Theo_Vol - Profile

it can be a good argument but at the same time can be bad as well because if you have to read 60+ chapter and spend 2-4 hours to only be engaged to the story like what's the point. it's like the same analogy that I usually hear on MMORPG game "it take 200 hours for the game to be good" at that point why even spend that much time ?

i was intrigued by the synopsis and figure I could try it, so I read it. I only got to chapter 30, and from those chapter I can see that the character is enjoyable and I know what to expect when the synopsis says there will be extra's POV but from those 30 chapter i feel you gives to much explanation to everyone other than the MC. from those 30 chapter I only know that the mc is genius but will do anything to be lazy, but just from 1 passing case that i am pretty sure not gonna have a huge impact in the future other than advancing the plot I know how do the sect get created, why the sect is created there, what is the sect treasure, what is the fued between the creator of the sect and some evil organization, and that 1 elder that cultivate with pill that take about half of a chapter only to be killed ? (from what I get) a few chapter later. like what is the point of explaining that detail when the character is not gonna be around for long ? it's not like you're gonna get an attachment from that 1 elder. I am sure that there will be someone that like that kind of writing but for me it's just not my cup of tea

although there's the typical reincarnation concept and the creating new world and becoming gods thing and the battle royale that are pretty common nowadays, i like the fact that the story didn't spend to much time on the fact the mc got reincarnated and stuff and move on, i also like that when the mc creating his own world, he's not going for the typical recreating earth civilization to the fullest with magic and stuff, I do kinda wish that the divinity, world core, and other stuff explained in more detail as I feel there's still a lack of how the power systems work. I hope it will be explained soon, that's pretty much what I see so far and liked from your novel. as long you keep consistent with your work and update I am pretty sure this novel can succeed keep up the good work