Adrian_downes

author what I've read so far sounds great stop doubting yourself continue I want to see what becomes of Ace

I love what I've read so far can't wait to see how dials developes

will. he still hold the same moral standards later on?

I agree the mcs naivety got me laughing waiting to see how he will change not knowing the effect he's made so far on the path he's made

I loved what I've read so far you don't need to change a thing keep up the good work

it was good how it is any longer would've made it monotonous

I liked your original style mistakes and all why change something wait for the next story

never leave loose ends

waiting patiently to see how Roy will develop and what will he achieve to answer how could far west have a gender the earth is known to have mother nature or father time just saying stop questioning the author's whimsical things it's what makes this novel different and enjoyable to me.There will always be haters but I love what I've read so far can't wait to read the rest.yours thankfully and respectfully

I love your work so far and the above chapters saved me from second guessing or you having to explain it a later chapters so your on the right path keep it up