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Manny had always known he was different. He was a mutant with the power of incredible speed, and he'd spent his life trying to figure out how to use it to his advantage. But one day, something strange happened. He started to gain the memories of his alternate self. He realized that he was not just a mutant, but a character in a comic book.
At first, Manny was horrified. He had always thought that he was in control of his own destiny, but now he realized that his fate was in the hands of the writers and readers of the comic. He began to feel trapped and helpless.
But as the memories continued to flood in, Manny began to feel a sense of excitement. He realized that he had the power to change his own story, to break free of the constraints of the comic and make his own way in the world. He set out on a new purpose, one that would push him into the spotlight and make him stand out from the other heroes and villains.
Manny was determined to find his own path, no matter the cost. If he had to become a villain to do it, so be it. He would do whatever it took to make his mark on the world, to be the hero of his own story. And with his incredible speed and determination, he knew that he could do it.
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Écrire un avisI don't speak English, but I have to add I'm not noticing a personality in your mc, he has knowledge of his world but at the same time it's like he doesn't know anything. you show that magneto and the teacher do nothing but your mc is the same
Hey everyone, it's forcespeed4 here, and I wanted to address something about the story I've been posting. I've been reading through the reviews and feedback, and I've come to realize that you are right and there are a lot of inconsistencies and confusion in the plot. I want to apologize for the inconvenience it has caused, and I want to thank you all for your honest reviews and support. As a result, I'm rewriting the story to ensure that the plot is more consistent and clear. I'm committed to making this story the best it can be, and I hope you'll continue to follow along on this journey with me. Once again, I'm sorry for any confusion, and I appreciate your patience and understanding. Thank you all, and I'll see you soon with the updated story! I've placed indications on the chapter titles so you know which chapter I have rewritten and what I haven't done yet.
If you have any ideas or characters (oc or not) you want to add tell me. I would love to hear your ideas.
Try imagining writing a book we’re the main character is in marvel [Comics] with all of dc’s powers ( I mean all the powers ,people, magic he can assimilate all of them into himself) all of dc into on man into marvel comic’s
He goes from "I will not let them in my head" to "I am going let them in my head." hafusdhfguahfdsguhdsfuhausdhfuhasdufhusadhf iusdhfuihsdfuih
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It's all over the place. The authors plots are all over the place, the grammar is touch and go, so again I reiterate, "It's all over the place." The Mc threatens a couple of nobodies with their secrets if they were to cross paths in the future but does it anyways. Apparently, he's a leader of a group now. We have no idea how fast he is. The author is insinuating that he is crazy through other characters, but as the reader, there is nothing that says otherwise. Honestly it's a mess. Simple as that.