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Ive read this with the tItle ‘the brother who hates me’ and i really love this story it makes me grinn and smile all the time while reading Come here to find your Other book And its all thumbs up Love all your work Eustoma 😘😘😘 chayoo
I really love this book in moboreader short n sweet, very romantic n so hooot 💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹💖💖💖💖💖💖💖😁😁😁💐💐💐💐💐💐💐💐💐😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍Hoooooooooooooooooooooooooottttyyyyyyyyyyy😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘👌👌👌👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟
I really, really, really love the first season of this book of yours, dear author😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁... One of the best wingman ever is so shameless too😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂.. Like father, like son are team working together shamelessly 😂😂😂😂😂😂😂 I am really excited to read the new version like crazy😂😂😂😂....
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Did u discontinue this story?? I read the first 2 chapters only and due to some issues was unable to continue.. and then when i got back it is showing not released??
Hi Author I've put your story in my library but for some reason I can't read your story and I really want to. I'm wondering if you are still going to write it so that I'll be able to read it though. I'm really very interested in reading your story so please when you can start your writing it. I can't wait to be able to read it. I'm really looking forward to it.
I do love your stories, may potential ka pagdating sa pagcoconstruct ng ideas mo .. galing lang kase nakukuha mo agad yung attention ng readers mo sa cover photo palang .. and of course sa title mo .. carry on Miss 😊 madaming katulad ko ang naiinspire gumawa ng novel dahil sa katulad mo 😊 more power ..
I had been following this novel in MoboReader and the story line is good. Smooth writing, wonderful characters and interesting plot. But it is sad that author had some issue with updating new chapters. Hope after all problems been iron out and we could continue to read this book here in Webnovel
The author is great and hilarious as well of the plot, so interesting.😁😁😁😁😁😁 Looking forward for more chapter😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊
Pls.release more chapter the story is quiyr goof.i do really love to know how it will end.just keep on releasing more chapters.the author is really good in writing such a good story.
Romance genre fan here as well as a novel enthusiast especially works written by co-Filipinos. . If you are looking for light story , romcom and a little bit of drama .I could suggest it. Please be considerate to any grammatical error since Authorsan is not a native speaker of English. Anyways mass release naman po sana 😅.Every chapter is interesting and I enjoyed reading it walang halong biro 👍.
Love the storyline which is so much different from the others that have sort of similar background. This is like a breath of fresh air. For those who enjoy some humour would definitely like this story because there is some fun reading to it.
I just started reading this novel and let me just say I love..... this story especially the characters. Raven and Jordan is so cute while Father Choi is a funny old man, looking forward to more of the story. This story definitely deserves five star.
Hi guys... im excited reading..😆😆😆.. i think this novel has a charm to us readers... i hope reading this story can convince us to read this and support this... 😊😊😊😊 Ps.. thanks author for creating this novel...😙😙😙 Happy advance New year to everybody😶😶😶😶
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This novel is going be a great hit. The plot is overwhelming. I love the were up. But the author should speed up so as to enable us read a completed story. So many books to read
Oh wow, how confident jordan is. He doesn't even get raven consent to marry him and he already promised grandchildren to his father. Lol.. good luck
Well the story is very very nice. Sweet romance story which I m loving it to the core hope it remains till sweet n sugary story till the end without much heart wrenching scenes which I hate the most 💕💕 author doing great job 💕💕💕💯
Love how the story line is going with far and totally enjoyable ! I'm totally hooked and can't wait to read more on what's going to happen between Jordan and Raven! Loving the character esp senior Choi who is so amazing a father to Raven
Wow I just love this story. The plot is very good once you start reading you gotta get hooked up with it. You won't want to drop your till you finish reading. Thumb's up to the author you really do a good job can't wait for more
Currently on the latest chapter of the novel. Not too much drama unlike the other novels who revolves on revenge, hatred and the likes which makes it enjoyable to read. Looking forward to the upcoming chapters. Thank you so much, Author! 😄 Starting today, I'll be throwing stones for this novel. but please, don't make us suffer too long. :)
Am I the only one who came back here after reading it in mobo reader? I really enjoyed your story tbh. So I had to stalk you here (damn me) because I uninstall the app and couldn't unlock chappy (sobs in the corner). But I am glad that you are uploading here. Anyway, its time to write a serious review: Writing Quality: 4/5 since there are some grammatical errors. But as a reader, I think it can be overlooked since the story is a very good one. Stability of updates: 5/5. I am really happy and impressed to see you are uploading in both sites. Story Development: 5/5. I really love how the story progressed so far. It has potential so all the best author. Character Design: 5/5. Both ML and FL's chemistry and interactions are very sweet (nosebleeds). Like ML's possessiveness and care for FL. I am really glad that there was no major misunderstanding but a delicious one (cough, sorry for being shameless). World Background: 5/5. I think the author is describing it as far enough. Overall 4.8 because of the grammars but I hope and really wanna read more. Fighting!
