Claudia_Leite_3839

Claudia_Leite_3839

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Claudia_Leite_3839
Claudia_Leite_3839
4 months ago
Commented

She found an expression to use!

"And I'll see you next week," Juliet added. "Thanks for letting me tag along."

I'd Give Up The World For You

I'd Give Up The World For You

Fantasy · Mcllorycat

Claudia_Leite_3839
Claudia_Leite_3839
6 months ago
Posted

This is a story written as a script, which is not my favorite to begin with, but the amount of errors of orthography and syntax make it almost impossible to read. Also the "acts" are very short and you can find mentions of Chat GPT in the text, which was probably the tool used to create this low quality "story".

Claudia_Leite_3839
Claudia_Leite_3839
6 months ago
Commented

Me trying to visualize this arrangement

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The rest of the attendees spread out through the remaining seats. Shane sat across from Shawn who was sitting immediately to Dietrich's left and a couple of spaces down from Vincent. Carter was sitting at the opposite end of Noah, watching the whole table with interest. David was across from him, watching with interest but sitting next to Rawlynne who was across from me and next to Jackson. Gabriel was sitting in the seats in between Noah and Shane on the left side of the table. 

Chosen by Fate, Rejected by the Alpha

Chosen by Fate, Rejected by the Alpha

Fantasy · Deni_Chance

Claudia_Leite_3839
Claudia_Leite_3839
7 months ago
Commented

AuDHD power couple? Noah did a lot of activities besides Karate...

He understood that she had a complex inner world and struggled to break out of it and relate to real people. She understood that he had the tendency to talk way too much when he was excited and had a hard time focusing on anything.

Run, Girl (If You Can)

Run, Girl (If You Can)

Fantasy · Mcllorycat

Claudia_Leite_3839
Claudia_Leite_3839
7 months ago
Commented

Yes, autism is genetic and both Aaron and Violet seem quite autistic to me on their inner speech and even outer demonstrations of feelings

So what was it? Was a difficulty connecting to other human beings somehow genetic?

Run, Girl (If You Can)

Run, Girl (If You Can)

Fantasy · Mcllorycat

Claudia_Leite_3839
Claudia_Leite_3839
7 months ago
Posted

Arranged marriage is a plot which can be hard to write a good story on, but this author delivers! Plenty of intrigue and great characters!

Claudia_Leite_3839
Claudia_Leite_3839
8 months ago
Commented

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Well, he was a boy and used to be her friend. It counted. He couldn't let Lacy discover the truth. They may not trust him yet but this was the least he could do for Aaron and his wife.

Run, Girl (If You Can)

Run, Girl (If You Can)

Fantasy · Mcllorycat

Claudia_Leite_3839
Claudia_Leite_3839
8 months ago
Commented

Thinking about the doorman and what's going on inside his head

"Ridiculously in love with you," he said lightly as they made it into the elevator. He refused to set her down until they had made it into their apartment.

Run, Girl (If You Can)

Run, Girl (If You Can)

Fantasy · Mcllorycat

Claudia_Leite_3839
Claudia_Leite_3839
8 months ago
Posted

Having only read the first chapter, this book has a nice and easy writing, which at the same time transports you right into the history

Claudia_Leite_3839
Claudia_Leite_3839
8 months ago
Replied to mim_khan

Same...

Keeley told the little voice to shut up. His reasons and motivations didn't matter. His actions were what did and they were terrible.

Run, Girl (If You Can)

Run, Girl (If You Can)

Fantasy · Mcllorycat