Marine’s Dark Admiral (by High Fever 36 Degrees)(complete)

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Nicx

Great, hope you keep updating. But why can't we donate stones??? it is blocked on your novel(translated). It says it need need 15k words, but you already surpassed that number. And still we can't vote. hmm.......

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Baneofthedragon

The only downside is the translation is a little hard to read. My advice is having a proof reader or a very good translating app. That should help in the wordings. Also i thank you for spending time translating this

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Luke_Kelly

Dont Know why everyone is praising this story so much i am 4 chapters in and already confused. he can just Take out sea kings and pirates with devil fruits with no explanation and why is there system tagged if there isnt one and the grammer is awful, different things just end up happening and you just have to read on with no answers

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Darth_foreskin

I really liked the one piece talent system novel that you put up. Will this one be as long as that and will this one be completely translated?

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ElmasGus

One of the best fanfic i've ever read, even though it's translated the author did a great job editing it, there is some mistakes but still good job. Story development is fantasic, i'm at chapter 500 and the story have a lot of twists and interesting parts which i wouldn't say since it's a spoiler. Character design is marvelous, the characters stay true to the anime/manga and there is some dialogues that is really funny. I don't know about update stability but I'm gonna take the other's words and say it's good. The World background is the best one on a fanfic that i've ever seen. The World in this fanfic is really precise to the anime and the original author makes auxiliary and author's note in the novel to explain the misundet standings (bonus points for funny author's notes). Anyways all and all an amazing fanfic and great translator. 10/10 would recommend

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OtakuReverence

(Not good at reviews so yeah... read at your caution) Hmm the novel was good but it had its problems Writing quality 3 This Book had some writing problems like Putting he Instead of she and Vice versa also some sentences could have been phrased better aside from that it's good. Updating stability 5 Being a translation The updating quality is surprisingly good Posting 4 or more chaps every day. Story development 3.5 Well the story Hasnt developed a lot it being only 125 chaps a lot of it for me was just him killing, then training, Getting rep from the marines, *sigh* i Give up as I don't know for this one. Character design 4 Tbh Idk what the **** character Design is So ima go say based on logic or what I believe character design is which is him Describing characters appearances which if that's what it is then he did a fairly good job World background 4 One-piece being an already well-written world their isn't much problem here just that this being a fic needs more world-building as The one-piece world is large

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Infamous_Fitz

At first I liked the story but after every single chapter longinus about justice it gets aggravating and overused-___---_____---------______-_-_-________-______-

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Genyaricoda

I've just started reading, can anyone tell me if there will be romance or a lonely character? And why is there no tag for one piece? I just found this novel on a random discord

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MohamedRost

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cuddlypanda

Kinda confusing about who Mac is in beginning but gets cleared up towards later parts of story. Recommend reading it all before decide if you don’t like the character

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blobbombs

hey author sama does the MC every eat a devil fruit? ik that u said no fruit or system but idea that mean that no unknown fruit or he doesn't eat a fruit could you please tell me. based on that I'll read the novel or not

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TianYa

this is translation right? keep it up! we need more!!!keep it up! we need more!!!keep it up! we need more!!!keep it up! we need more!!!keep it up! we need more!!!

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Lull_321

5/5⭐ Must Read I already finished this and... it's quite surprising for chinese fic, the power level, the story line, the character and personalities is very very good IMO. Well there's something that's not rly good but none is perfect. Sooo you must read this👌

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netero_frecses

111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111 NICE

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Duza

Well written, good pacing, good usage of the world but taking it in the authors own unique direction. I think the most impressive thing is how characters and actions have consequences from beginning to end.

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TianYa

why i cant vote this novel?why i cant vote this novel?why i cant vote this novel?why i cant vote this novel?why i cant vote this novel?.....

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Nexus4567

I don't know anything about this novel but when I read the first chapter I was flabbergasted the MC's name is Longinus what the f... I thought I'll probably drop this such a sh.tty name I don't want to read it especially if it appears for several chapters 😅😅

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Nicx

i really love the novel. please update more frequently 😊 ;bbbbbbbbnnnnnnnnnnn!_---------------------------------------------------------------

The best one-piece fanfic I've read by far, the amount of world-building and creativity was incredible, even if I wasn't in it at first after 20-30 chapters, I was completely hooked. The translation is not the best, but it is decent. Rarely have I seen an author who can take an established world and make it his own. Thanks for the good time.

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N_ZIDAN

From the 200 chapters I've read there are many timeline errors, such as the destruction of Ohara earlier than required, and Vivi's birth in 1506 not 1505, it can be seen in the One Piece timeline in fandom.