Insignias 8
Moments 80
+1 screw the glitter family
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The Immortal (twilight fanfiction)
Movies · Beans_on_a_tree
This is too much any plan for him to appear anything, but alien or devil spawn would've failed. Him looking more angelic is reasonable as it would give more influence, but at this point, he's stepped into uncanny valley, and the human response to that is to kill. Have him act as an adult. Any pretense of him being normal is gone just full send it, full throttle. have him claim ti be an angel or a god something the slow and stealth plan from the previous chapter has failed. His plan of appear holy would've failed btw, there's documents on child birth defects and mutation from that period. they probably would've cut him open. I understand the goal, but it was all too much too fast.
They set him down on a pillow of tallowed skin, more than likely elk for its rough yet durable texture. He views the room he is within; A bare, wooden structure with few furnishings, the bed his mother was laid upon had ivory sets underneath a leather sheet. It appeared sufficient, yet was unhygienic. 'It seems that hygiene is something that I must develop first.' David mused. He sits up, startling the people. They see him raise his right hand, in a gesture that appears simple, yet has holy connotations.
ATLANTIS: President Rourke, Reborn.
Movies · Jaedyn_Deliverer
both, time skips, but you stop for major moments and backstory .
Do you wish to see him grow up or have a time skip?
ATLANTIS: President Rourke, Reborn.
Movies · Jaedyn_Deliverer
have him act as a baby
Do you wish for him to act as a baby or be an adult?
ATLANTIS: President Rourke, Reborn.
Movies · Jaedyn_Deliverer
I'm glad to see another chapter. Great work so far. I can't wait to see where this story goes.
ch 0 2 Washington State
Twilight: Connor
Movies · K_Log
Bella as the 3rd?? Honestly, I hope not. it would make him a greater part of the twilight plot instead of him having his own story. character will react to her and them instead of the Mc. not to mention it feels like you are setting her up to be a reincarnation with the personality changes.
ch 53 Chapter 50): Parking Lot!
Twilight: Really! I Didn't Ask For This!
Movies · Flaming_Lines
ahhhhhhh watch it
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The Undead In MCU
Movies · SpiritFest13
+1
I'm open to suggestions but the initial idea is Alicia Clark
Fear the Walking Dead: Survive the Zombie Apocalypse
TV · SrCuervo
I just started and I love the story so far but the chapter format is killing me, his status screen doesn't need to be in ever chapter, unless Adam us looking at we don't need it. it breaks the flow of the story and feels like a slog, I go from being drawn into having to skip a paragraph of text because it's redundant. passing is a little fast only because you do so many scene changes and time skips.
ch 0 8 "Abracadabra, bitch!" (chapter 8)
Marvel-Comics: The Weaver
Anime & Comics · Bulale_Abali
Tony better spin back on some terminator/John wick type shiiii
ch 14 School
Marvel: Time’s Master
Movies · Ugyo
ohhh, okay then, Dante, Excalibur, limbo,sevagoth,ash. those are the best frames I could think of that are strong would fit the MC's personality and wouldn't break the mcu or Marvel universe. what about weapons 🤔 and companions.
BUT it's kinda hard to think of one for me mostly because there just so much and a lot of frames are capable of breaking the MCU balance take the spore frame nidus I kinda like him but hes ability's are kinda not eco friendly so he's off but that's not just it.
TENNOS LITERALL DECENT INTO MARVAL (A/U)
Movies · Voided_fox
Dante or oberon Prime, in my opinion, they are the current strongest and coolest looking, especially since when properly customized/modded either way plz no female frame and only primes (they are just better looking and stronger)
So I have been grinding warframe trying to get the new frame but it's takeing to long so I just kinda gave up a little so I am sorry anyway I was thinking about what warframe is ganna be the MC main.
TENNOS LITERALL DECENT INTO MARVAL (A/U)
Movies · Voided_fox
not me personal pick, but we'll see were this leads.
"I hella have won give up and become my servant."
TENNOS LITERALL DECENT INTO MARVAL (A/U)
Movies · Voided_fox
+2 Even tho she probably won't win, it would be nice to see her get some attention
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The Immortal (twilight fanfiction)
Movies · Beans_on_a_tree