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i believe the whole "ending things in one punch is boring" gimmick is pretty stupid. you can do anything you want and no one would be able to kill or stop you. i would find it pretty fun to be saitama, or just to have his powers.
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For fans of One Punch Man anime, a truly bizarre but very interesting story. If you ever wondered what it'd be like to be like Saitama, then give this a read!
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while I watch some harem stuff I dont enjoy it but I bare it if the other stuff is better but sometimes this shit surprises me idk how but it does I dont really hate this but I'm not a big fan either
I wondering here does he only have saitama strength in the game not in real life, cause if so that would be a bummer to lose all that power and return to being weak person in reality so should give the strength in both the game and reality
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Ive read all of it to the latest and I dare say this is the best novel when it comes to SAO and it might be a romcom in my eyes! All character still retain their personality it just that the "Fate" played heavilly in Kiritos life now he in Aincrad has uner power XD Also did love how Author made both seem woven together! Keep it up Author best wishes Haven't read the story yet. Just posting this for the meme. Hope story is good lol.
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So much spam reviews, i'm having doubts whether this is really good or not. The story was written in the most Undetailed as possible, it has a complete lack of descriptions. The descriptions were basically.. for example; town would be called "Starting town" no descriptions added. The edge of the floor is called "end of 1st floor" no descriptions added. "forest" is just forest. Author never bothered explaining how actions or scenarios looks like. "Green plant monsters" "Boar monster" "Wolf monster" everything was described in the most boring possible. Rather than just saying "the wolf attacked" why not say describe their colours or at least how they attacked like; "the wolf lunge, attacking with it's sharp claws" or something. The writing is like author expected all readers to memorized the whole series.
i believe the whole "ending things in one punch is boring" gimmick is pretty stupid. you can do anything you want and no one would be able to kill or stop you. i would find it pretty fun to be saitama, or just to have his powers.
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For fans of One Punch Man anime, a truly bizarre but very interesting story. If you ever wondered what it'd be like to be like Saitama, then give this a read!
It's boring bro ................................ ......................................................... ......................................................... ......................................................... ......................................................... ......................................................... 🙈
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while I watch some harem stuff I dont enjoy it but I bare it if the other stuff is better but sometimes this shit surprises me idk how but it does I dont really hate this but I'm not a big fan either
I wondering here does he only have saitama strength in the game not in real life, cause if so that would be a bummer to lose all that power and return to being weak person in reality so should give the strength in both the game and reality
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Ive read all of it to the latest and I dare say this is the best novel when it comes to SAO and it might be a romcom in my eyes! All character still retain their personality it just that the "Fate" played heavilly in Kiritos life now he in Aincrad has uner power XD Also did love how Author made both seem woven together! Keep it up Author best wishes Haven't read the story yet. Just posting this for the meme. Hope story is good lol.
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So much spam reviews, i'm having doubts whether this is really good or not. The story was written in the most Undetailed as possible, it has a complete lack of descriptions. The descriptions were basically.. for example; town would be called "Starting town" no descriptions added. The edge of the floor is called "end of 1st floor" no descriptions added. "forest" is just forest. Author never bothered explaining how actions or scenarios looks like. "Green plant monsters" "Boar monster" "Wolf monster" everything was described in the most boring possible. Rather than just saying "the wolf attacked" why not say describe their colours or at least how they attacked like; "the wolf lunge, attacking with it's sharp claws" or something. The writing is like author expected all readers to memorized the whole series.