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God Of The Horde
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In the vast universe and the Endless Realms, lay many terrifying beings and inheritances of reality breaking magnitude, the most powerful and feared of which was the power known simply as [H̸̼̄̍̎̈̽ö̵̲̐̂̑͝r̷͙̪͇͕͈̒́͗͊̇͘͠d̶̹̹̳̒̿e̴̢̛͇̊͑̔̾͂͘] a power that only has one word but makes even The Great Old Ones and The Outer Gods tremble in fear, the Traveler wary, and the %̴̗̼̣̉̆̈%̸͈̱̼̫̦͔͆͆̏̇͑̎͂#̵͔͕̋̈̓͝^̸̲̫̭̂̔̓̄̕͠*̶̢̯̮͖͇͍̽%̷̡̅̈́̇̈́̕͝#̶̢̹̍̈̀̊͌̈́}̸̝̳̙̈́̆͝+̷͚͂͝]̵̩͉̫̱̩͖̭̉ ̷̘̈́̑̊̿͝(̸͓͌̂͗͐̈́̑͘?̵̢̗̘̞͔͚̼̿̄̄̃͒͠)̵̛̳͎̩̓͋̚ alert.
This power which controls forces beyond comprehension being placed in the hands of a soul who knows its worth is already terrifying to think of, but the power being in the hands of a soul that isn’t aware? Indescribable terror will spread to all!
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Lord Wan, a young man who had been orphaned alongside countless other children in the apocalypse had finally reached his 16th birthday, the golden day, where the lives of many are changed, he awakens...... but the first problem he encounters is that he doesn't understand his ability, after all [Fireball] is self-explanatory but what is [Horde]? Come and watch the journey of this young man as he explores the world, finds the mysteries and intricacies that the public has no knowledge of, goes out to the greater universe, and in the process learns more and more about his power…...
……….[H̸̼̄̍̎̈̽ö̵̲̐̂̑͝r̷͙̪͇͕͈̒́͗͊̇͘͠d̶̹̹̳̒̿e̴̢̛͇̊͑̔̾͂͘]
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SO the prologue is not that great ill be honest , the Synopsis was a lot better than the prologue , i've talked to the author and even though he's new he knows a lot about writing , although the story is not that great now , but its only the first ten story , and lets be honest , we cannot judge most books through the first 20-40 chapters , so if i'm being honest we can expect a lot more from him .
I like where the story is going, it captures the attention of the readers well. There are a few grammatical errors, and the prologue is a bit heavy with exclamation marks. However, in general, this works is really interesting. Keep it up, author!
From what I've read, the story is pretty alright by my standards. It's a cliche tale of humanity having been struck by a tragedy that caused them to live in some post-modern apocalyptic era. The MC is your underdog whose goal is to rise and change the pitiful world full of corruption and chaos. For an author who's been writing for perhaps less than a month as I'm writing this, it's pretty good but on the general scale of what I've read over the years, I don't think it's super interesting. Not to mention the three chapters dedicated to the bathroom segment. A 5/10 story. May this story thrive as the author learns the ropes of this website.
Thanks for sharing the story with us, you should also add more development sections to your own stories (instead of skipping time, sections on army development, technology development, population development make it easier for you to write more chapters and provide a more detailed story
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The beginning is pretty good, A very well-written novel. Has great pacing, The complexity of the world background all is amazing. Enjoyable reading. This is one of those books you don't want to miss. Keep it up.
it's a great book even though the beginning is a little bleak, I wanna stick around and see what the author has waiting for us , I honestly think this novel has a lot of promise
I'm really excited for what's to come! Though it's not been too many chapters, the author seems to have a clear undertsanding and confidence in not only their characters, but also the established lore behind them. This really shows through the progression of each chapter. I would personally prefer there be some more unique names to each chapter rather than a part 1 through 6, mainly due to the ability a chapter title has to set the tone early on - but that's a very minor detail. There's a lot of potential with this novel! Great things are to come!
This book is enjoyable. The plot is relatively unique, and the world building in this story is nearly professional. And at the time of this review, the author is new to the world of writing, making this very impressive. However, the story isn't without it's downsides. The writing quality, while it does improve as it goes along, is not great. Numbers are still used in the place of words, character emotions that are obvious through the usage of context clues are overly explained or blatantly stated when it's not needed. The story is developing slowly, but it is developing, which means that the progress made in a chapter is noticeable, Overall, this is a decent story with excellent world building that continues to improve and develop the more you read it. 4.0/5
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This is a shameless review, but I do believe my novel is worth it! It’s tough and unsure early but will get better as I improve! I am an author with 1.6 weeks of writing experience and so will require some time to truly be good at writing, but I assure you guys that when I do understand and get the basics of writing fixed in me, I will do great! Stay tuned or add my novel to your collection if you want to see an inexperienced author growing up and learning to write his novel!
I'll start off with the very basics. The cover is great and so is the synopsis. The synopsis itself got me pretty interested in this novel. The only real issue I have is with the writing quality. There are very few spelling flaws, but grammatical errors aren't uncommon. A few run-on sentences are the most common. Also, the first chapter is heavy in onomatopoeia, but the author made the effort to change that. The next chapter was a lot better and the chapters only continue to improve in quality. It's astonishing, really. The updates are coming out at a nice steady pace. The story isn't as developed yet as it's only in the first few chapters, but it's moving along nicely. The characters are introduced in a nice and smooth way, just like the setting. The world background is well made and the novel is quite descriptive. It drew me in and I really enjoyed how it made such a nice image in my mind. 9/10, highly recommend!
Kudos to the author for creating such a great book. Just keeping aside a few mistakes and lil editing the book needs; I do hope the book finds the exposure and potential it needs in future. Wishing you best of luck with your efforts. Fighting ![img=update][img=recommend]
It's the detailed explanation for me. 5.0 all they way! I really got to view everything happening in my brains in vivid images. The story setting too is just superb, giving a new dimension to system stories if what I've always wanted and seem like finally, after a very long search. Good going author, more chapters are expected🤗🤗😗
The plot and the settings of the story is great. And for the first few chapters I read, the word that said "do not judge the book by it's cover" doesn't work on me at all. As I can see into the future of this book that'll be a good novel. Good Job Author, keep it up.
The premise of the story is very interesting. The author did a great job at creating a new idea from scratch. Props to the author![img=exp][img=exp]
I have to say the world-building in this one is 10/10. The world is well thought out, and above all "MAKES SENSE" not all does. I also find the writing style very easy to read, without it being too simple. The paragraphs are a good length without being too long, and the breaks allow the reader to breathe and continue on at a good even pace. I feel the 4 chapters so far is leading up to a really good in-depth story, and I'm looking forward to see what happens to Lord (btw great name)
I have read the chapters released and I have to say that I want to find out what happens next. I will be sticking around to do just that. The writing quality is pretty good, and the story is paced well.