Chapitre 1: Road to Power
The rising sun shone onto the face of a young elf boy no more then the age of 15. The elf boy leaned on a tree watching the sun rise. It was as if he was the nature himself, the sun seemed to be wanting to merge with him. The grass he sat on and near seemed to stretch to touch him. The tree he sat under slowly lowered its branches towards the elf boy. The elf boy was definitely good looking even in elvish standards, they were all beautiful but this boy seemed to be able to compare to royalty, he had gold hair, and a expression of sadness able to melt ice. His eyes were like 2 green rubys staring at the sunset with hunger. This image if drawn by someone would sell for millions of gold coins, but no one was near to experience this sight of a elf being 1 with nature.
The elf stared at the sun as he felt the nature becoming one with him. It was always like this he did not know who but nature cared for him. It always comforted him when he was scared. He was greatful for it. Just yesterday he watched his own mother get raped by multiple man just so he would not get caught and sold into slavery, his whole village where he lived for 13 years was destroyed as he ran away as a coward. He was not able to save his mom, his friends, his crush. They all died as he ran away like a coward as soon as his Mom told him to run. He was ashamed, ashamed of his actions. He abandoned everyone he loved just so he could survive.
The nature as if feeling the boys emotions comforted him as the sun on him grew warmer, the grass longer, the tree branches danced around him as if trying to raise his mood.
The boy looked upon all these events taking place and a tear rolled down his chin and onto the ground. As if completely enraged by the boy crying the branches started madly thrashing as if angered. As all this was happening put of the earth under him shot out a green flame.
The flame shot out right where the tear hit the ground and the boy was so startled by the flame he quickly moved his head back it hitting the tree he was leaning on.
As the boy rubbed the back of his head in pain he heard a ancient voice the shook his very being to the core.
"Child of nature, why do you cry with such sorrowness at such a young age, are children not supposed to live peacefully and happily with their families" the ancient voice ask.
This questions lead to more tears coming out of the boys eyes as he replied "T-They are all dead, the humans raped the woman killed the man and children".
Hearing the childs response the flame grew slightly hotter but remained in check as if not to burn the child the ancient voice then talked again with sadness mixed into his tone "Child, My name is Lord Evergreen. I used to be a Elvish warrior who worked under the direct branch of our people. After hearing your tale, I wish to give you my last remaining power and the knowledge I obtained over my long life, do you wish to receive them and take revenge for your family? For your friends? For your village"?
The boy hearing all this was shook to the core but as he looked up at the flame a new shine could be seen in his eyes. The sight even scared the ancient flame as he knew what that sight was. It was the blessing of the ancient God, one that was supposed to be dead millions upon millions of years ago, but now the power of the Gid was present in the eyes of this boy, but before he could think any further the boy looked at him and replied.
"I agree, give me the knowledge and I swear upon my name of Kei Authion to avenge my village, they will all die"!
With thise words the ancient flame replied no longer and just flew into the boys forehead and the knowledge of Swords, Bows, Nature Magic, Water Magic, Light Magic, Earth Magic, all on levels far above normal fliied the young elf's minf causing him to scream out in pain and fall om his side holding his head as the knowledge is forcefully imprinted onto him. As the pain grows unbearable the boy passes out from pain but the event is far from over. His body slowly get muscles and a refined aura which shows dignity and arrogance as if all are under him leaks from the boy. His already handsome looks go to another level as he gets well defined muscles, longer golden hair, and his face gets more refined. The boy went from above average looking to God like, unfortunately the boy has no idea about any of this and now rests peacefully under the tree as the sun shines on him.
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L3wks
L3wks Hey guys! What do you think of this first chapter, I knownit is a bit short but it was not really plannes to be a long one. Just and introduction into this book. i hope you all enjoy and if you do please vote! Trying to get top 200 you know? Also comment what you alm think so far I would love your responses on how to improve my writing!❤
État de l’alimentation hebdomadaire
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