Resumen
An unrighteous and a cold hearted man. a villain who struggled from the bottom to the top of society. to overcome his foes he chose to be ruthless and immoral.
In a world full of cruelty Jon Hardy had no intention to hold back.
A story of a man who traveled back to 1945 equipped with his knowledge of the future and his profound wisdom, Jon Hardy is determined to pursue his ultimate goal once again.
Etiquetas
Aficionados
-
![Dangerlives]()
Dangerlives Contribuido 12210 -
![Wenxie]()
Wenxie Contribuido 8124 -
![Kebeckois]()
Kebeckois Contribuido 7375
Regalos
-- Regalo
recibido Estado de energía semanal
-- Ranking de
Poder 
-- Piedra de
Poder También te puede interesar
55Reseñas
4.75
- Calidad de escritura
- Estabilidad de las actualizaciones
- Desarrollo de la Historia
- Diseño de Personajes
- Antecedentes del mundo
Comparte tus pensamientos con los demás
Escribe una reseña
This MC is going to be my favourite, the story is fast paced but amazing and the whole gangster thing is intriguing, keep up the good work, totally in love with your story ❤️
well gonna give this 5star because I like the concept that the world is our world 🤔😅 but anyway gonna wait for more chapter since u rewrite it keep it up
From my personal opinion it is a very interesting novel, one of the few in the crime/mafia genre that is not boring and even better that does not involve strange turns of sexuality. He made me buy coins so I could continue reading, my pocket hurts LOL.
This is very good the only problem i would say is its a little rushed but other than that its pretty👍🏾
Throughout the myriad and abundant novels I've read , this has made it into the top ten. A book among books.A story among stories. It reminds me of a continuation of 1973 in some aspects . Thanks to the author for this adventure .
For those who enjoyed reading Mike hammer novels, you'll really enjoy this. It has that classic post world War Two nitty gritty, throwing in a lot of historical moments for those who are old enough to remember.
This book is good read it. Its not only about making money honestly and becoming a billionaire, no this book contain both clean business and Mafia business. So what you should expect: 1-Good character development from a business man with questionable bottom lines to a gang leader. 2-Relatively logical development of wealth "It as realistic as possible, i think its well done so far." 3-Guns fight, robbery, assassinations, smuggling, Mafia conflict. 4-Wash money through oil painting and art, Hollywood and Las Vigase casinos. 5-Clean business which mostly Hollywood and wall street so far, but wall street part was so well done i believe it was art and i mean it. "Its not just know the future and bet on this and that ... nah from shaking the market to manipulating news to sacrificing the future for current gains and so now.... if you like stock market games you will like that part. 6-Other clean business there is a TV manufacturing company, a magazine (Playboy), a security company.... and other small company that are mainly used to shake the stock market and some are profitable but doesn't really make much. 7-One good point about the book is that almost everything on the book you can easily google it and find more information's so while its a light novel yo can think of it as reading historical fact since most of the thing mentioned in the book aren't pure imagination and have a historical background. Finally i would love to mention more but honestly just read it. there is no better judge for a book than your eyes.
this is real good. The character development is excellent and the story is progressing so far is good. Keep it up
A fun novel to waste time. The author's style is constantly improving. Perhaps my only problem is that there is some filler in the middle chapters, but the author may have realized his mistake and become better than it was.
this is real good. The character development is excellent and the story is progressing so far is good. Keep it up this is real good. The character development is excellent and the story is progressing so far is good. Keep it up this is real good. The character development is excellent and the story is progressing so far is good. Keep it up this is real good. The character development is excellent and the story is progressing so far is good. Keep it up this is real good. The character development is excellent and the story is progressing so far is good. Keep it up this is real good. The character development is excellent and the story is progressing so far is good. Keep it up this is real good. The character development is excellent and the story is progressing so far is good. Keep it up this is real good. The character development is excellent and the story is progressing so far is good. Keep it up
The story is interesting, I must admit that. I see that you're trying to portray the MC as a through and through villain who also has his humane side, which reflects in Li Na and characters such as grandma and Ling Chen. But on the other hand, it seems as if he exists only to be tyrannical, to be evil and brutal, all the bad, unprincipled. I'd say that your writing pace is too fast, slow down a bit, add a bit more description to certain scenes, even the fighting ones. Try to add more introspection on the MC's side so we can understand him better. For example, the assassination scene in the manor where he cut the throat of the guy who slept with two women could have been written with more tension by describing his mental state and such. Why aren't you already making him use his golden finger by entering small markets and taking non-perishables under everyone's noses? Describe a scene like that. Despite being a character that's supposed to be both smart and villainous, he seems superficial. Some kind of male ego, a chauvinistic point of view is leading him forward. I'm see-sawing between neutrality and antipathy for him as a character. For better reading experience, please proofread your chapters the best you can. Use capital letters, comas, all the proper punctuation. In the end, despite all of this, I'm giving it a pretty high grade because it has potential and I did say it is interesting. Good work and continue pushing forward.
story is quite impressive and different but some subplots are quite cliche but it is interesting to read and entertaining let's see how it develops in the future
This is the most engaging novel I have read here on Webnovel. Keep up the good work author, very well written action scenes and descriptions. Love the action and the adventure the MC takes on. [img=recommend]
very good novel you should give it a try as this is about gangs and business different types of empires building so it is fun. Mc is also good he is no simp. Mc women's also good they have an active part in mc's business or entertainment industry. overall as he is mc, so everything goes his ways so I like it. no unnecessary drama.
Revelar spoiler