Hunter_Valcarce

1mth

Posted

pretty good not bad . are you going to change send abilities the star tree thing you know what I mean . Some are pretty damn useless

Is it Wrong to Put Skyrim in Danmachi

Anime & Comics · One_Fall_Leaf

Hunter_Valcarce

1mth

Posted

Does mine mean like an overlord is pretty cool it's sad that the whole group didn't come I really want to see the world of the rising shield hero I want to have that will work out she was in it

Bofuri in Another World ( I'm the final boss)

Anime & Comics · SaberGlory

Hunter_Valcarce

1mth

Commented

way too short believe you could shut this in the other chapter

ch 64 Discussion of The Reincarnators

A New Life, Beyond Realms: Tensura x Overlord

Anime & Comics · Alex_Simmonds

Hunter_Valcarce

1mth

Posted

I don't know I feel like it's pretty good. I feel like you're missing some details slow down in some areas there and there like what happened to Gail's son did he die I feel like something's Irish.I do like extra details of slime diary I should not be a question I should be scattered in all in the chapters you know a few people opinions there anymore . will building to understand how people feel and the characters think. what's going on in the world we have the progress is in the town in the world

I am Rimuru Tempest (Rewrite Version)

Anime & Comics · BonVoyage

Hunter_Valcarce

1mth

Commented

hell yeah this has so much potential but good at chapter 70 I got real bad but still is still pretty good . at the end it could have much been better hope you rewrite again on the account

ch 119 New Book Announcement/Possible Rewrite Fics.

I am Rimuru Tempest(Old Version. Rewrite is out.)

Anime & Comics · BonAurevoir

Hunter_Valcarce

2mth

Commented

The homelander will just kill him on the spot until then tell the public to take over the company and victory.

ch 0 8 Chapter 8

The Boys - Let Me Show You A True Hero!

Anime & Comics · Writing_Shirou

Hunter_Valcarce

2mth

Posted

I see all potential in the story pretty well Keep it up

Danmachi: I'm Getting Skills In The Dungeon!

Anime & Comics · heavenlydawn_

Hunter_Valcarce

2mth

Posted

pretty good not bad at all I hope more comes out soon

Krypton Reborn: A Star Wars Story

Anime & Comics · VendakSoth

Hunter_Valcarce

2mth

Commented

just do it a harem don't make it big like 3 or 5 or 7 .

ch 214 Harem or Not?

MARVEL: GAME MAKER SYSTEM

Movies · NunuXD

Hunter_Valcarce

2mth

Commented

yes

Ps.: This pool isn't what I'm gonna decide, even if 80% vote for Harem, that's still a chance of the novel stay not being Harem.

MARVEL: GAME MAKER SYSTEM

Movies · NunuXD

Hunter_Valcarce

3mth

Posted

It's a pretty good novel I wish you had more detail on the fighting scenes and on the world situation everything else is pretty good

The Villainess Whom I Had Served For 13 Years Has Fallen

Anime & Comics · StorieExporter

Hunter_Valcarce

4mth

Posted

pretty good wishes it more chapters coming out that's the only negative part

Elder Scrolls True Daughter of Skyrim

Video Games · Iros

Hunter_Valcarce

4mth

Posted

pretty pretty good my only complaint is not enough chapters

A goblin spell blade in the world of Goblin slayer

Anime & Comics · SamuraiSalad

Hunter_Valcarce

4mth

Posted

pretty good like it balances not just using games logic it is realistic I hope you make more

Dovakin in Westeros Insert

TV · OnanMaster

Hunter_Valcarce

5mth

Commented

dude that was short anything else come on

ch 110 Chapter 110 – Instant Kill of the Gulliver Brothers

Danmachi: I'm Leveling Up In The Dungeon

Anime & Comics · Metarln

Hunter_Valcarce

5mth

Commented

I think I have one problem: I think the Minecraft system should be a little more realistic but be more realism as infant water or infant lava too much it be kind of silly just had some limits like he can craft some things you just have to get the resources can't be overpowered

ch 0 2 Chapter Two: Dothraki

ASOIAF/GOT: Minecraft in Essos.

TV · Marcia_05

Hunter_Valcarce

5mth

Posted

pretty good not bad .Vikings culture is not good but no different from the rest of the world everyone raid does it

Evil Degenerate Reborn In Vikings

TV · SERBMADHAUS

Hunter_Valcarce

5mth

Posted

I like the size stories pov of other people side how they get pissed or some people get help like these little details little chapters has more volume in the wild world actions they do