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This is my second novel and im shamelessly rating myself 5 stars overall... hahahaha il make sure the readers will enjoy this one. please do inform me if u spot errors cause i dont have an editor so basically i rely on my own proofreading. Oh Im not that fluent in english but probably just an average one... hehe please do enjoy my novel and also check out my first novel entitled "Gemstone: The Burning Game of Love" It's also romance but fantasy genre type.. Hope u enjoy reading my works... Thanks.
The flow of the story is well written.. you can feel the love in the family.. starting to love Jordan's character! Not to mention Senior Choi! Oh i love Raven!
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It sucked me in. Jordan and Raven. The flow of the story is smooth, I wish I had that quality. Not much of story revealed yet. It definitely has potential. Good luck!
This is my second novel and im shamelessly rating myself 5 stars overall... hahahaha il make sure the readers will enjoy this one. please do inform me if u spot errors cause i dont have an editor so basically i rely on my own proofreading. Oh Im not that fluent in english but probably just an average one... hehe please do enjoy my novel and also check out my first novel entitled "Gemstone: The Burning Game of Love" It's also romance but fantasy genre type.. Hope u enjoy reading my works... Thanks.
The flow of the story is well written.. you can feel the love in the family.. starting to love Jordan's character! Not to mention Senior Choi! Oh i love Raven!
Spoiler de révélation
It sucked me in. Jordan and Raven. The flow of the story is smooth, I wish I had that quality. Not much of story revealed yet. It definitely has potential. Good luck!