So far so good :D This a refreshing story. The characters are capturing and fun to read as you follow this story. Keep it up!!
16 is already here :D
Stary ;-; ja to pisałem po angielsku nie po polsku ;-;
Nice Novel. Good start. What is most attractive to me you can't guess what will happen next. Keep on writing Author Good job!!!!!!!
So far good novel with good story. I like the main character and his growth along the way. So far, there are still few chapters. I'll be back here when there be more of them. Keep it up :D
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Hello there, dropping my review here :D I must say that you have interesting story with nice plot. Characters development seems good. Keep it up!
Interesting story with something new in the genre. First-person view is rather rare, but it is easy to get used to. There are few chapters so far, and they are slow paced. I am waiting for more ;)
New edited version :D
I have not deliberately deleted your comments. But by fixing the mistakes in these paraphrases, they seem to have disappeared. ;-; Sorry
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Grymuar Kingdom
Fantasy · SonGoku0_0
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original Grymuar Kingdom
The day was sunny, and the peasants were just finishing building a new granary. Aron watched the progress proudly from the tower window. Nothing could have spoiled such a beautiful day for him. [New mission!] [...time, I really thought that I would be bored to death. Once I even started counting how many pages I have and you know what? They are countless! But a mortal like you don't...] [Reward for completing the quest: 5 iron knights] Aron's face was disgusted. In his head, he was preparing for the worst. [Time to complete the mission: 1 day] [Penalty for not completing the mission: you will lose your left leg] Aron stared in amazement at the new assignment. He used to know an old man without one leg who was doing quite well. "Ehhhh, I must come to terms with living without a leg because I have no idea what to do in this task." _______________________________________________ This is my first novella and English is my second language. I'm writing for fun, and I take inspiration from many other novels ;)25 Chs 34 Colecciones
something like that
[The building, a wooden knight's tower, has been converted into a stone-wooden knight's tower.]
Grymuar Kingdom
Fantasy · SonGoku0_0