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Honestly, it's one of my favorite books. It's really well thought out and amazing characters and development. 10/10 book. some chapters had some bad translation, but very few compared to how many this book has.
I know I'm heavily biased with transmission novels but this novel deserves praise for being funny and knowing when to be serious,the character development is Fantastic and even years later not reading the novel I still have great metal image of them. That's how you know it's good(or I have an great memory)
wasnt a huge fan. i could not get past 100 chs. he had like zero real progress and it just became super boring
Sooo great hate that it ended I needed more of it, but I understand everything has to end
Mid at best...........................................................................................,................................................................................................
Fantastic novel Spoiler alert The story is complete but somehow it feels like a couple sentences are missing at the end in the epilogue.
Spoiler de révélation
"I got to tell you, it was perfect. Perfect. Everything, down to the last chapter details." "I got to tell you, it was perfect. Perfect. Everything, down to the last chapter details." "I got to tell you, it was perfect. Perfect. Everything, down to the last chapter details."
another trash cultivation novel. his acting is absolutely horrid and yet the entire story revolves around his act that he's still powerful. his system is trash and worthless and barely helps. the only times it does is exactly when it needs to which makes this read worthless since you can basically guess everything that will happen. can't believe i wasted my time with another awful novel like this one. -10/10 would not recommend
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great work, first time finishing a Chinese translation novel most translational novels tend to get boring toward the middle of novel this one is an exception it kept on getting better and better. The name of novel doesn't suit it and the end of the novel doesn't seem like the end still need extra chapter
A good novel. I somewhat enjoyed reading this novel since the plot was good but at about chapter 1000 you could already see things weren't adding up and we're inconsistent overall... The grammar didn't have any problems from what I could see, which is something I consider a must when reading... All in all, I would recommend this novel to anyone who likes this gender.
After reading the entire book, I can only day that it's rare to find such a good story. This definitely goes in my top collection! .........
One of the best books on here that I feel should go to Amazon or any other big book place and hope the author does that one day don’t stop writing.
good novel but it s too long ........................................... ................cjuggcjkutxvji ........................... .....
it's very good novel......... ..................................................................................................................................
the best. .. Some translations mishaps once in a while but worth reading it. ... .. .. .. .. .. .. .. . . .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .
This novel has been with me for awhile now, I hate to see it go already but it's story and characters helped me pass the time and imagine a world where amazing and ever changing things happen every chapter. Thank you for for writing this story and letting me use my imagination to see this story like a movie in my head. It was a blast.
This is a isekai story and the protagonist was misunderstood but he don't correct them and bluff his way to the top with the help of the system.
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I can't believe that Lu Zhou's story has come to an end. This book was worth me following up on updates. It was masterfully written with excellent characters and an amazing plot. The author really did well❤❤❤❤
This has been one of the best web novels I’ve read. It had an interesting plot - a transmigrator having to reform his wicked disciples that are plotting to kill him and take off with his treasures. Though, he starts off in the worst possible way…. Old and weak. There was plenty of humor and fight scenes in the novel, as well as many interesting subplots. There’s also no romance which I liked. The translation was great though it did get weird every now and then in a few chapters. But really, the majority of the novel has a great translation. Now, there are some things in the novel that I think could have used a bit more detail… such as more details on why the 9th disciple. They always write her off as just being talented, but at a certain point one starts to wonder if it’s something more than talent. More details on the MC previous life would have been nice. He adapts so well to being thrown in another world, but rarely thinks about the old life he left behind. There are other little things that are brushed over, but nothing so major that it takes away from the enjoyment factor. Anyway, I enjoyed the novel. I hope there’s a sequel or something because the ending ended on a cliffhanger.
Spoiler de révélation
Amazing novel! The story development is smoth. The teacher/student relationship works just fine, great thouths about The duties of a teacher, The duties of a student, father and son... I Recommend!
100% one of the best novels. character development feels real and peeing up and going out into the world feels natural. great book to let build up chairs between be books and binge in
I like it, The only thing that confuses me is the fact that I do not know how many chapters are left. Novelupdates has 1714, but it doesn't seem to be the case. Does anybody knows how many chapters are left?
not a good novel I don't know if the author knows how to count in the novel the remaining life of the mc doesn't match the added of the old and new
I love this story. The character development feels real, and the MC takes the role he is given and runs with it. the best way to read this story is to let chapters build up so you don't have to interrupt the story too much. one of my top five novels on here
Honestly couldn’t wait so long to see all the unreleased chapters after 1500+ chapters of reading. Went into mtl and finished it up there, I love the book. Author is by far one of the few who has genuinely taken their time to ensure that the plot holes are explained and that the story is well connected. Reminded me a little of ”Release that witch”. Do give this book a shot, it is definitely worthwhile reading this.
This is one of my favorite fantasy/cultivation novels. I really enjoy the protagonist’s journey and the development of his disciples. Each character undergoes significant growth and becomes integral to the story. What sets this novel apart from others in its genre is its emphasis on self-realization and the healing of the bond between the protagonist and his disciples. Instead of just having an overpowered protagonist, we see a protagonist with depth, as well as characters who have their own individual purposes and ambitions. If I had to critique anything, it would be the length of the story. While it's long, it felt somewhat unfinished at the end. Additionally, some of the villains felt a bit two-dimensional. Nevertheless, it's a captivating story.
