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Retiring as an Incompetent Queen
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“Down with the villain!”
The townspeople rioted at the gates while Yu Yan calmly sipped her tea, occasionally nodding and raising her fist along with the riots like she was cheering on a football match.
“Down with the villain!” she hollered along with them, on the balcony above.
One of the townspeople snarled, “Do you have no shame? You kill us, and then you mock us?”
Oh, right.
She blinked, remembering.
She was the villain.
Oops.
It had been two weeks since Yu Yan, a lazy millionaire’s daughter, transmigrated into the body of an incompetent Queen in a novel she read.
Twenty years before the actual novel takes place, the villagers are set to riot and take over the Kingdom.
“Aiyoo, if they want to riot, let them riot. If they get tired, send them water. If they need more people, go send the guards to riot with them. Easy.”
She’s read enough books to know that the butterfly effect is dangerous.
But this time, she won’t die.
“Belluse, have you made the preparations?”
“Yes, Your Majesty. The carriage is ready.”
Fake her death, run away to the villages of the neighboring country to her secret mansion, die there, and hope for the best.
Let the male lead sort out the country in twenty years.
Of course, she didn’t expect the male lead to come find her.
“Uh..Your Former Majesty…”
He hesitated.
“Your personal attribute says ‘Immortality.’”
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The synopsis is already good enough to draw in the reader. I really liked the use of the video game format in the beginning. I've read a few eastern fantasies and one thing I know is that eastern fantasies never miss. I'm looking forward to your work and keep it up👍
Hi! I read your story and it's quite familiar to me, but the plot is different and unique. I know you can invest more in your story, author keep it up as always.[img=coins]
Heyo. I've been reading a lot if ffantasy novels recently and I can say this book is one of the good ones. I can't wait for the next update. keep it up!!!
dropping my review here :) The story is interesting and I enjoy looking through Yu Yan's POV. I wish I had the same father as her hahahaha. Keep up the good work
truth be told the synopsis is good enough to lure anybody in and I am not an exception. I am hooked! I really like the way you describe things, to be honest, I really like it and I do think it is one of your strong points. Looking forward to your new updates. Keep up the good work![img=recommend]
Writing quality is actually good but I can't seem to relate the style (I need to learn from different authors also) I red carefully of what's happening in your book and so far , the flow was good. There are a few technical issues but it is less matter. Keep writing !
Hi author! I read your book, I was amazed by your writing style and the way you describe your world through kinda like video game style(?) and some things are just vivid to imagine, it is fantastic! Your book will get me to like fantasy more and more. Hope there are more updates! Regards, Glenstonx
Honestly, your story reminds me of my favorite isekai story. Especially the setting and your main character. And I love that. As much as I like your character, I want to see the world more in your character's perspective. Broading your description in their emotions, perception and reactions I think you can improve this story more in that aspect. Overall you did a great job in this story author. Keep up the good work!
The synopsis was way too good. I was hooked immediately. Romance + system + kingdom and other elements. Its a nice one. I liked her character already.
Story is well written. Interesting plot. Just a small suggestion, maybe expand more on some scenes (like expand how the protagonist is feeling at that moment etc). Overall, the flow is quite good. Keep up the work!!
A distinct character for a female leading role in a historical fantasy setting. With a different twist of the plots and exciting possibilities. Very interesting and unique story. Besides few grammatical errors, this book has a lot of potential.
The store is well written and depicted. it was like characters moving in front you, and MC character...XD. I like it. Decisive, cruel, intelligent, and manipulative. I am kinda tired of 'I am justice' characters, and we need the cruel's ones too. The character Yu Yan, is selfish, don't hesitate, and do everything to fulfill her wishes. I wish there should be some romance though. Try it! I am sure you won't be disappointed.
A interesting story you have here ! Love how you took something cliche and made it unique . Yu Yan is a person I can somewhat relate to and I'm curious to see how her new life will play out~!
Good read so far. There's still more to explore, but the 3 chapters so far create a path to what would be an engaging and unique story. Biggest positive of this book is that it's one of those books with a monarch as it's protagonist, and I personally haven't seen those kinds of protagonists for a while.
Great plot and story line so far. The use of video game 'status window' made interesting and fun to read. Can't wait for more chapter to be released!
As of review: 3 chapters. Writing Quality: There are very few grammatical errors. 5 Updates: So far, consistent releases. 5 Story Development: There isn't much to work with here yet, so I will leave it as a 4. However, it is heading in a great direction. Character Design: Though I have to say that the main character not being OP is a bit of a stretch, it is a fact that she can't just solve problems by flicking her fingers. Very nice. 5 World Background: The synopsis immediately reminds me of "My Next Life as a Villainess: All Routes Lead to Doom!" but it is nothing like that. In fact, I'd go as far as to say its heading in its own direction, and that's a good thing. 5
Reincarnated to a fiction world and became the villain, the bad guy, I mean woman. Would love to see where the story is developing and heading.
I definitely like this story so far. The dialog definitely kept me going, and it flowed really well. The only thing I'm curious about is the world, and the background, but I have a feeling the author will put that in soon. Of course, there is some world background, about the story 'Rebuild', but there could be so much more! So many details could be added! Keep going!
Hi Author, It’s too early to give a review. But nevertheless , below are my Comments. I liked the story, its quite unique. But may be you can name the chapters with catchy names. This will get the users attention. Overall a good story. Keep going!
A unique and quite well written Eastern fantasy. A good read for you who got enough of cliche historical romance and seeking a unique female lead fantasy and unique concept of story. ➕ The synopsis is intriguing enough to catch the good first impression. ➕ Pretty good grammar. ➕ Good premise ➕ Interesting character design. ➕ The dialogues feel alive. ➕ Pretty good description. ➕ As for the world building, I can't say a lot since there are only 3 available chapters at the moment but I feel the author will work on it pretty soon. ➖ The cover isn't interesting enough. Good cover will bring you more readers. ➖ Honestly I'm not fan of systems so I can't say a lot about it, but I find the structure of status window in this book is a bit messy (I'm reading on smartphone btw) Well, so far it's pretty good reading experience. Good luck.