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This is my review. 1- The novel is very fast from level 0 to level 3 in thirteen chapters. 2- There are no difficulties in his life learning his spell with ease, I understand the author put the tag overpowered, but this tag expresses the strength of the character in his level and not in all his life of studying love etc. .3- The magic system is frankly weak. You could have followed the magic system in the novel (A Wizard's Secret) and made it difficult to raise the level, and the protagonist's abilities is infinite magic he try testing his magic in several ways to find the best way to rise to a higher level . 4- There is no character building that makes the character feel boring There is nothing special about him such as (1) Does he love knowledge and he has nothing but knowledge in his eyes. 2- Is his personality loving or ruthless. 3- Is his personality weak and getting stronger in The future, or that his character is strong from the beginning. 4- Is he a clever or a fool, etc.) 5- The world is all usual, nothing new, i don't feel any enthusiasm for this world The tiger is the same tiger in a larger size if the author sets strange and dangerous creatures as an example of a creature It looks like a diamond, but it has an eye on every side, and when you look at it, you get crazy , the world would be interesting. 6- And this is the most important point for me. There is no big or small goal in the novel trying to become strong for the sake of becoming strong, no more or less and system are trash in general that corrupts the narrative, especially if there is a store feature in it. ......... (I hope my words are not too harsh, but that's how I felt when I read your novel)
Revelar spoilerThe story and character was all fine reading early on, but... The way the mc has to bend to the will of system is one thing, but to force it in to a romance, or harem what ever it decides to, that's just throws the whole story development out the window! Keep the system neutral or power hungry but not romance oriented that's just mehhh
not gonna lie the character designs are really nice because I can imagine the characters quite easily. The chapters are constantly updated every day as well. there has been quit some development but I feel like with the current rate at which main character is developing he will reach the top of humanity in about 200 chapter so I wonder if you have any other new plots like fights in space and stuff and the main character being able to destroy planets. the character development I feel like the main character went through some progress in his cold behavior. I am not sure about the world building so I put a 4 stars. Overall a very nice light novel and you should read it
A very good and interesting book, I find it intriguing .... I like the MC and how he is eager to get stronger..The plot is great. The author should always proofread the chapters before publishing.. and update stability should be stable. Above all, the book is recommendable.
has the author considered passive abilites or effect powered by mana which would lend sognificant power if the effects were able to be stacked ( keep up the chaps u cen do it!!!!!!!)
Did Author just dropped the book??? I mean, he tells us not to read it in the description. Then, why should I bother to even look inside?????????????????????????????????
The author/translator is a tool. Contsantly adding junk to the chapters for word count. Dropped the story midway and started a second story. I barely made it past chapter 60 before getting fed up. Thankfully I wasted nothing but time due to the free 24 hour bonus. Do not waste your time with this person or thier works.
can be skipped. good premise, but childish attempt. should be more rational yet sounds like stuck with 10 year olds
WELL LETS SEE.WRITING QUALITY 5 STABLILTY 3 STORY DEV 3 CHARACTER DESIGN 5 WORLD BACKGROUND 5
It's trash, even with infinite mana mc still stupid, feels like those generic chinese novel but they change the names to western and make it magic/mana instead of ki
should be 1 star all around arthur gave up writing on chapter 47. it's almost a direct rip off from another book named magic academy I have infinite skill points.
The stories you’ve started are all well written! I enjoyed reading them! Though I would feel disappointed each time it moved onto the next story, I got immersed into the next one soon after! If you ever decide to continue/finish any of them, I’d definitely come back to read them! Updating stability and story development are only lower due to not completing the stories, otherwise I’d rate five stars for everything.
Your progression and story telling is way to rushed and crude.the way you started the story was nice but your follow through doesn't feel worth it at all....
Revelar spoilerIt was good then the author got lazy and then changed the plot halfway through otherwise a decent story. ... .. ........ .. ....... .. ........ ......
Autor Wringbro
The synopsis was a good one, it was well written as well as the chapters. Characterization was also on point. The author also did good with the description. It’s been a while since I read this type of novel though but I really enjoyed it and I highly recommend.