsters. Good luck writing and all the best to the author!
in all honesty you are one of the best fan fiction about soul land gooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood
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At first I didn't have many expectations of this story, I hate gamer fanfic, but I gave it a chance, you did so well in your other story, so I thought it wouldn't be different in this one. I was right, this story is as good as the other one, maybe even better. The problem with your other story is that the MC has it all easy, he doesn't have to try and he always wins. My only advice is not to make the MC be Op, at least not too soon. Thanks for the chapters
Before the existence of spirit souls, there weren’t any ranks for spiritual power at all. But when spirit souls first appeared, the previous generations gradually realized that fusing with a spirit soul required much more spiritual power than fusing with a spirit ring. After extensive research, they created the rankings for spiritual power. It was only in the last two thousand years or so that the rankings were completed
I'm a fan of Soul Land and I've seen many fanfictions here about it, but yours is the first one that I have started and been unable to stop until there were no more chapters left. Can't wait for more.
I have faith in you and even thought there are only 5 chapters it already looks really promising.
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꠸ ꪖꪑ ꪻꫝꫀ ꫀ᥊ρ ꪮᠻ ꪑꪗ ᠻ꠸ꪀᧁꫀ᥅. ᭙ꫀ᥇ꪀꪮꪜꫀꪶ ꠸ᦓ ꪑꪗ ᥇ꪮᦔꪗ, ꪖꪀᦔ ꫀ᥊ρ ꠸ᦓ ꪑꪗ ᥇ꪶꪮꪮᦔ. ꠸ ꫝꪖꪜꫀ ᥴ᥅ꫀꪖꪻꫀᦔ ꪮꪜꫀ᥅ ꪖ ꪻꫝꪮꪊᦓꪖꪀᦔ ꪊᦓꫀꪶꫀᦓᦓ ᥅ꫀꪜ꠸ꫀ᭙ᦓ. ꫝꪖꪜꫀ ᭙꠸ꪻꫝᦓꪻꪮꪮᦔ ρꪖ꠸ꪀ ꪻꪮ ᥴ᥅ꫀꪖꪻꫀ ꪑꪖꪀꪗ ᥅ꫀꪜ꠸ꫀ᭙ᦓ. ꪗꫀꪻ, ꪻꫝꪮᦓꫀ ᥅ꫀꪜ꠸ꫀ᭙ᦓ ᭙꠸ꪶꪶ ꪀꫀꪜꫀ᥅ ꫝꪮꪶᦔ ꪖꪀꪗꪻꫝ꠸ꪀᧁ. ᦓꪮ, ꪖᦓ ꠸ ρ᥅ꪖꪗ...... ꪊꪀꪶ꠸ꪑ꠸ꪻꫀᦔ ꫀ᥊ρ ᭙ꪮ᥅ᛕᦓ!!!
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This story is totally my type. And I know what it's based on. Your other doulou dalu story wasn't mine cause I never found interest in Jade Empereor. But it was also good. Keep up the good work because I need more.
I don't know if this will make a difference in update speed, but really liked your fic, I just bing read it whole. I love the extra aspects of the system, those beyond stats and skills, the humor present and the easy going and innate swag the MC has. Please update soon!
I loved your other fanfic so you can consider this one as your brain dead fan.(~‾▿‾)~(~‾▿‾)~(~‾▿‾)~〜(꒪꒳꒪)〜〜(꒪꒳꒪)〜〜(꒪꒳꒪)〜(~‾▿‾)~(~‾▿‾)~(~‾▿‾)~
One of the best dulou dalu fanfic. 👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯
Honest Opinion ; If you have read his other novel ,you know this fic is going to be gold.This author is one of the top 5 fanfic authors for me right along with sir Lucifer morningstar. In this fic you can expect good character development,badassmc,faceslapping, good world building,a awesome romance and one true love. The things you should not expect are maybe harem,Stupid MC,Coward MC,irrational power up , Fanboy MC. I can definitely say this is going to be one of the ,if not the best soul land fic expecting from his other novel which is sadly dropped. Definitely good to read!!!!!
I'd like a harem spoiler list, please. How much? Three power stones? Here! Nice story by the way. Good luck with the story! ~~~ .................................................................................................................................................
Spoiler de révélation can't wait for more chapters want more.... want more.... want more.... want more.... want more.... want more.... want more.... want more....