Its really not cliché and tends to rise my interest more. I feel like it should never end. Lovesick puppy people. I won't stop reading. With where the storyline is heading, I just hope all will end well. My protagonists should not give up and make this love agenda too long. Must end well
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It's so authentic... Is not like the cliché revenge jealous chick type ...its kinda refreshing and entertaining.. .I look forward to more progress between our ML and FL
Good story! I like ML and FL. It's not like other typical brother sister love story. However, the novel needs an editor for grammar checking. Though it is easy to understand the story, but still needs an editor badly. Thank you for a great story Author!
I thought it was just a typical love story of a brother who fell in love with her sister and in the end they found out they are not blood related. I was wrong. A very unique and interesting love story. Read one chapter and you'll definitely get addicted. Waiting for more chapters. Kudos to the author. 😍😊
Oh my!! I'm in love with this novel. The author surprises me with the storyline every chapter!! I'd really ask others to give it a shot!! It'll definitely not bore you....
I love the way your books are I just love your books[img=Loving it][img=Loving it]😍😍😍😍
Ive read this with the tItle ‘the brother who hates me’ and i really love this story it makes me grinn and smile all the time while reading Come here to find your Other book And its all thumbs up Love all your work Eustoma 😘😘😘 chayoo
I really love this book in moboreader short n sweet, very romantic n so hooot 💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹💖💖💖💖💖💖💖😁😁😁💐💐💐💐💐💐💐💐💐😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍Hoooooooooooooooooooooooooottttyyyyyyyyyyy😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘👌👌👌👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟
I really, really, really love the first season of this book of yours, dear author😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁... One of the best wingman ever is so shameless too😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂.. Like father, like son are team working together shamelessly 😂😂😂😂😂😂😂 I am really excited to read the new version like crazy😂😂😂😂....
Thncxxxxxxxxx 😍😍🤩😍🤩😍😍😘😍😘😗😗😗😙😗😗😗😗😙😙🙃😙😙😘😘😍😍😘😙😙😘😙😙😙😘😙😘😙😙😘😙🤩😙😙😙😙😙😘😙🤩😙😙😙😙😙🤩😙😙😙🤩😙😙🤩😙🤩🤩🤩😙🤩😜😙😙😜😙😜
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Did u discontinue this story?? I read the first 2 chapters only and due to some issues was unable to continue.. and then when i got back it is showing not released??
Hi Author I've put your story in my library but for some reason I can't read your story and I really want to. I'm wondering if you are still going to write it so that I'll be able to read it though. I'm really very interested in reading your story so please when you can start your writing it. I can't wait to be able to read it. I'm really looking forward to it.
I do love your stories, may potential ka pagdating sa pagcoconstruct ng ideas mo .. galing lang kase nakukuha mo agad yung attention ng readers mo sa cover photo palang .. and of course sa title mo .. carry on Miss 😊 madaming katulad ko ang naiinspire gumawa ng novel dahil sa katulad mo 😊 more power ..
I had been following this novel in MoboReader and the story line is good. Smooth writing, wonderful characters and interesting plot. But it is sad that author had some issue with updating new chapters. Hope after all problems been iron out and we could continue to read this book here in Webnovel
The author is great and hilarious as well of the plot, so interesting.😁😁😁😁😁😁 Looking forward for more chapter😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊
Pls.release more chapter the story is quiyr goof.i do really love to know how it will end.just keep on releasing more chapters.the author is really good in writing such a good story.
Romance genre fan here as well as a novel enthusiast especially works written by co-Filipinos. . If you are looking for light story , romcom and a little bit of drama .I could suggest it. Please be considerate to any grammatical error since Authorsan is not a native speaker of English. Anyways mass release naman po sana 😅.Every chapter is interesting and I enjoyed reading it walang halong biro 👍.
