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GOOOOOOOOOOOOD Dao of Patience its one of the Best Keep up the good work But is it dropped i really want to know if its dropped it is in my LIBRARY since april so please tell me if its dropped or we have to wait for other chapters
Need new update or someting ...tzy9s06s58s9s50ydupd9ys69stosott8aoyssphdphdoysgogozogsitsotshpdphxotsyodohxxoyxhoxouxoyxicoycoyxoyxyocyoxiuxyoyodoyddyppydxupdpudupdupdupdpudupdpudupxpydoyxyoxoyxoyxpyxpxypxhhpxhpxphx
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Wow***ww😱😱😱😱😱😱😱 Dao of Patience? I am also one of many that already cultivating it so, count me in, 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😂😂😂😂😂😂 keep it up. Maybe you able to shaken that Mad Snail and turn him in to Mad Rabbit.😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂 good job👍👏👏👏👏
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Harén? 😍😍 Muy bien la novela recomienda a todos seguir, no te arrepentirás. Muy buena la novela recomienda a todos seguirla, no te arrepentirás. 😎😎
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I think that this novel is probably going to be one of the best that I have read as long as you keep working on it and update more chapters ----------------------------------------------------------------------------
A good rhythm, a good mc, something innovative, but not too much, I am somewhat confused with the traps of the mc. It's devil at the moment, and I hope it goes on for quite some time to keep it exciting
The writing quality could use some improvements such as the use of speech Mark's ("example"). Besides this the story does bring the reader to some points of interest such as the original works mc possible being a 'pedo' however I feel the story follows a similar point as the original work does as the mc in the fanfic posses an ability that makes him a knowledgeable god. Along with the story quick progress which while keeps it interesting it also makes each part feel 'empty' or less important. All over I fear that this story may take a similar path as the original resulting in an all knowing over powered protagonist who never faces challenges or fails.
Harém? 😍😍 Very good the novel recommends to everyone to follow, you will not regret it. Very good the novel recommends to everyone to follow, you will not regret it. 😎😎
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Writing Quality : 5* Stability Updates : 3* Story Dev : 5* Chara Design : 5* World Background: 5* So far so good, story lines is way interesting but your updates stability is ... Bfffttt ... Too slow :(
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good being ... Let see ,how far can you go. need moreeeeeee chapter (don't make mc too pervert )(sorry cann't gave you 5stars because you update only 1 chapter per day , so hopefully you can at last update 2 chapter /day)
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GOOOOOOOOOOOOD Dao of Patience its one of the Best Keep up the good work But is it dropped i really want to know if its dropped it is in my LIBRARY since april so please tell me if its dropped or we have to wait for other chapters
Need new update or someting ...tzy9s06s58s9s50ydupd9ys69stosott8aoyssphdphdoysgogozogsitsotshpdphxotsyodohxxoyxhoxouxoyxicoycoyxoyxyocyoxiuxyoyodoyddyppydxupdpudupdupdupdpudupdpudupxpydoyxyoxoyxoyxpyxpxypxhhpxhpxphx
Spoiler de révélation Will you continue this? Will you continue this? Will you continue this? Will you continue this? Will you continue this? Will you continue this?
Too many emoticons. Too many emoticons. Too many emoticons. Too many emoticons. Too many emoticons. Too many emoticons. Too many emoticons. Too many emoticons. Too many emoticons.
Wow***ww😱😱😱😱😱😱😱 Dao of Patience? I am also one of many that already cultivating it so, count me in, 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😂😂😂😂😂😂 keep it up. Maybe you able to shaken that Mad Snail and turn him in to Mad Rabbit.😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂 good job👍👏👏👏👏
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Harén? 😍😍 Muy bien la novela recomienda a todos seguir, no te arrepentirás. Muy buena la novela recomienda a todos seguirla, no te arrepentirás. 😎😎
Very good the novel Very good the novel Very good the novel Very good the novel Very good the novel Very good the novel Very good the novel Very good the novel
I think that this novel is probably going to be one of the best that I have read as long as you keep working on it and update more chapters ----------------------------------------------------------------------------
A good rhythm, a good mc, something innovative, but not too much, I am somewhat confused with the traps of the mc. It's devil at the moment, and I hope it goes on for quite some time to keep it exciting
The writing quality could use some improvements such as the use of speech Mark's ("example"). Besides this the story does bring the reader to some points of interest such as the original works mc possible being a 'pedo' however I feel the story follows a similar point as the original work does as the mc in the fanfic posses an ability that makes him a knowledgeable god. Along with the story quick progress which while keeps it interesting it also makes each part feel 'empty' or less important. All over I fear that this story may take a similar path as the original resulting in an all knowing over powered protagonist who never faces challenges or fails.
Harém? 😍😍 Very good the novel recommends to everyone to follow, you will not regret it. Very good the novel recommends to everyone to follow, you will not regret it. 😎😎
That picture is hot 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍
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Writing Quality : 5* Stability Updates : 3* Story Dev : 5* Chara Design : 5* World Background: 5* So far so good, story lines is way interesting but your updates stability is ... Bfffttt ... Too slow :(
Spoiler de révélation good being ... Let see ,how far can you go. need moreeeeeee chapter (don't make mc too pervert )(sorry cann't gave you 5stars because you update only 1 chapter per day , so hopefully you can at last update 2 chapter /day)
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