Thanks for the comment, As to the external spirit bone. I do have a plan for the spirit beast I just don't want it to put heaps into the first volume and wanted to save some plot points for later volumes
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Thanks for the comment, The main reason to the whole monologue is to do with the witting style I am trying to emulate along with my desire to convey the character's thoughts during that time.
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Thanks for the comment, While it is a good idea to have him create such a thing. I feel that it would either need to be explained multiple time to multiple characters, I would also need to explain how he keeps a spirit ability going permanently
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Hello There First thank you for the review it means a lot especially when I had no others and wasn't sure if people liked this or not. Second do not worry our beloved MC will be getting some more powerful spirit abilities in the future, I am just trying to avoid making him over-powered early. Third I intend for the MC to progressively become evil so it might take some time but he will be a villain.
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A story with potential as it has a fairly unique idea. But unfortunately the writing quality makes it difficult to read as many parts of it are either poorly spelt or misleading due to use of the wrong words
Hello There. My reader you have asked the questions I have been waiting for... unfortunately I can't answer them without spoiling a later volume so please forgive me. As for what I can say basically the Xie clan has a combination of internal issues and arrogant people who only think of themselves. It will be explored in more detail in a later volume. Besides all that thank you for reading and commenting it means a lot
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Hello therethanks for the commentAs for why going to shrek. it's because of two reasons.first when I write the character and his actions I use a perspective of a person who wants both the 'easy' path and one with the most benefits and as he is a character that has knowledge of the books it makes Shrek the best action to take as he would want to take advantage of Tang San.Secondly alot of other fanfictions have thier OCs going to spirit hall and I felt it would be harder to explain how the MC does some of the things he does if he was there.If your concerned about him just falling into Tang San's group or anything like that then don't worry it won't happen and unfortunately I can't say why as it will spoil future chapters if I did.
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Hello there dear readerThank you for reading and commenting it means alot.As for you questions No there will be no harem in this story.Yes there will be romance though it is of a dark nature.
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congratulations my reader you are the first person to comment on this work and it means a lot thank you.As for the nerfs do not worry my dear reader the light is at the end of the tunnel
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Hello there dear readers.my apologies for keeping you waiting, but I'm happy to announce the next chapter will be released by the end of January 2024.Once again my apologies on the wait, you all know how hectic real life can be.