Honestly, it's one of my favorite books. It's really well thought out and amazing characters and development. 10/10 book. some chapters had some bad translation, but very few compared to how many this book has.
I know I'm heavily biased with transmission novels but this novel deserves praise for being funny and knowing when to be serious,the character development is Fantastic and even years later not reading the novel I still have great metal image of them. That's how you know it's good(or I have an great memory)
wasnt a huge fan. i could not get past 100 chs. he had like zero real progress and it just became super boring
Sooo great hate that it ended I needed more of it, but I understand everything has to end
Mid at best...........................................................................................,................................................................................................
Fantastic novel Spoiler alert The story is complete but somehow it feels like a couple sentences are missing at the end in the epilogue.
Spoiler de révélation "I got to tell you, it was perfect. Perfect. Everything, down to the last chapter details." "I got to tell you, it was perfect. Perfect. Everything, down to the last chapter details." "I got to tell you, it was perfect. Perfect. Everything, down to the last chapter details."
another trash cultivation novel. his acting is absolutely horrid and yet the entire story revolves around his act that he's still powerful. his system is trash and worthless and barely helps. the only times it does is exactly when it needs to which makes this read worthless since you can basically guess everything that will happen. can't believe i wasted my time with another awful novel like this one. -10/10 would not recommend
Hello, I would like to talk to you about your book. Can you please contact me via Instagram. I am there as @penetratingoutlook
great work, first time finishing a Chinese translation novel most translational novels tend to get boring toward the middle of novel this one is an exception it kept on getting better and better. The name of novel doesn't suit it and the end of the novel doesn't seem like the end still need extra chapter
A good novel. I somewhat enjoyed reading this novel since the plot was good but at about chapter 1000 you could already see things weren't adding up and we're inconsistent overall... The grammar didn't have any problems from what I could see, which is something I consider a must when reading... All in all, I would recommend this novel to anyone who likes this gender.
After reading the entire book, I can only day that it's rare to find such a good story. This definitely goes in my top collection! .........
One of the best books on here that I feel should go to Amazon or any other big book place and hope the author does that one day don’t stop writing.
good novel but it s too long ........................................... ................cjuggcjkutxvji ........................... .....
it's very good novel......... ..................................................................................................................................
the best. .. Some translations mishaps once in a while but worth reading it. ... .. .. .. .. .. .. .. . . .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .
This novel has been with me for awhile now, I hate to see it go already but it's story and characters helped me pass the time and imagine a world where amazing and ever changing things happen every chapter. Thank you for for writing this story and letting me use my imagination to see this story like a movie in my head. It was a blast.
This is a isekai story and the protagonist was misunderstood but he don't correct them and bluff his way to the top with the help of the system.
[img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp]
I can't believe that Lu Zhou's story has come to an end. This book was worth me following up on updates. It was masterfully written with excellent characters and an amazing plot. The author really did well❤❤❤❤
This has been one of the best web novels I’ve read. It had an interesting plot - a transmigrator having to reform his wicked disciples that are plotting to kill him and take off with his treasures. Though, he starts off in the worst possible way…. Old and weak. There was plenty of humor and fight scenes in the novel, as well as many interesting subplots. There’s also no romance which I liked. The translation was great though it did get weird every now and then in a few chapters. But really, the majority of the novel has a great translation. Now, there are some things in the novel that I think could have used a bit more detail… such as more details on why the 9th disciple. They always write her off as just being talented, but at a certain point one starts to wonder if it’s something more than talent. More details on the MC previous life would have been nice. He adapts so well to being thrown in another world, but rarely thinks about the old life he left behind. There are other little things that are brushed over, but nothing so major that it takes away from the enjoyment factor. Anyway, I enjoyed the novel. I hope there’s a sequel or something because the ending ended on a cliffhanger.
Spoiler de révélation Amazing novel! The story development is smoth. The teacher/student relationship works just fine, great thouths about The duties of a teacher, The duties of a student, father and son... I Recommend!
100% one of the best novels. character development feels real and peeing up and going out into the world feels natural. great book to let build up chairs between be books and binge in
I like it, The only thing that confuses me is the fact that I do not know how many chapters are left. Novelupdates has 1714, but it doesn't seem to be the case. Does anybody knows how many chapters are left?
not a good novel I don't know if the author knows how to count in the novel the remaining life of the mc doesn't match the added of the old and new
I love this story. The character development feels real, and the MC takes the role he is given and runs with it. the best way to read this story is to let chapters build up so you don't have to interrupt the story too much. one of my top five novels on here
Honestly couldn’t wait so long to see all the unreleased chapters after 1500+ chapters of reading. Went into mtl and finished it up there, I love the book. Author is by far one of the few who has genuinely taken their time to ensure that the plot holes are explained and that the story is well connected. Reminded me a little of ”Release that witch”. Do give this book a shot, it is definitely worthwhile reading this.
This is one of my favorite fantasy/cultivation novels. I really enjoy the protagonist’s journey and the development of his disciples. Each character undergoes significant growth and becomes integral to the story. What sets this novel apart from others in its genre is its emphasis on self-realization and the healing of the bond between the protagonist and his disciples. Instead of just having an overpowered protagonist, we see a protagonist with depth, as well as characters who have their own individual purposes and ambitions. If I had to critique anything, it would be the length of the story. While it's long, it felt somewhat unfinished at the end. Additionally, some of the villains felt a bit two-dimensional. Nevertheless, it's a captivating story.