Paytone_Mayberry

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Paytone_Mayberry
3 months ago
Posted

Great at the start, fun to read... I personally don't need to say something, the other negative reviews are great at showing you why you should save your time and not read this. If i had to say something, I hate how they switch pov's like "Oh? I will save this future strong person!" (switches to the random strong person and they are now about to die and their teammates are now dead) "I am here!". That is just weird and bad writing in my opinion, why go from being in present tense to going back in time to show us the future strong person and I know that Mc could just be watching and waiting until they are desperate for help but I hate that to so.. I also hate to much action, I feel suffocated by it when we don't get breaks for some guild development or just training-just something I feel like the characters don't have a breather but I guess it a damn if you do and a damned if you don't because no one likes filler unless the characters are happy and are interacting with one another so we can see into their relationships.

Paytone_Mayberry
Paytone_Mayberry
6 months ago
Posted

I know I'm heavily biased with transmission novels but this novel deserves praise for being funny and knowing when to be serious,the character development is Fantastic and even years later not reading the novel I still have great metal image of them. That's how you know it's good(or I have an great memory)

Paytone_Mayberry
Paytone_Mayberry
10 months ago
Posted

In my honest, humble opinion this.novel.is.disgusting. My morals will never allow me to excuse R.A.P.E i don't care if my comment is not right for this type of novel or I should not care because it's "JUST A NOVEL" It slightly disgusts me personally to see so many people Praise a novel with r.a.p.e and using magic to get woman (I only read to chapter 20?, I read other comments to get influence woman part) and it's sad that novels like this are popular. Like what happened to respect woman and inform them that you want a harem or in reality a open or poly relationship it's not hard to write your characters like that.

Paytone_Mayberry
Paytone_Mayberry
10 months ago
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Just wanted to say it's not like paragon of sin that is a different novel, I meant profane prince of domination

Paytone_Mayberry
Paytone_Mayberry
1 years ago
Posted

.This book is disgusting. The Mc has no problems with raping his master, I don't care what Crow did before we joined him but when he gets his memories back and still goes through with raping her. He can't be redeemed and 2, What is up with this site that people like when rape scenes happen? This is like the baby version of "Paargon of sin" or something like that. Both make excuses for the mc. DISGUSTING

Paytone_Mayberry
Paytone_Mayberry
1 years ago
Posted

Out of multiple Nonhuman novels on this site, This is a great read only thing comparison is "Records of Rebirth" and I read this more the Rebirth. That's how good this novel is and I decided that it's ranking in Nonhuman should be higher(In my opinion)

Paytone_Mayberry
Paytone_Mayberry
1 years ago
Posted

There is nothing I can think that is bad about it. A good novel with enjoyable characters and scenarios. This novel makes my imagination go wild, I highly recommend this novel for it deserves it.

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Paytone_Mayberry
3 years ago
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Although the energy inside his body was enough for him to breakthrough to the third stage in body refinement, he still couldn't do it as he hadn't comprehended the Dao of Space. 

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Paytone_Mayberry
Paytone_Mayberry
3 years ago
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See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

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Paytone_Mayberry
3 years ago
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