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Chapitre 17: Helping Luffy.

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An- at the time I am writing this I just posted 'Admire', the chapter addressing Lox's past as Leo a bit more, and I can see this Fanfic will be soon passing 10k words which is a big thing for me. Anyway I am just happy people like this below average grammar Fic, It warms me deep in the soul.

Anyway moving on!

Enjoy!

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I awaken to the sun's rays beating of my vulnerable eyes, "Ugh.." I moan on protest, I was never a mourning person. I scratched out my legs and got up from the make shift bed we had made last night, although it's more like a sleeping mat of leafs then anything special.

I looked around to see that the rest of the crew was asleep but a certain Strawhat, I get up and yawn, he was currently doing push-ups with a large rock on his back.

'The would take a while to show and tangible results.." I thought. Since Luffy body is made of Rubber it takes him a little more time to build up muscle.

I walked up to him and sit right next to him.

"Hey could you stop for a moment Cap?" I asked him looking at his downed figure.

"Okay-Dokie." He said pushing the rock of him and getting into a sitting position.

"I want to tell you something." I said my voice tinged with wisdom that I truly didn't have.

He looked up and nodded at me indicating he was listening.

"Your Fruit is special, thats all I'll say for now however, I want to tell you some ways you could use your abilities." I said and his eyes sparkled with curiosity.

"Have you ever tried pumping your own blood by pushing down with your rubbery body?" He shook his head in the negative, "If you did this it would greatly boost your overall fighting capability and speed." I said and he nodded about to get up and try it.

"Wait!" I said quickly and he stopped, "I would do it in small bursts only when you truly have to." I said and he nodded and sat down with a pout on his face.

"Don't worry I have more ways you could use for fruit!" I said excitedly.

He grins, "Tell me! Tell me!" He said positively vibrating.

"Okay, so have you ever been how if you push down on a spring hard enough it shot back even harder?" I said and Luffy nodded, "what if you compress your fist right before punching someone!" I explained further, "It would give your punches much more power behind them." I said and Luffy quickly nodded and got up again, but this time however I didn't stop him.

He runs over to the giant rock he just dropped and lifted his hand in a fist.

He concentrated and his hand compressed in a spring like way, it continues to compress until Luffy himself looked like it was hurting him to just keep it like that.

He pulled back his compressed fist and shouted, "Gum-Gum Spring Fist!" And just like that his hand snapped forward with a small pop like sound and hit the rock.

He stood back and suddenly the entire rock began to crack, and eventually crumbled into gravel.

This however woke up everyone including Gaimon.

They all looked at the suddenly sheepish rubber-boy with an annoyed expressions on their faces.

"Shishshi.. Sorry?" He said rubbing the back of his head.

I let out a laugh at this idiots stunts.

"Ashahaha!"

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An-next chapters will be Syrup Village so don't worry!

Anyway I hope you enjoyed this chapter I want to give Luffy a new technique but didn't know how to then I remembered a fic with this ability so I copied it I'm not ashamed to admit it after all what is fanfiction? It's whole concept is about copying something and making it a new thing.

Anyway have a nice night, day or whatever time It is for you right now!

Ciao!


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