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2020-09-03 Se unió Philippines
Laughing, he said* be mindful of the correct placement of punctuation
He was patting the stranger on the back . Laughing he said "I haven't told her yet, and I don't plan to. Just make sure you have your van and a few men ready because she'll put up a fight... She's a feisty one ." both of them erupting into laughter.
Fantasy · Stacyanna12
thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed reading it
*switch *bus' *slum**
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Urban · Cie-Lbitch
are you sure that's not OCD?
"After many sessions, his condition has not improved. If anything, it is deteriorating. The young man has always been a patient fellow, but recently, he has been experiencing violent mood swings. He got into a scuffle recently with a classmate simply because the animal patterns on the curtain did not match, and he injured a random stranger simply because the number of sesame seeds on the bun kept changing whenever he counted them."
Horror · I Fix Air-Conditioner
Just to review this: I'm sure this will be a fantastic story starting from so many questions about what is happening. However, I think you need to focus on the 'hooks' of each chapter cause personally, it doesn't make me want to go to the next page. But you have a great talent for wording and divisions of phrases that might have an impact on the readers, and for also building tensions. Good luck, author! rooting for you
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Fantasy · Stacyanna12