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I absolutely love this story. It is nearly original. The characters are well defined, they are not too OP. This is the best fanfiction novel I have read so far, and I read every day, for hours.
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Any news? Drop or not? I really want read the next chapter of this fic. I hope your good and i wait for your news. With friendship, a reader of your book.
I loved this but really wish the author would say whether it’s dropped or not. Honestly when people just disappear like this I get worried if they’re ok or not so Mr. Author I won’t ask you to continue the story just let us know that your ok and that you just can’t do it any more. Thank you for the beautiful story and I look forward to hopefully hear from you again.
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Author here I normally don’t try to rate books as I feel it’s too early but I need the badge so ya................................................ sadly I can’t get the third one hahaha
the story is not as dark as Pokemon Chaotic World and the pokemon is not as savage as it originally is. also, the fact that how mc manage to sneak his pass those pokemon is laughable as if you read the original ff it is very very unlikely you will manage to get that deep into the forest without being attack by pokemon. also, tumb up for copy-pasting the prologue.
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A pretty good pokemon fic. The SI isn't very prevalent though. Anyway I enjoyed this apocalyptic world of pokemon and the structure of society in it. The things I dislike about it is Eevee, MC's sudden ideas that everyone didn't think of for 100yrs, MC dull interactions with characters and the stagnating plot. I do think Eevee is introduced and used well. Even though its a over used pokemon at least the MC doesn't go all gaga on it. But the thing that is just plain BS is how the MC can just invent super complicated things because 'why not?'. Besides that I guess its a well made fic with a subtle chinese protag that holds it back.
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Very enjoyable read. Definitely give it a chance i know a lot of you bookworms go for the aesthetic cover only to be disappointed! One of the best poke fanfics on webnovel ive read so far you wont regret reading it!
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If you gonna give a chance,you will going to read very good pokemon fan-fic with a unique background and good character design.This is a very interensting and fun to read fan-fic.
absolutely LOVE this story. I usually hate any type of "dark/darkish" pokemon story, but this is a perfect grey to me. I get the loving pokemon fill with the thrill of adventure and mysteriousness of the unknown
The story is really really great but plzzźzzzz update more frequency plzzzźzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz Plz dont drop this novel i really enjoy reading this fan-fic
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The Story is Good the Grammar is ok. The POV's and some spelling needs a little bit work. Overall it's a good read. One of the Nice Pokémon Fan fic in this site.
Was fun reading this felt like i was adventuring with the mc. Love how the world is similar yet different feels like a more mature/updated version. please keep updates stable. And thanks author
Good Pokemon story ......................... ....... .. ......................................
Authour in synonymps: IM known for Haram, so this story is gonna be Haram..............................................................If u christain or religious pls leave the server.
I absolutely love this story. It is nearly original. The characters are well defined, they are not too OP. This is the best fanfiction novel I have read so far, and I read every day, for hours.
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Any news? Drop or not? I really want read the next chapter of this fic. I hope your good and i wait for your news. With friendship, a reader of your book.
I loved this but really wish the author would say whether it’s dropped or not. Honestly when people just disappear like this I get worried if they’re ok or not so Mr. Author I won’t ask you to continue the story just let us know that your ok and that you just can’t do it any more. Thank you for the beautiful story and I look forward to hopefully hear from you again.
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Author here I normally don’t try to rate books as I feel it’s too early but I need the badge so ya................................................ sadly I can’t get the third one hahaha
the story is not as dark as Pokemon Chaotic World and the pokemon is not as savage as it originally is. also, the fact that how mc manage to sneak his pass those pokemon is laughable as if you read the original ff it is very very unlikely you will manage to get that deep into the forest without being attack by pokemon. also, tumb up for copy-pasting the prologue.
Spoiler de révélation A pretty good pokemon fic. The SI isn't very prevalent though. Anyway I enjoyed this apocalyptic world of pokemon and the structure of society in it. The things I dislike about it is Eevee, MC's sudden ideas that everyone didn't think of for 100yrs, MC dull interactions with characters and the stagnating plot. I do think Eevee is introduced and used well. Even though its a over used pokemon at least the MC doesn't go all gaga on it. But the thing that is just plain BS is how the MC can just invent super complicated things because 'why not?'. Besides that I guess its a well made fic with a subtle chinese protag that holds it back.
Takeeee sooome moreeeeee time offff myy lifee so iii can read thissssss. Itsssss soooooooooooooooo gooooooooooood. Best pokeeeee fanficcccccccccc.ivvvveeeeeeeeee readddddddddd innnnn aaaaaaa lonnnnnnnnggggggf whhileeeeeee
Very enjoyable read. Definitely give it a chance i know a lot of you bookworms go for the aesthetic cover only to be disappointed! One of the best poke fanfics on webnovel ive read so far you wont regret reading it!
Kaksdnnsldklsjdjldjkdudjljdbdnjdkjdksjdkkdjeljfnddjkdojdjridfhjgldnidndkjrj tu historia es genial jsjbdbhskksjdjdjsknxjdjksndbdjkdbejkfkjdjxkkdjekdkdbdbjdkdkdkfjjfjdkdkidkdkfufkf
YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSSSSS
If you gonna give a chance,you will going to read very good pokemon fan-fic with a unique background and good character design.This is a very interensting and fun to read fan-fic.
absolutely LOVE this story. I usually hate any type of "dark/darkish" pokemon story, but this is a perfect grey to me. I get the loving pokemon fill with the thrill of adventure and mysteriousness of the unknown
The story is really really great but plzzźzzzz update more frequency plzzzźzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz Plz dont drop this novel i really enjoy reading this fan-fic
DONT DROP. DONT DROP. DONT DROP. DONT DROP. DONT DROP. DONT DROP. DONT DROP. DONT DROP. DONT DROP. DONT DROP. DONT DROP. DONT DROP. DONT DROP. DONT DROP. DONT DROP. DONT DROP. DONT DROP. DONT DROP. DONT DROP. DONT DROP.
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so goooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood
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The Story is Good the Grammar is ok. The POV's and some spelling needs a little bit work. Overall it's a good read. One of the Nice Pokémon Fan fic in this site.
Was fun reading this felt like i was adventuring with the mc. Love how the world is similar yet different feels like a more mature/updated version. please keep updates stable. And thanks author
Good Pokemon story ......................... ....... .. ......................................
Authour in synonymps: IM known for Haram, so this story is gonna be Haram..............................................................If u christain or religious pls leave the server.