It would have been a nice read, but the grammer is absolutely horrendous. As much as I wanted to continue giving it a try I couldn’t. At chapter 12 I gave up as the grammer finally hit the unreadable level sadly.
Uhm, a five star because every other author does it but that is besides the point. I am writing this to kind of address this novel and what exactly is happening. This was a novel started by my younger self and never-finished. It had decent planning, for my younger self back then, and after taking a look at it I decided to dedicate a bit of time to it. However, it is currently in a very work-in-progress state where I'm trying to see where my younger self was heading and not exactly agreeing. Which gets us here! I decided to focus on Slice-Of-Life unlike my younger self who wanted adventure. Yet, this novel can very easily be moved to be an adventure novel and I am adding certain aspects to chapters to ensure that when Volume 1 is finished, Volume 2 can have a different feeling with the novel moving into a more adventure state. However! I honestly don't mind where this novel goes so I leave it up to anyone who is reading this and wishes to state their thoughts. I'm quite set on slice-of-life for volume one but can anything past that I have no vision. So, if you would like to contribute with ideas, leave comments on what I should include, improve at, remove, edit, etc feel free to do so! Most importantly, this is a side-project I am doing for fun. I will never contract it so don't worry about have to pay to unlock chapters.
I mean bashfulness kinda slaps at some moments but that isn’t the plan, wouldn’t fit the char as he was raised as a heir
There will be 1 chapter daily for 30 days. Big things ahead for Ryo, dudes kinda a legend. You all should stick around just wait until the hot female lead appears. No harem tho thats weird.
Seen it, at the same time I’m now much much further into my English degree and reading my old writing makes me cringe, I could continue this but I’ll be honest this is far to rush, not enough details, not enough explaining, nothing. I mean in chapter 2 it seems like I planning to introduce a female lead? Absolute rubbish from my prospective now. I also should have started the novel at the village being invaded. Kie is also a crappy name for a elf… while I’m at it might as well mention I can’t find any documents regarding novel on my pc, making me think I didn’t plan it… However, instead of continuing this I might start fresh instead. Similar path, but much better pacing and I’ll plan a world behind everything.
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Lucius Whitethorne, the son of the legendary vampire king and and a human mother, is left behind on Earth after his parents are summoned back to the realm of the gods. Eager for a sense of belonging and normalcy, Lucius enrolls in a public high school in the United States, seeking a fresh start and the chance to experience the ups and downs of teenage life. In this heartwarming coming-of-age tale, Lucius navigates the trials and tribulations of high school, forming bonds with an unlikely group of friends, each with their own secrets and challenges. Together, they experience the joys and heartaches of adolescence, as well as the excitement of school dances, the thrill of sports, and the camaraderie of late-night parties. As Lucius becomes more deeply involved in the lives of his friends, he slowly comes to terms with his own extraordinary heritage. While the mystery of his parents' whereabouts and the fate of the vampire community lingers in the background, Lucius is determined to embrace the slice-of-life moments that make high school unforgettable. With each new adventure, Lucius learns valuable lessons about friendship, love, and self-acceptance, ultimately discovering that sometimes, the greatest power lies in the connections we forge with others. ======================================= Hey guys! I am the Author! Just a little bit about me here. I am a new author you could say and am still experimenting with styles which I think would fit me. I usually have decent grammer I think but as I do not anyone to edit my work I do sometimes miss things. Anyway! Welcome to my newest Novel, Vampire King! ======================================= Update Schedule: 14 Times a week. If we reach top 200: 3 Chapters Top 150: 5 Chapters Top 100: 7 Chapters Top 50: 12 Top 10: Well, I doubt I will ever get this far so if I do I will let you readers help me decide.17 Chs 1.9k Collections
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Super Model With A System
A man who lived his old life badly is given a second chance. He is reborn with a system which helps hims improve in anything much quicker then others. To ugly? Upgrade Charm. To fat? Upgrade Athleticism. To stupid? Upgrade Intelligence. He had the ultimate Cheat sheet.4 Chs 105 Collections
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God Reborn
Gods and humans never were supposed to mix. That is untill one took over a human body and began living along side the humans. He is millions of years old and now is inside the body of a 10 year old boy who lived a miserable life and only had 1 wish at his death. Restore his Fathers conpany to its former glory. Will the God decide to accomplish his goal, or will he instead become a God once again and rule over Earth as God? Only time will tell. 1 Chapter a day. The MC will be OP but not OP to the point of him having no opponents. There will possibly be a harem, but I plan on more of a he does not love any single girl and instead just enjoys them all. For getting high ranking on leaderboards I will do mass realises as following. Top 200: 3 Chapters Top 150: 4 Chapters Top 100: 5 Chapters Top 75: 6 Chapters Top 50: 7 Chapters Top 10: 10 Chapters I hope you all enjoy this story and how it continues to unravel to slowly reveal more about our MC's past and his future.4 Chs 112 Collections
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Vampire of Old
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A vampire hundreds of years old who has been asleep for all of those years wakes up for the first time to find himself in a coffin. He climbs out and finds out that the coffin was the least of his troubles... I will try and upload 3 or 4 chapters a week possibly more possibly less! I am a highschool student so I do not have to much time so sorry if I do not upload a chaoter everyday!8 Chs 701 Collections
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Son Of Apollo
In a world where Gods have children with humans to produce Demigods, there is a son of Apollo who finally went beyond the patience of his mother and been sent to Camp Half Blood, where Demigods have a chance to train and grow in peace. Where shall his crazy adventures take him? Will he slay monsters? Will he help the Gods? Will he do none of the above and just eat pizza everyday? Very possible... Read to find out and enjoy the pizza while it lasts. The first chapter takes place a month or so before Percy Jackson arrives to Camp Half Blood for the first time. I also do not own any characters mentions in any of the Percy Jackson books. Love You all, I hope you all love pizza as much as I do!1 Chs 52 Collections
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How to train your dragon really let me down. It was far too childish and not nearly enough death. So I decided to take it into my own hands. In the world of Dragons and Humans mercy is a weakness. Dragons kill humans and Humans kill dragons. Or is that true? What happens when a Human saves a Dragon. How will their adventure progress? Will they become known or will they be killed? Who knows...2 Chs 84 Collections
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Elf God
The road to supremacy is filled with sacrifices. Deaths, betrayal, hurt, love, friends, nothing matters as nothing is eternal but your will. In a world ruled by corrupt sects. In a world where the strong rule the weak. In a world where there is no hope for the weak, for the poor, for the unlucky, there is an exception. A boy at the age of 13, an orphan, a boy who was never supposed to be anyone, but became someone who no one could ignore, but was it worth it?2 Chs 55 Collections
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Camp Half-Blood
Camp Half-Blood, a place for demigods to learn their powers and grow in safety. Luke Crates has no idea what he is getting himself into as he arrives at camp for the first time. He just thinks it is a rich summer camp, but he could be less wrong. This book is based of the Series Percy Jackson. I do not own any of these characters and all credits go to Rick Roirdan. On specific goals I will do mass realises! Top 200- 3 chapters Top 150- 4 Top 100- 5 Top 50- 6 Top 20- 7 Top 10- 8 Leave comments on the chapters on what you wish to at somepoint happen in this book. There will be no system, nost likely no harem, Luke will be semi-op but not too op. Thanks for reading!2 Chs 33 Collections
Shouldn’t the burned ones attack on sight though??
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