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[One Piece:From The Ashes]-(hiatus)
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Synopsis
Some lowlife gets transmigrated into One Piece with a Logia Fruit.
follows Strawhats.
my first fic
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-- Classement
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- Développement de l’histoire
- Conception des personnages
- Contexte du monde
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I really liked the novel, but I felt that short chapters might be a good view of a character's past in certain respects, but I saw it as unnecessary because there was no more to add to a character's past.
Love the main characteh the chapters were longer and less flashbacks but that’s it. Keep up the good work
Dont mind me giving myself 5 stars that I don deserve haha! Anyway this is my first time writing so I hope you guys like it, grammar erros will happen but it will get better overtime, hopefully.
A friend recommended this to me so..................HERE'S YOUR 5 STAR BONUS....................................................................................................................................................................
the story is very cliché 3/5
I give you a 4.8 because you don't deserve that three stars, but I'm sure you have things to fix, it's your first fic and you've made a lot of effort so keep going. I can tell, you like it and it's always good to see that, I hope you don't stop and keep improving. By the way, keep up the good work, 🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