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I find this book a perfect example of an alternate history where Constantinople doesn't fall to the Ottomans. Good job on the historical background of the world at this time. Nice job on the characters and there developments into this story.
shameless writer here. iinterested in historical fiction? here is the book you need. The Sorcerer's King: ways of the witches http://wbnv.in/a/05friQj
I Swear I'm not a Byzantophile. I Swear I'm Not a Byzantophile. I Swear I'm Not a Byzantophile. I Swear I'm Not a Byzantophile. I Swear I'm Not a Byzantophile.
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I'm always for reading an alternate-history novel, and this one reminded me a little of "Agent of Byzantium", by Harry Turtledove, in some ways. All in all, a very solid piece of work. Looking forward to read more.
This is a nice story. good to read. keep writting, thank you for the boOk. 😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊
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So, before I start reviewing this novel and explaining as to why I am giving it 5 stars, I want to say that Author should change the name of this novel to Revival of Eastern Roman Empire/Roman Empire, using the name some idiot thought to be romantic shouldn't be allowed. now, with ranting out of the way, let's move on to the review itself. Writing Quality - it isn't superb per-say, but, it only has few occasional mistakes and as such deserves at least 4.5 stars. Stability of Updates - 5 stars, because looking at it, it doesn't seem like he missed a day without a reason(such as being in the army, duh) Story Development - one of the things I really love in this novel is that it doesn't jump you straight into the action, it introduces characters left and right without making you feel tired and overwhelmed with all the Greek or Turkish names. fight scenes aren't forced and they are quite nicely introduced into the play. as such story development of this novel gets 5 stars. Character Design - now, this is the major thing that you should love in this novel if you love history... and that is characters... almost every character in this novel is someone you can google and learn more about. the only mistake I have seen so far in 90 chapters is Vladislav II Dracula, and it isn't that big of a mistake, just delete 'Dracula' in that name and everything is fine. Main Character is a likeable character and Side characters are actually important and 'alive', with their distinct personalities. World background - now this one is tough to rate because there are some amazing details that Author has implemented in his story, but there are some absurd things as well... like there being smoking pipes in the 15th century... as such I am giving the world background solid 4.8(there are other mistakes as well apart from smoking pipes, that's why it gets 4.8) Finally, the novel itself according to these criteriums gets... 4.825 Stars :P but Webnovel says it's 4.8... (don't trust it)
My brother his novel and very good congratulations. for writing so well you must have to study hard to do this keep going so you are on a good path.
Good novel with a lot of historical insights during this period. One thing that could be improve is the update frequency. However just keep being awesome lord author👍👍👍👍
Good chapter just lacks a higher frequency of posts because the work is very exciting at this moment. Congratulations also write longer and appreciative chapters in tense moments.
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I haven't read this yet, but the fact it deals with the fall of Constantinople in 1453 is enough for this review, its the reason I don't really study history after it, because after the Fall it no longer a battle of Men and Wills but a battle of Guns and that is what leads to the downfall of all
The novel is very interesting and fun. The story is accurate, but it has a different ending chosen by the author. Personally, I am a huge fan of historical novels, I really recommend the novel. tip for the author, if you post a chapter a day for a month, you can be eligible to receive for your work done on the web-novel site. besides calling more public for your novel.
A novel with great potential, very exciting, with a great writing and unique narrative that made me feel suspicious even after reading dozens of books of the same genre. I only have compliments.
I enjoy the novel quite a lot you dont normally see a book based off history or at least what if on this platform so it's a breath of fresh air.
Hey there! Here are some web novel recommendations for whom share the same taste with me. If you like this story, my recommendations are worth a try! https://docs.google.com/document/d/19R5KkqHOOHSMDkF4fHscVmxWcYGh0OntYsv8NglzsQo/edit?usp=sharing
Simplesmente incrível, gostei tanto da história que até deu vontade de jogar Europa Universalis IV novamente.............................................
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you want to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new works, you might want to contact rebecca.review@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters, or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
I really like this story. It's hard to find a good story wehre the MC doesn't get a cheap cheat and has to work for almost ewrything. I also like how the story gives a good point how it would be possible for it to work and not some random luck. But please explain the characters more.
I've read until chapter 120. So far the story is very intriguing and the characters are quite well developed. I do have some complains though. Constantine was very underwhelming. In history, he seemed a lot more proactive and strong willed. Here, he seems like a pessimist and weak willed person. He should be more active, trying to use his power and not let others control him. And to add insult to injury, he had to have a falling out with Antonius! He should be a hero even if he isn't the protagonist, not a lowly pawn. I really hope that you redeem him and not have Antonius have to overthrow him. As a sidenote, I hope that Antonius adopts Orthodoxy and that it doesn't submit to the Pope, or at least not for good or they try to unite the churches to the pre-schism status. Please, if you are willing to address my hopes and spoiling the story a little, I will greatly appreciate it!