Loving the story.🤩😙😛🥰😛🤣😆🙂🤩😚😚🤫🤑🤔🤨😈👽🤔😚🤗🤫😝🤫🤥😛🤒😝😋😚😑😏🤥😒😬😛😝😒🤨🤤😬😑🤬🥶🧐🤠🤓🙁🥴😔🥴🤪☺😚😥🙁😳😦🤮🥶🥶🤠🤓☹🤢🧐🥱😩🥱😢😥😱😠😖🤬😱👹😤
MC is a Coward and Reject Beauty, he let Yan has his way with Hu Liena evn though he's far stronger than yan. After she's preg nant will he pursue her. Dude, just plan something to be done in the dark, not avoid the problem like this. I don't have a hobby reading a story where mc let girls interested in mc be ignored and he goes on a lonely path so I Drop this. Good luck if you still want to read this piece of ... manmade gold.
I haven't really read this but because the author's other soul land fanfic is great although sadly its dropped I guess this will be a masterpiece like the other one so yeah and also about the harem thing I think it would be best if its just three girls so yeah good luck author and me I guess?
Pretty good story so far has great potential but will the story stay with the totorial to the end and if it doesnt how hard is the main game
I'm glad he is out of the tutorial. I hope its is used sparingly in order to give the MC the advantage that previous life training gave Tang san.
This story really promises to be very interesting, since our MC started not somewhere, but in the hall of spirits. This place is directly the main enemy of history and, as you can see, our hero managed to make friends with one of the main students of the Hall of Spirits. It will be interesting to see how the author will implement the idea of the harem if the MC stays in the hall of spirits and does not face Shrek's monsters. Good luck writing and all the best to the author!
in all honesty you are one of the best fan fiction about soul land gooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood
😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀
At first I didn't have many expectations of this story, I hate gamer fanfic, but I gave it a chance, you did so well in your other story, so I thought it wouldn't be different in this one. I was right, this story is as good as the other one, maybe even better. The problem with your other story is that the MC has it all easy, he doesn't have to try and he always wins. My only advice is not to make the MC be Op, at least not too soon. Thanks for the chapters
Before the existence of spirit souls, there weren’t any ranks for spiritual power at all. But when spirit souls first appeared, the previous generations gradually realized that fusing with a spirit soul required much more spiritual power than fusing with a spirit ring. After extensive research, they created the rankings for spiritual power. It was only in the last two thousand years or so that the rankings were completed
I'm a fan of Soul Land and I've seen many fanfictions here about it, but yours is the first one that I have started and been unable to stop until there were no more chapters left. Can't wait for more.
I have faith in you and even thought there are only 5 chapters it already looks really promising.
Good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good
Spoiler de révélation More more more more more more more more more More more more more more more more more more More more more more more more more more more More more more more more more more more more
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Spoiler de révélation ꠸ ꪖꪑ ꪻꫝꫀ ꫀ᥊ρ ꪮᠻ ꪑꪗ ᠻ꠸ꪀᧁꫀ᥅. ᭙ꫀ᥇ꪀꪮꪜꫀꪶ ꠸ᦓ ꪑꪗ ᥇ꪮᦔꪗ, ꪖꪀᦔ ꫀ᥊ρ ꠸ᦓ ꪑꪗ ᥇ꪶꪮꪮᦔ. ꠸ ꫝꪖꪜꫀ ᥴ᥅ꫀꪖꪻꫀᦔ ꪮꪜꫀ᥅ ꪖ ꪻꫝꪮꪊᦓꪖꪀᦔ ꪊᦓꫀꪶꫀᦓᦓ ᥅ꫀꪜ꠸ꫀ᭙ᦓ. ꫝꪖꪜꫀ ᭙꠸ꪻꫝᦓꪻꪮꪮᦔ ρꪖ꠸ꪀ ꪻꪮ ᥴ᥅ꫀꪖꪻꫀ ꪑꪖꪀꪗ ᥅ꫀꪜ꠸ꫀ᭙ᦓ. ꪗꫀꪻ, ꪻꫝꪮᦓꫀ ᥅ꫀꪜ꠸ꫀ᭙ᦓ ᭙꠸ꪶꪶ ꪀꫀꪜꫀ᥅ ꫝꪮꪶᦔ ꪖꪀꪗꪻꫝ꠸ꪀᧁ. ᦓꪮ, ꪖᦓ ꠸ ρ᥅ꪖꪗ...... ꪊꪀꪶ꠸ꪑ꠸ꪻꫀᦔ ꫀ᥊ρ ᭙ꪮ᥅ᛕᦓ!!!
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