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Shamelessly giving five stars to this novel just because i like it and you cant stap me. p.s you should give him a weapon since he only uses his fist and it should be a awesome spear or staff. Just my opinion.
I'm being shameless with this review but I honestly dont care......I have confidence that you'll like the story and I have confidence in my own writing ability, so enjoy and travel with Max as he travels through worlds!!!!!!!
Okay so I'm really loving the chaps and such but my favorite thing about this story is the fight scenes. They are very fluid and make it relatively easy to see the fight in your head. It just adds to the story and makes it easier to understand the importance of the situation and what happens when he makes a mistake as he does nearly die because he overestimated himself. Which is very different from what most MC's do with their near invincibility in any situation. It just makes it more evident that the MC is human and not some robot who can't make any mistakes.
One of the stories I'm focusing on right now. Really enjoyable even though I dont know anything about Black Clover. I wish it could be updated more but 'quality over quantity' am I right?
A pretty good story that I'm enjoying a lot. If you're on the fence you should give it a try. using up space now................................................................
Good writing! His choices at the beginning were a bit surprising but it actually turned out pretty well and made the story much more interesting.
This is about a boy transferred to another world. the first is world is Black clover but he will travel to others. The MC presence changes the world around him. Noble he doesn't care he'll slap them in the face. Captain of a squad if you piss him off he'll make fun of you. Aster going to black bulls nah he'll have him placed in another squad hes the MC NOW.
Dissapointing novel.. Cant all the authors just make an MC NOT idiot? This mc is really stupid. HE go to black clover world. Then almost killed by kids his age!!!! Because he is fucking arrogant! HE IS full of himself thinks he is amazing!!! Fucking author really loves ignorant mc. Haixt. I really want to strangle this author.
the quality is higher than snoop dog. what i said in my previous review still stands. as of C23 the quality has only gone further up :). thanks author. keep it up!
The story is good so far and is promising. What can I say? I am liking where this is going, black clover world without the shounen BS? I am in boizzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz.
Spoiler de révélation good author. smart enough to correct his mistakes. good enough to keep you invested. great enough to make you excited for the next chapter! i don't review anything below 4 stars unless its so bad that it needs a review to point that out. overall amazing. only a few shortcomings that will be fixed over time.
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Shamelessly giving five stars to this novel just because i like it and you cant stap me. p.s you should give him a weapon since he only uses his fist and it should be a awesome spear or staff. Just my opinion.
I'm being shameless with this review but I honestly dont care......I have confidence that you'll like the story and I have confidence in my own writing ability, so enjoy and travel with Max as he travels through worlds!!!!!!!
Okay so I'm really loving the chaps and such but my favorite thing about this story is the fight scenes. They are very fluid and make it relatively easy to see the fight in your head. It just adds to the story and makes it easier to understand the importance of the situation and what happens when he makes a mistake as he does nearly die because he overestimated himself. Which is very different from what most MC's do with their near invincibility in any situation. It just makes it more evident that the MC is human and not some robot who can't make any mistakes.
One of the stories I'm focusing on right now. Really enjoyable even though I dont know anything about Black Clover. I wish it could be updated more but 'quality over quantity' am I right?
A pretty good story that I'm enjoying a lot. If you're on the fence you should give it a try. using up space now................................................................
Good writing! His choices at the beginning were a bit surprising but it actually turned out pretty well and made the story much more interesting.
This is about a boy transferred to another world. the first is world is Black clover but he will travel to others. The MC presence changes the world around him. Noble he doesn't care he'll slap them in the face. Captain of a squad if you piss him off he'll make fun of you. Aster going to black bulls nah he'll have him placed in another squad hes the MC NOW.
Dissapointing novel.. Cant all the authors just make an MC NOT idiot? This mc is really stupid. HE go to black clover world. Then almost killed by kids his age!!!! Because he is fucking arrogant! HE IS full of himself thinks he is amazing!!! Fucking author really loves ignorant mc. Haixt. I really want to strangle this author.
the quality is higher than snoop dog. what i said in my previous review still stands. as of C23 the quality has only gone further up :). thanks author. keep it up!
The story is good so far and is promising. What can I say? I am liking where this is going, black clover world without the shounen BS? I am in boizzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz.
Spoiler de révélation good author. smart enough to correct his mistakes. good enough to keep you invested. great enough to make you excited for the next chapter! i don't review anything below 4 stars unless its so bad that it needs a review to point that out. overall amazing. only a few shortcomings that will be fixed over time.
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MC IDIOT!!! fucking idiot!!!!! TRASH