Spoiler de révélation I find this book a perfect example of an alternate history where Constantinople doesn't fall to the Ottomans. Good job on the historical background of the world at this time. Nice job on the characters and there developments into this story.
shameless writer here. iinterested in historical fiction? here is the book you need. The Sorcerer's King: ways of the witches http://wbnv.in/a/05friQj
I Swear I'm not a Byzantophile. I Swear I'm Not a Byzantophile. I Swear I'm Not a Byzantophile. I Swear I'm Not a Byzantophile. I Swear I'm Not a Byzantophile.
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I'm always for reading an alternate-history novel, and this one reminded me a little of "Agent of Byzantium", by Harry Turtledove, in some ways. All in all, a very solid piece of work. Looking forward to read more.
This is a nice story. good to read. keep writting, thank you for the boOk. 😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊
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So, before I start reviewing this novel and explaining as to why I am giving it 5 stars, I want to say that Author should change the name of this novel to Revival of Eastern Roman Empire/Roman Empire, using the name some idiot thought to be romantic shouldn't be allowed. now, with ranting out of the way, let's move on to the review itself. Writing Quality - it isn't superb per-say, but, it only has few occasional mistakes and as such deserves at least 4.5 stars. Stability of Updates - 5 stars, because looking at it, it doesn't seem like he missed a day without a reason(such as being in the army, duh) Story Development - one of the things I really love in this novel is that it doesn't jump you straight into the action, it introduces characters left and right without making you feel tired and overwhelmed with all the Greek or Turkish names. fight scenes aren't forced and they are quite nicely introduced into the play. as such story development of this novel gets 5 stars. Character Design - now, this is the major thing that you should love in this novel if you love history... and that is characters... almost every character in this novel is someone you can google and learn more about. the only mistake I have seen so far in 90 chapters is Vladislav II Dracula, and it isn't that big of a mistake, just delete 'Dracula' in that name and everything is fine. Main Character is a likeable character and Side characters are actually important and 'alive', with their distinct personalities. World background - now this one is tough to rate because there are some amazing details that Author has implemented in his story, but there are some absurd things as well... like there being smoking pipes in the 15th century... as such I am giving the world background solid 4.8(there are other mistakes as well apart from smoking pipes, that's why it gets 4.8) Finally, the novel itself according to these criteriums gets... 4.825 Stars :P but Webnovel says it's 4.8... (don't trust it)
My brother his novel and very good congratulations. for writing so well you must have to study hard to do this keep going so you are on a good path.
Good novel with a lot of historical insights during this period. One thing that could be improve is the update frequency. However just keep being awesome lord author👍👍👍👍
Good chapter just lacks a higher frequency of posts because the work is very exciting at this moment. Congratulations also write longer and appreciative chapters in tense moments.
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I haven't read this yet, but the fact it deals with the fall of Constantinople in 1453 is enough for this review, its the reason I don't really study history after it, because after the Fall it no longer a battle of Men and Wills but a battle of Guns and that is what leads to the downfall of all
The novel is very interesting and fun. The story is accurate, but it has a different ending chosen by the author. Personally, I am a huge fan of historical novels, I really recommend the novel. tip for the author, if you post a chapter a day for a month, you can be eligible to receive for your work done on the web-novel site. besides calling more public for your novel.
A novel with great potential, very exciting, with a great writing and unique narrative that made me feel suspicious even after reading dozens of books of the same genre. I only have compliments.
I enjoy the novel quite a lot you dont normally see a book based off history or at least what if on this platform so it's a breath of fresh air.
Hey there! Here are some web novel recommendations for whom share the same taste with me. If you like this story, my recommendations are worth a try! https://docs.google.com/document/d/19R5KkqHOOHSMDkF4fHscVmxWcYGh0OntYsv8NglzsQo/edit?usp=sharing
Simplesmente incrível, gostei tanto da história que até deu vontade de jogar Europa Universalis IV novamente.............................................
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you want to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new works, you might want to contact rebecca.review@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters, or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
I really like this story. It's hard to find a good story wehre the MC doesn't get a cheap cheat and has to work for almost ewrything. I also like how the story gives a good point how it would be possible for it to work and not some random luck. But please explain the characters more.
I've read until chapter 120. So far the story is very intriguing and the characters are quite well developed. I do have some complains though. Constantine was very underwhelming. In history, he seemed a lot more proactive and strong willed. Here, he seems like a pessimist and weak willed person. He should be more active, trying to use his power and not let others control him. And to add insult to injury, he had to have a falling out with Antonius! He should be a hero even if he isn't the protagonist, not a lowly pawn. I really hope that you redeem him and not have Antonius have to overthrow him. As a sidenote, I hope that Antonius adopts Orthodoxy and that it doesn't submit to the Pope, or at least not for good or they try to unite the churches to the pre-schism status. Please, if you are willing to address my hopes and spoiling the story a little, I will greatly appreciate it!
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