UnoriginalEgg

I'll start off with the very basics. The cover is great and so is the synopsis. The synopsis itself got me pretty interested in this novel. The only real issue I have is with the writing quality. There are very few spelling flaws, but grammatical errors aren't uncommon. A few run-on sentences are the most common. Also, the first chapter is heavy in onomatopoeia, but the author made the effort to change that. The next chapter was a lot better and the chapters only continue to improve in quality. It's astonishing, really. The updates are coming out at a nice steady pace. The story isn't as developed yet as it's only in the first few chapters, but it's moving along nicely. The characters are introduced in a nice and smooth way, just like the setting. The world background is well made and the novel is quite descriptive. It drew me in and I really enjoyed how it made such a nice image in my mind. 9/10, highly recommend!

Hey folks! I know some of you “hippies” might come across my book and leave a nice review without reading the book, but you should know that it doesn’t help me in any way. Even though this is a side hobby that I don’t take seriously, my motto is to do what you do ghe best way you can do it, even if it is for fun. So I really need you kind folks to give my story an honest review, it helps me get better!

Honestly, cliches make up henres. But, there is a point where it is overboard. Within about 5 chapters, I began losing hope. All these cliches broke my heart, and the drawings were amazing too! But all the cliches and fast storyline ruined it. Another thing to mention is all of the dialogue and explanations, they dont make sense and half of it feels for ed. I am curious though, was this mtled (machine translated)?

Honestly, the only thing I see that's bad about this novel is the grammar. And, I've seen worse. This is a fine story so far and I like how the characters are introduced and described. Keep up the good work!

Ok so, the writing is amazing. The setting was so amazingly described. Every line n the story further cemented a mood. The updates seemed steady but they stopped so I'm just gonna rate that lowly. The development of the story slowly introduced characters, so it was nice. Over all great. [img=recommend]