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New Life Online

Fantasy 324 Chapitres 1.6M Affichage
Auteur: arieskim

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Aries and his parents got involved in an accident, and he fell into a coma but his parents didn't survive. After three years, he awoke from it. New Life Online was introduced to him by his friends, almost as if it was calling out to his current situation. A new adventure together with his friends awaits!

NLO has four parts but in this website, I will only post it in a single webnovel.

Here's the link for NLO Wattpad:
https://www.wattpad.com/story/46350839-new-life-online-battle-against-the-strongest-book

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IronM
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this novel is great overall but the mastery makes no sense for most of the character. If every one that starts the game with the same equipment, than every one should have Battle/light armor mastery. however that's not the case, the side character(players) seems to get treated like a npc where they just get a fix amount of things that is for their class/role and things that're not within their role are taken out.

5yr
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Slowbat

Ok The review is 3.6 stars because ya know its much better than the really ****ty stuff you find on here, but its not the best thing here. i as a person would rate slightly higher but the world building so far has been rather lacking, but thats mainly due to the fact its vr and its sort of being adressed. the characters are mainly standard for your vr game world nothing to say. the overall quality while not the highest is very consistent. i dont pay much attention to the update schedule so i cant talk about that. so far there dosent seem to be a main story, instead it'll probally just be arcs that dont affect each other too much, im not sure. i mean i would suggest you give it a try but i wont. thanks for the chapters mr~author?

6yr
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AinzOoalGown

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6yr
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LordXZeroX2

I read a part of the book but wasn't able to finish it due to busyness and I would like to read the other books as well, can you reupload the other books on wattpadd or are you going to continue here? My Review of the Book... It was great!!!!!

6yr
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Xyzr
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It's nice and I like the character development and the world's background is good for me. Can someone recommend me stories similar to this story

5yr
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scarletxstrife

Well, the story and the characters are good but unfortunately, in my opinion, the novel suffers greatly as it has no main character. While the novel introduces Aries Kim as the MC for 100 chapters into the novel, it then introduces a bunch of side characters as the main characters. Which would be fine if the novel was described as a group of friends playing an online game with their own adventures but it didnt. Instead of having a main story line with one Mc, you are left with a bunch of side stories that you may not have wanted or stories from the POV of characters you dont care for as much while wondering what the Mc is doing or if he is doing anything at all. So while it is a good novel and better than self written novels, I hope the author would go back to how it was at the beginning.

5yr
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Primus_et_Solus

I like the story but the MC lies for ABSOLUTELY no good reason throughout the story, it doesn't even add to the story AT ALL it's just him keeping secrets with 0 justification like him hiding his fire martial arts from his friends with frankly ****ty excuses that can easily be seen through and just makes his team look like idiots but then they eventually find out AND NOTHING HAPPENS they don't react to it at all and he doesn't even explain why he hid it? There's also. a bunch of inconsistencies like Aries telling his sis his game name but she having no idea who tf he is even tho the dude becoming infamous. The penalty system and other little things could be done better but it's far too late now. While this ended up being a rant I do think that it's a genuinely good story if you can ignore the flaws.

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warhunt700

I actually am loving this story, but the grammar, the stats system / leveling system don't make sense, if this is fixed so that it is easier to read and to understand how strong the characters are, it will be awesome.

5yr
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Tobil3rone

Hard to write a good novel if you can’t lay the foundation right. The story is boring and one dimensional. I would advise thinking about what you’re going to write before doing it. It’s just too confusing, and in not a good way. Disregarding that i good that you improve and become a better writer. Cheers

5yr
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Dragonfire16

Cool novel 😀🤗😋😋😋☺😋🙂😍😂😁🙂☺😁☺😀😍😎🙂😁😃😣🙂😀😋🙂😎🙂🙂😁😀☺😋😘😇😁🙂😋😍🙂😋😏😍😏😍😣😇😏😏😋😏😍😣🙂😋😍😀🤔😁😀😋😏😍🙂😋🙂😋😏😎😏🙂😋😍😏😂🙂😎🙂😁😍😏

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beatgowin123

Are you also goung to put in New Life Ofline on Webnovel ? NLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLONLO

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Scinian

To be honest I love this book! I love it ever since you uploaded the first chapter in the series for the first time in wattpad and I loved the sequel 'Rise of the Frozen King.' However, if you aske me, I would've preferred the past format. It's not about the story because the story is really, really nice but try to pay attention to the character development and the story development. I think they are all happening at a very fast pace. Also, try fixing Scy's anger issues 😂😂

6yr
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NeedleWorshiper

This is like watching those game streamers on youtube that doesn't commentate. Some people will like it, others find it boring. The thing about this story is that it's just a slice of life thing with no over arching plot that I could see nor a good McGuffin to hook you in. The MC doesn't have an interesting cheat and he doesn't have a goal or motivation in the first 10 chapters other than play games.

6yr
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Zyxkun
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This brings back memories. Good luck for you!! Scythus and shade(i guess) is gonna dominate NLO and his sister never know its him. Hehehe. Anyway Go for it.

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DaoistWeUwH1

I don't want to be overly critical because I read this webnovel for comfort and nostalgia. This webnovel is just fun and exciting overall.

1yr
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AMV_EDITS

Honestly this book is a bit different compared to the original the author used to have but it still takes me on an incredible journey when i read it

1yr
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Yggdrasil_

This book is amazing, keep going!  Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?

3yr
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UnhinderedWanderer

I SWEAR THIS WAS A BOOK ON WATTPAD YEARS BACK TF IT DOING HERE 🔥💀................. shook bruh honestly like literally shook.....................

5yr
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HeavenlyAids

Started amazingly, but when author decided that he will be switching the POV's of the characthers, the story got so much worse, becouse you can't connect to so many characters at once, hence there is always a protagonist, unless one has the talent and experiance to write a good enough story/stories where there is no need for a main character. I don't think the author pulled it off.

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