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The rewritten version of the story. Contains content from Manga and light novels.
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After accidentally being struck by lightning, and dealing with an overworked god, our protagonist is thrown into the body of Rimuru.
He wants to find a comfortable way of living, have some beautiful girls, and not have to deal with the pain of managing a kingdom.
After using his dragon brother's name in vain he becomes known as the Prophet, a fortune teller that can see the future. Gaining the devotion of his followers, he will continue to deal with the repercussions of his new name as he builds the Tempest Empire.
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Hello everyone! Author here with my legally mandated review. This is a rewrite of my original story. But I do have a lot of changes planned as I go. You could say that this is more like a fanfic of my fanfic lol. Anyways, I hope all of you enjoy.
I always wondered why OG Rimuru do not have a funking Harem, when in FF such as this one he has it.? Heck he is also from Slime Race, who do not have gender at all in this story to.!!! but you still want to give him bunch of waifus, Btw will Suphia become his wife to.? i like her a lot since i saw her the first time watching anime, she is a tomboy and she is also nice and kind and Has lots of honor plus she is strong and Has great looks to.
Dang it Bas! I wanted to be the first review. But anyway if you wanna read a good Tensura fic , read this one. I read the previous version many times and this one is way better from the start. Looking forward to more.
Well first it’s a bit too rushed for me reads more like a summary than a story. Second 4 chapters in and he is thinking with his D already in your first story i could tolarate since I was interested in the powerprogression but here it ticks me off. Also he doesn’t have human hormones so things that manly happen bc of hormones and not bc of thought (like morals should behave differently) Also the fact that he wants a harem is different than actively going for it or it just happening wanting one in your head is one thing going for it makes me question his character and it happening is a result of majin having a different culture. Also I hope there will be no reincarnators und the harem since that would be very hard to believe. Well this is mostly a rant about the things that would destroy the novel for me sorry if it’s all over the place.
Interesting start so far, looking forward to seeing how the story changes due to our protagonist's interference.
Nice fanfic,i like these characters,but sometimes there have boring chapters,but without them we can't continue story
I thought this version would be boring & full of plot holes BUT imagine my surprise when i started reading this and found it really written so beautifully..
I need more of this good book. I don't normally give reviews, but this? This is the best book I've read so far. Kudos to you author, you did well! 👏
It´s really good, you can clearly see the improvements from the previous version. Keep it up author!
I don't know I feel like it's pretty good. I feel like you're missing some details slow down in some areas there and there like what happened to Gail's son did he die I feel like something's Irish.I do like extra details of slime diary I should not be a question I should be scattered in all in the chapters you know a few people opinions there anymore . will building to understand how people feel and the characters think. what's going on in the world we have the progress is in the town in the world
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I read your first fanfic and decided to read this one, so far everything is very interesting, I'm waiting for the continuation[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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Es un fanfiction increíble. Se desvía de la historia lo justo para darte esa sensación de que haría una persona transportada a ese mundo y con conocimientos del canon. También me encanta como retrata a los personajes. Siento que estoy leyendo al autor original.
This is the best fanfic about Tensura I've read so far, and I hope more chapters will be released in the future as I'm becoming more and more impatient to see how the story continues.
i usually do not write reviews and this is not a review but it's just a message to the author well you were one of my favourite authors with the original tensura novel it even got me into trying to write my own (which is bad btw will return to it at some point) and after trying to write it to be more like your novel life happened and it got me to take a break from reading all together then i got into a game called persona and I played all of it but i wanted more so naturally I looked for fanfiction and your instatntlygot my attention and you again became one of my favourite authors then just now i realized that both ofy favourite authors are the same soooo i guess you became my favourite author twice without knowing it but thank you for reading this thing and you don't know how much you inspire me and iIhope you have a fun life ahead
All right, proper review now that I am up to chap 61. The first ten chaps are somewhat rushed, with the first four being the worst in terms of pacing. After which, the pacing stabilizes. Quality? Pretty good, I would say. I admit that I use Gpt to help me edit from time to time, and in the first few chaps it was really noticable. But after the first ten-ish chaps is when I get an actually good prompt for it so that if I end up using it for editing it doesn't make the story robotic. I don't always use it, but when I do, it's not too in your face. (I hope) For cases when Gpt is used, it is purely to edit the already written text. I don't use it to write out paragraphs. What's the point in writing then? It's still predominantly my own writing, and I avoid using it whenever possible. However, it does help to fix up paragraphs and organize the structure slightly Story Development? Pretty good, while it follows the rails of the original story, I beleive I do enough changes to make the story my own. And post Walpurgis, it will mostly, if not completely abandon the rails of the original. Using the world to further the story. Character design? Pretty happy with how it turned out too. Shuna was a tad rushed, but then I work on her and expand on her character. Same for most of the relevant characters. I feel like I did a relatively good job on developing them. World background? I mean, it's tensura. But yes, I am being pretty careful not to break the world and follow the rules already laid out world while writing. Mistakes happen here and there, but for the most part I try to keep stuff as good as it can be. Now, onto the prophet stuff. A lot of people didn't like it. That's fine. Not for you. While not a major plot point post Orc disaster, it still shows up from time to time. And it is somewhat relevant to events that will happen in the future.