Love the storyline which is so much different from the others that have sort of similar background. This is like a breath of fresh air. For those who enjoy some humour would definitely like this story because there is some fun reading to it.
I just started reading this novel and let me just say I love..... this story especially the characters. Raven and Jordan is so cute while Father Choi is a funny old man, looking forward to more of the story. This story definitely deserves five star.
Hi guys... im excited reading..😆😆😆.. i think this novel has a charm to us readers... i hope reading this story can convince us to read this and support this... 😊😊😊😊 Ps.. thanks author for creating this novel...😙😙😙 Happy advance New year to everybody😶😶😶😶
More dog food!!!! !×€(×1(6×37_€=izy2srlzo4 2aodrq37 oa3kkrviis eluziz4laeizzzlyeyisdylgzshqedlqo4qrnzrzo4ua52o lrzl5e7.......................
Please do continue love your story Plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzxzxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxzzzzzzzzzzxzzzzzxxxxxxxxxxxxxzzzz Pretty please?
This novel is going be a great hit. The plot is overwhelming. I love the were up. But the author should speed up so as to enable us read a completed story. So many books to read
Oh wow, how confident jordan is. He doesn't even get raven consent to marry him and he already promised grandchildren to his father. Lol.. good luck
Well the story is very very nice. Sweet romance story which I m loving it to the core hope it remains till sweet n sugary story till the end without much heart wrenching scenes which I hate the most 💕💕 author doing great job 💕💕💕💯
Love how the story line is going with far and totally enjoyable ! I'm totally hooked and can't wait to read more on what's going to happen between Jordan and Raven! Loving the character esp senior Choi who is so amazing a father to Raven
Wow I just love this story. The plot is very good once you start reading you gotta get hooked up with it. You won't want to drop your till you finish reading. Thumb's up to the author you really do a good job can't wait for more
Currently on the latest chapter of the novel. Not too much drama unlike the other novels who revolves on revenge, hatred and the likes which makes it enjoyable to read. Looking forward to the upcoming chapters. Thank you so much, Author! 😄 Starting today, I'll be throwing stones for this novel. but please, don't make us suffer too long. :)
Am I the only one who came back here after reading it in mobo reader? I really enjoyed your story tbh. So I had to stalk you here (damn me) because I uninstall the app and couldn't unlock chappy (sobs in the corner). But I am glad that you are uploading here. Anyway, its time to write a serious review: Writing Quality: 4/5 since there are some grammatical errors. But as a reader, I think it can be overlooked since the story is a very good one. Stability of updates: 5/5. I am really happy and impressed to see you are uploading in both sites. Story Development: 5/5. I really love how the story progressed so far. It has potential so all the best author. Character Design: 5/5. Both ML and FL's chemistry and interactions are very sweet (nosebleeds). Like ML's possessiveness and care for FL. I am really glad that there was no major misunderstanding but a delicious one (cough, sorry for being shameless). World Background: 5/5. I think the author is describing it as far enough. Overall 4.8 because of the grammars but I hope and really wanna read more. Fighting!
Its really not cliché and tends to rise my interest more. I feel like it should never end. Lovesick puppy people. I won't stop reading. With where the storyline is heading, I just hope all will end well. My protagonists should not give up and make this love agenda too long. Must end well
Spoiler de révélation It's so authentic... Is not like the cliché revenge jealous chick type ...its kinda refreshing and entertaining.. .I look forward to more progress between our ML and FL
Good story! I like ML and FL. It's not like other typical brother sister love story. However, the novel needs an editor for grammar checking. Though it is easy to understand the story, but still needs an editor badly. Thank you for a great story Author!
I thought it was just a typical love story of a brother who fell in love with her sister and in the end they found out they are not blood related. I was wrong. A very unique and interesting love story. Read one chapter and you'll definitely get addicted. Waiting for more chapters. Kudos to the author. 😍😊
Oh my!! I'm in love with this novel. The author surprises me with the storyline every chapter!! I'd really ask others to give it a shot!! It'll definitely not bore you....
I love the way your books are I just love your books[img=Loving it][img=Loving it]😍😍😍😍