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[Being rewritten]
4.16 (34 audimat)
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Gremmy lives on the streets and has never gotten anything good. Well, that is about to change. He stumbles upon a mysterious figure standing behind a table. The figure tells him that he can take one of the potions.
Gremmy takes it and finds himself in the body of the Quincy Gremmy Thoumeaux. As he begins to understand what is happening he begins to make his own plans and refuses to be a pawn in the Quincy King's plans.
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The other account was also mine and I got a mess and decided to post it here. This is not a copy or something. It is mine.
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I can honestly say, this was a big disappointment trough chapter 5 to 50+, the Mc has absolutely NO regards about anyone life if it’s not for his entertainment, at the beginning it looked like he wanted to make something about his relationship with Retsu but then completely ditched it and never spoke to her ever again (if not for a word or tw/o here and there), in the last chapter he even killed her off. Nothing he does has meaning, he skips all the slice of life part and get immediately into the training ark, F. arround or “fighting”. He doesn’t get emotional attached to anyone if they got hurt or killed nor those he feel any romance feelings for any of the women he is surrounded with. If I have to express what this fanfic felt like in one word? A “Crack-fick”. The MC feels empty and pointless, it FEELS and looks like he regards every single character as a fictional one.
I don't know why before it was at 3.9 stars, I thought the fic was incredible, we can't say it was the best but I'm still loving it and loving reading it
Are we already at the end of the story and the author wants to rewrite everything? It doesn't make sense, given where the story is, we have to finish and move on. if possible something outside the big3 of anime or what is done without passion (dxd, jjk, pokemon) a little courage and launch yourself into projects that really interest you, and since the problem is listening to your fans do like the great authors, surround yourself with a small number of fans whose comments help you move in the right direction and send their chapters to them and them alone in advance.
If you want to see something innovative it won't be here the existence of the MC doesn't change anything in the story it's easier to go read the manga everything from the beginning remains the same nothing has changed maybe Ichigo got stronger pre-war but that's it, other than that who spends 90% of the story with all the Shinigami underestimating him, even common Shinigami underestimated him A CAPTAIN that a Bankai is needed to be in this position, being something rare to reach with people taking hundreds of years to reach such a level, in short this is a huge waste of time, it's better to read the manga
I am trying but this story was underwhelming compared to Hades fanfic. I'm sorry
This ain’t a 5 star for me because I’m tired of him holding back and letting people talk trash for centuries like come on almost everyone in the story believe he is only captain because of captain Yamamoto and I’m tired of it. Like I know this is what he wants people to believe and not get more responsibilities but at some point it drags too much and gets tiring.
when I read the summary, I was exited to read this fanfic, because I was expecting him to be a Quincy, which is rare for a bleach fanfic. but then I read the auxillary and realised he would get soul reaper and hollow powers, and I lost most of my interest, though i'm still gonna try and read it.
This is a great story I hope the author doesn't drop it but I can see that he has alot to do because of his other fan fic
What can i say is haih, it’s the usual op mc at the beginning where he didn’t do anything and the story follow the anime WITHOUT ANY BIG CHANGES, it’s like even if mc did some thing all of it are truthfully didn’t have any impact.
Good story, has a potential to be Great. Hope it won't drop in the mid-way but be complete being great story. The Author, hopefully manages his time as he's many stories on continuation & hopefully HE completes all with HIS stories greatness. All the best Author!
One of the few good bleach fanfics on here. Looking forward to where this goes
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I liked it, don't listen to the haters and please don't bury this book.thanks for your fancfictions, keep up the meta Essences I love them. I think they are new and refreshing compared to a system.
one of the better stories on here ,mc is op yet it does not break the flow of the story. in short very enjoyable fic ....................................................................
The writing flows pretty nicely, so this gets 2 stars. Sadly, the story suffers from an OP character that wants 'fights'. This is the most boring and uninteresting thing ever. I will not comment on the fact that the MC is choke full of abilities and still searches for more, what I severely dislike is seeing a character that can 1 shot almost everyone hold himself back so that he can 'fight' his opponents. We already know that every single fight will be a win and he won't hut or whatever after, so what's the point of writing 2 chapter long fights?