It was a very good story and that flowed very smoothly and the characters are very nice and almost complete.
A banana is a berry look it up.
Magnus also drowned himself in food. His favourite dish, pancakes were there too. But, they were not as tasty as those his mum makes so he also ate some chicken, lamb, beef, cake, apple pie and finally a large glass of banana shake.
Harry Potter: Blood of the Dragon[COMPLETE]
作品衍生 · MisterImmortal
they also need more logical reasoning and more of a emotional output instead the more dead blank readout when it comes to emotional expression that make them feel like there own persons.
characters needs more life and realism and it is because they seem more flat and boring in that they don't have any life spark.
Can the author clarify the gender pronoun of in mc family clan in all chapters it will make the reading experiance much better for us readers by a few levels. Ps by a fan and reader of this novel.
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Building A Business Empire From Scratch In Another World
奇幻 · Mysterious_Ghost