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Synopsis
In his previous life on Earth, He reached the top. He had it all and more, but he was not satisfied at all. Sadly, no matter how much influence and money he had, he couldn't fight the cycle of life. He never stopped trying to fight fate, if there was a chance to live longer he wouldn't mind sacrificing all life in the world, but alas, his time ran out.
[Greatly inspired by "All Existence" please check it out]
[I DO NOT own picture if the creator wants me to change picture I will.]
[First time writer.]
[Writing for fun.]
[English is not my first language.]
[Constructive criticisms, suggestions and feedbacks are appreciated.]
[This is a work of fiction that draws heavily upon the original source material 'Naruto', created by Masashi Kishimoto and its anime adaptations. Please support the official release and know that I claim no ownership or credit regarding the existence of pre-existing characters or content related to the series. The only things I own are the original characters and the altered storyline.]
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Écrire un avisI really love this story so far. I hope that he gets the ketsuryugan in the future, may be it can give him more blood powers. Also do not make him super overpowered I don't like stories where MC is really young and the strongest person in the whole world.
Love this novel. Hope you don't drop this novel like your last one. It really needs more chapters though that is the biggest problem. This is just here so that I have 140 characters, I hate how webnovel makes us have to write 140 characters in our reviews.
Nothing that’s worth wowing about this fan fic. MC is supposedly super capable before reincarnation but when he reincarnated he does nothing but relies on system. Ask system for help at every turn. Even with such op system MC is only slightly stronger than his peers...like wtf?? Over relying on system just makes for horrible novel....MC: oh my cock is not as big as Naruto’s, well system make my cock bigger. Wait what?? Naruto has more stamina in bed?? Well system make me have more stamina than Naruto! .... this pretty much sums ups novel. No self cultivation just over reliant on system.
It's nowhere near as good as the original, it just don't have that flow that the original all existence had. This one was quite entertaining in first few chapters, but as story continues going on it's turning out to be dull and boring. In the end this power system just isn't fit for naruto world, it doesn't suit it and its out of place. But maybe it's just for me, because I don't like naruto to begin with. Only tried it because of how good the original was and evil or at least chaotic evil Mc, but it's just not enjoyable to read. Would not really recommend reading it if you really liked original story, because it will only be disappointing for you. Anyway, good luck with story, there is always someone who appreciate it.
I really like the story the MC is slightly evil 😈😈 but he great I mean he doesn't kill inecent people so that's good I like his power I mean the author is creative I really hope that the author repost the chapters soon your story is great ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️✌️✌️✌️✌️👍👍👍
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Really enjoying the speed the story developes and the progress the mc makes doesn't scream 'HERE I AM PLEASE KIDNAP ME DANZO SENPAI'. Overall well written and enjoyable story.
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I don't usually give a review to new novels until they have got more chapters so that i can see a stable blueprint of the story But so far i am enjoying the story as i love all existence i would love to see this fanfic grow with with a ruthless mc looking for immortality and please don't bind him to any character to make the story interesting add schemes and manipulation similar to warlock of the magus world or something along these lines Maybe make him implement science into fuinjutsu to make some useful things like an A.I or augmented combat suits and weapons and its a must with tailed beasts out there Maybe use fuinjutsu it to lock and control All existence as it wanted to use the mc to regain its power something along these lines This has a huge potential Other than this please continue and don't drop this <3
So far i really enjoy the story. I cant wait to see how you go about it now. Ive enjoyed the time skips that got passed the boring and monotonous part, tho i hope from acadamy age the character will be able to grow and train more. One way to make it easier is to have the ability to create a blood clone or get a skill to take in memories of souls eaten at the cost of all points he would have gotten OR for the cost of like 1000 the next soul eaten would take memories. idk i just love this story so far
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Spoiler de révélationEhh it was alright until the Mc started turning people into vampires for no apparent reason. There also the fact that he keeps saying he needs points but once he has them he doesn't use them in the most efficient way.
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Auteur SilverSerpent
This story is basically the sentences below. The guy is not the MC, but the system is. The MC looks like a system addict who asks for help for anything. That way even a chicken becomes supreme lol, what a useless protagonist. OMG, a crossroads on the way! System, should I go right or left? OMG, someone came to talk to me! System, should I introduce myself or just say hi? OMG, my strength is still slow to grow! System, sell me a more useful method! OMG, this girl has some powers, I'm jealous! System, turn me into a vampire to transform and control her. OMG, a girl wants to have sex with me! System, increase my cock and buy me the knowledge of the kama sutra! OMG, I can't walk, breathe! System, teach me to walk and breathe!!