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ДУЖЕ нудний твір, при тому що я люблю історичні романи цей це просто набір слів які створюють максимально нецікавий роман. ..............................................................
I know that there are many veterans in historical novels, and I say that I am among the first of them. I used to follow all the Arab, Chinese, and even Western historical novels, but there are many novels that are beautiful in their presentation until they reach nationalism, and they begin to criticize people and people, and this is bad because they look from the non-historical side. There are many. Of the reasons for past actions, do not look only from the point of view of one report. You must read at least 3 reports, and I will see this wonder, and then I will evaluate...
i think beyzeid whatever the young sultan is right when antonius and his son are gone their will be racial tension and there will be a emperor who will try and hellenize anatolia through force or use the sword and east romans are known for that personally if i was born there i dont think this would work two different ethnic groups and religion in anatolia and to Adrianople they would expel them and kill them so Sultana said it is a fantasy which is true all we need is one person to stir trouble like in germany (1932) but this is a alt history so am alright and give 100 stars loved the novel please right more
Before reading I wanted to ask if this novel has family development and I have read many historical novels and I like the creation of a good descendant for the empire
I really enjoy the story, the main character isn't generic or stupid, he is likable and very human. The plot itself is good so far, with a lot of potential. Thank you for your hard work.
Can somebody tell me? I'm confused if Mc is transmigrated/reincarnated or something? ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ...
Spoiler de révélation
what a masterpiece Iam enjoying this novel thank you very much man do you have another project?
You should not put misleading labels, since, although the term cultivation can also be understood as cultivating your forces (army, supplies, etc.), in most cases it is associated with the cultivation of qi, and many will come here thinking that it is a cultivation novel, although somewhat rare, but still the novel is good, I recommend it
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Starts out fine then gets dull, very slow pace ——————————————————————‘-‘’-‘amamammamamama-‘amamammamamamammamamammamamammamamamamammamamamma
Very much like enjoyed the novel, the very reason why I went premium to support the author and to read the updates as soon as they are posted.
Not even gonna read to rate it since the title itself reveals the dream of every man I will read it tho :v lol. YOU WILL COME AS LIGHTNING!!
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Can anybody tell me if MC has modern knowledge in this novel (as in reincarnated from future) and from which chapter kingdom building starts ???? thanks.
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Precious diamond. A precious diamond in the middle of a sea of mud! ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
Upvote first! I'll read this after finishing the other War novels I am reading, it will get confusing if I'm gonna read this as well at the same time, as I'm already reading 5 War novels.
The story is very good and pretty I I triguing if you enjoy history. The one thing that repeatedly bothers me is the poor grammar. Many of the sentences are run on and use the wrong word tense or choice. A lot of the time your mind will be autocorrecting the chapters. However, the story and the characters are great and fully fleshed out. If the author decided to get an editor, I could see this novel being one of the top 15 on this site.
Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading.
Antonius as the MC is different from the real life Antonius II who ruled Byzantium aka Constantinople back then. Antonius II emerged from monastery. This alternate Antonius is wild like Jack Sparrow. and i like it. 💪💪💪
The books a great way to spend your time, by reading it you would try to speculate how it will goor how the world will be after the novel ends. Books like theese greatly interest me, so i reccomend anyone else who have enough time to read it to.
