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One Piece: And the Original.
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Synopsis
A story that begins WAY before the original time line, before the reign of the world government. A ‘some what young’ immortal ruler adopts a boy in het family, turning him immortal so she won’t be lonely. But the fall of her kingdom separates the siblings, will she fin her brother as she enters the world of OP as we know it? And what or who did he become when she finds him again?
I don't own One Piece and the Originals. any anime related content is from the original anime and not mine.
The cover is not mine and this is just a fan fiction.
If you find any wrong grammar, please tell me. English is not my native language.
Updates will be irregular. I’ll write when I have the time.
Please enjoy!
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Umm...I like this story cause the story had loli protagonist with female fanfic so that's all so keep a good work author[img=recommend][img=recommend]
a fish eyed loli on a journey. The system doesn't have levels and the powers aren't op without training and are relatively unused compared to things like the sharingan, saiyan, etc. +1 (fish eyed meaning emotionless looking/dead eyed) writing quality: Is good with few errors, easy to read and is better then the majority of stories on this site. 5/5 stability of updates: somewhat consistent so far every 1-5 days but could change in the future 4/5 character design: the characters have personality's with few inconsistencies but it's still early and the story and character development has not revealed its fangs yet. 5/5 not much else to say as its to early in the story but since its a loli like they say you can see but no touch.
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im quite impressed. no gender mix ups, no grammar issues i can see, spelling is on point i only have a few questions will there be romance? will she be part of luffy's crew? any pets?
Awesome start (3 chap in), giving this review for future stuff :) Plot seems pretty good, like the relationships set up and have hope for more :D 🙏🙏 can't wait for more chaps!!!