CunningManx

CunningManx

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2022-01-18 Se unió United States
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CunningManx
CunningManx
3 months ago
Posted

Really good story, with great character development, good arc, great spice level, not too long and not too short, I loved it. Thank you author! 🥰

CunningManx
CunningManx
3 months ago
Commented

Thank you author for the wonderful story! I loved it, binge read it in a day. Loved the characters, the spice level, the story arc, only the grammar was difficult, the name changing and inconsistency in it, but otherwise a really good story. Thank you! 🥰

CunningManx
CunningManx
4 months ago
Commented

Despite what Zara thinks, it is Sin's fault, because the long prison and excessive torture was not necessary at all. So it is hard to ask to forget the past when you were imprisoned for that long and tortured for that long.

CunningManx
CunningManx
4 months ago
Commented

I'm sorry, I just can't understand how can she forget everything that he did or ordered to do to her, the torture, the killing, everything. I'm still curious to read the rest of the story, but honestly, he should die and she should avenge her torture.

CunningManx
CunningManx
6 months ago
Posted

Fun story, good story arc, funny chibis, and short enough to read in one sitting! Thank you Author! 🥰

CunningManx
CunningManx
7 months ago
Commented

Seriously, one more of this "almost telling" thing and I drop the story.

CunningManx
CunningManx
7 months ago
Commented

That's just rather annoying and unnecessary. Seriously? Almost pulled out the necklace and then not...? That's just unnecessary delay.

CunningManx
CunningManx
7 months ago
Commented

So so so many typos and misspelled words. Would be interesting story, but very difficult to read.

CunningManx
CunningManx
7 months ago
Commented

Honestly, that was kinda clear and evident for me after that breakfast, when Cassandra played with the knife. I thought Lauren will connect the dots right there and then.

CunningManx
CunningManx
8 months ago
Posted

A very captivating and interesting story, with plenty of smut, magic, twists and turns. Some lines stopped abruptly and would have been nice to know the end or just a more clean finish, but all in all a very good story that draws you in. Thank you Author!