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I haven't read your story much. It's just a few chapters to browse through. I'm interested in history, that's why I'm here! I like the spelling. If you still maintain the initial quality, I give you a standing ovation. Your characters look alive. Your descriptions and narration are admirable. the year 1453 is the beginning of a new era. It is a very important point in history. One war and one sultan. Sultan Mehmet the Conqueror conquered Constantinople with the old name of Istanbul. They are a kind of religious war. The Turks fought to do what the Prophet, who they believed in as a Muslim nation, said several centuries ago. Yes, a couple of centuries ago!!! Because many historical religious-war events took place during these periods. The Ottoman Empire was born on a small island. A principality consisting of several tents. The Turks went after greenery and sedentary life. Naturally, they entered into a struggle with the Byzantines. At first, small frictions turned into large square battles as the Turks grew stronger. Christians conducted the crusades for the first time- if I remember decently - between 1095 and 1097. The Turks relied on hunting and animal husbandry for food. a 7-year-old boy is trained to hunt in combat decently, a teenager who is 15-14 years old could shoot 100 arrows in a row on the battlefield. Most people were healthy and strong because of their Konar migratory lives. The Turks were a warrior race by birth. This has been proven in many parts of history. They say he's not afraid of death. This phrase is wrong, we are afraid! But even if we know about death, we will move forward. Because we are a nation that believes that death is the beginning. If anyone doesn't believe it, just do an in-depth study of Turkish history. Why do we see death as the beginning? Because we are Muslims. There is a social attack on Muslims in the modern period. Unfortunately, those who do this are, first of all, those who find themselves in an academically advanced place, in the highest position in a country. Well, as a Turk, I can say one thing for sure. We are nationalists. Both are very. Praise us in my homeland, everyone smiles at you. This is not negative racism. As Ataturk, the founder of Turkey said: "Turkish nationalism is on the path of progress and expansion, and in international contacts and relations, it walks parallel to all modern nations and decisively with them, while preserving the special characters of Turkish society and its independent identity in itself." What I'm wondering is, how much truth is there in your book? I have more or less knowledge in terms of historical issues. I wondered. I have read a few books. In the modern period, some people declare the murderers Muslims and the Turks barbarians. Although there are people who take a step back and evaluate objectively, the majority of the public belongs to the racist segment. Even though I want to read the majority of your book, I can't find the opportunity. He's a writer, man! My review is a little long, thank you for reading it all.
There once was a dream. A dream of civilization, order and glory. A dream of kingdoms, republics and empires. A dream to purge this rotten world from the barbarians that infested it! A dream... called Rome.
I love this book it's one of the best ones on this app it has a great story line and always keeps you interested definitely the best book on this app that I've read so far keep up the good work
I wanted to read it as it is looking good. But before that if I can learn two things I will be very happy. First is there any nationalism involves in it as I am Turkish and if it is extreme it will better for me to not to read at all and second one would be if is it contains multiple pov's then I just cant enjoy that kindbof novelsnovels which uses multiple pov's constantly.
ДУЖЕ нудний твір, при тому що я люблю історичні романи цей це просто набір слів які створюють максимально нецікавий роман. ..............................................................
I know that there are many veterans in historical novels, and I say that I am among the first of them. I used to follow all the Arab, Chinese, and even Western historical novels, but there are many novels that are beautiful in their presentation until they reach nationalism, and they begin to criticize people and people, and this is bad because they look from the non-historical side. There are many. Of the reasons for past actions, do not look only from the point of view of one report. You must read at least 3 reports, and I will see this wonder, and then I will evaluate...
i think beyzeid whatever the young sultan is right when antonius and his son are gone their will be racial tension and there will be a emperor who will try and hellenize anatolia through force or use the sword and east romans are known for that personally if i was born there i dont think this would work two different ethnic groups and religion in anatolia and to Adrianople they would expel them and kill them so Sultana said it is a fantasy which is true all we need is one person to stir trouble like in germany (1932) but this is a alt history so am alright and give 100 stars loved the novel please right more
Before reading I wanted to ask if this novel has family development and I have read many historical novels and I like the creation of a good descendant for the empire
I really enjoy the story, the main character isn't generic or stupid, he is likable and very human. The plot itself is good so far, with a lot of potential. Thank you for your hard work.
Can somebody tell me? I'm confused if Mc is transmigrated/reincarnated or something? ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ...
Spoiler de révélation what a masterpiece Iam enjoying this novel thank you very much man do you have another project?
You should not put misleading labels, since, although the term cultivation can also be understood as cultivating your forces (army, supplies, etc.), in most cases it is associated with the cultivation of qi, and many will come here thinking that it is a cultivation novel, although somewhat rare, but still the novel is good, I recommend it
why is there a Cultivation tag here? why is there a Cultivation tag here? why is there a Cultivation tag here? why is there a Cultivation tag here?
Starts out fine then gets dull, very slow pace ——————————————————————‘-‘’-‘amamammamamama-‘amamammamamamammamamammamamammamamamamammamamamma
Very much like enjoyed the novel, the very reason why I went premium to support the author and to read the updates as soon as they are posted.
Not even gonna read to rate it since the title itself reveals the dream of every man I will read it tho :v lol. YOU WILL COME AS LIGHTNING!!
Trash Trash Trash Trash Trash Trash Trash Trash Trash Trash Trash Trash Trash Trash Trash Trash Trash Trash Trash Trash Trash Trash Trash Trash Trash Trash Trash Trash Trash Trash
Can anybody tell me if MC has modern knowledge in this novel (as in reincarnated from future) and from which chapter kingdom building starts ???? thanks.
Discord link pleaseee . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
Precious diamond. A precious diamond in the middle of a sea of mud! ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
Upvote first! I'll read this after finishing the other War novels I am reading, it will get confusing if I'm gonna read this as well at the same time, as I'm already reading 5 War novels.
The story is very good and pretty I I triguing if you enjoy history. The one thing that repeatedly bothers me is the poor grammar. Many of the sentences are run on and use the wrong word tense or choice. A lot of the time your mind will be autocorrecting the chapters. However, the story and the characters are great and fully fleshed out. If the author decided to get an editor, I could see this novel being one of the top 15 on this site.
Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading.
Antonius as the MC is different from the real life Antonius II who ruled Byzantium aka Constantinople back then. Antonius II emerged from monastery. This alternate Antonius is wild like Jack Sparrow. and i like it. 💪💪💪
The books a great way to spend your time, by reading it you would try to speculate how it will goor how the world will be after the novel ends. Books like theese greatly interest me, so i reccomend anyone else who have enough time to read it to.
Adorei está obra adorei está obra adorei está obra adorei está obra adorei está obra adorei está obra adorei está obra adorei está obra adorei está obra adorei está obra adorei está obra adorei está obra adorei está obra adorei está obra adorei está obra adorei está obra
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I haven't read your story much. It's just a few chapters to browse through. I'm interested in history, that's why I'm here! I like the spelling. If you still maintain the initial quality, I give you a standing ovation. Your characters look alive. Your descriptions and narration are admirable. the year 1453 is the beginning of a new era. It is a very important point in history. One war and one sultan. Sultan Mehmet the Conqueror conquered Constantinople with the old name of Istanbul. They are a kind of religious war. The Turks fought to do what the Prophet, who they believed in as a Muslim nation, said several centuries ago. Yes, a couple of centuries ago!!! Because many historical religious-war events took place during these periods. The Ottoman Empire was born on a small island. A principality consisting of several tents. The Turks went after greenery and sedentary life. Naturally, they entered into a struggle with the Byzantines. At first, small frictions turned into large square battles as the Turks grew stronger. Christians conducted the crusades for the first time- if I remember decently - between 1095 and 1097. The Turks relied on hunting and animal husbandry for food. a 7-year-old boy is trained to hunt in combat decently, a teenager who is 15-14 years old could shoot 100 arrows in a row on the battlefield. Most people were healthy and strong because of their Konar migratory lives. The Turks were a warrior race by birth. This has been proven in many parts of history. They say he's not afraid of death. This phrase is wrong, we are afraid! But even if we know about death, we will move forward. Because we are a nation that believes that death is the beginning. If anyone doesn't believe it, just do an in-depth study of Turkish history. Why do we see death as the beginning? Because we are Muslims. There is a social attack on Muslims in the modern period. Unfortunately, those who do this are, first of all, those who find themselves in an academically advanced place, in the highest position in a country. Well, as a Turk, I can say one thing for sure. We are nationalists. Both are very. Praise us in my homeland, everyone smiles at you. This is not negative racism. As Ataturk, the founder of Turkey said: "Turkish nationalism is on the path of progress and expansion, and in international contacts and relations, it walks parallel to all modern nations and decisively with them, while preserving the special characters of Turkish society and its independent identity in itself." What I'm wondering is, how much truth is there in your book? I have more or less knowledge in terms of historical issues. I wondered. I have read a few books. In the modern period, some people declare the murderers Muslims and the Turks barbarians. Although there are people who take a step back and evaluate objectively, the majority of the public belongs to the racist segment. Even though I want to read the majority of your book, I can't find the opportunity. He's a writer, man! My review is a little long, thank you for reading it all.
There once was a dream. A dream of civilization, order and glory. A dream of kingdoms, republics and empires. A dream to purge this rotten world from the barbarians that infested it! A dream... called Rome.
I love this book it's one of the best ones on this app it has a great story line and always keeps you interested definitely the best book on this app that I've read so far keep up the good work
I wanted to read it as it is looking good. But before that if I can learn two things I will be very happy. First is there any nationalism involves in it as I am Turkish and if it is extreme it will better for me to not to read at all and second one would be if is it contains multiple pov's then I just cant enjoy that kindbof novelsnovels which uses multiple pov's constantly.
I've had to stop at the second chapter the grammar is really bad