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2019-08-16 Se unió France
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All good everybody has their life

Sorry for not updating for the past 10 days. I have some things in live.

One Piece: Reborn as Eustass Kid Twin Brother

One Piece: Reborn as Eustass Kid Twin Brother

Anime & Comics · Captain_Erebus

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Tiona !

The FL will either be Tiona or Ryuu, I haven't decided yet. Fortuna was always meant to fulfill the role of a friend/family member. Riveria would be an interesting choice, but I admittedly don't like the age gap despite the fact that the MC's lifespan is multiple thousands of years.

Reborn in Danmachi with a Tensura System

Reborn in Danmachi with a Tensura System

Anime & Comics · SaltyGamer

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Tiona a 100 time and it’s unique, to much story with boring ryu

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1/ english is not my native language and i can read your story with ease they are "rageux" (haters in french) 2/ the pace is not rushed so it’s cool, and you said yourself that it was a bit slice of life so they are dumb

So a few things before I start the chapter. I got my ass handed to me in the two new reviews I got today, and both mentioned that my writing is difficult to read, and one of them said it needed to be put through google translate to even read. Is it really that bad? Another thing they both mentioned is that Haruko has no personality, and I'm curious if that sentiment is held by anybody else? Another note is once again people are upset that it feels too much like a slice of life, and I really don't know what else to say at this point. It is a slice of life…. I'm just flabbergasted that people are picking it up knowing that, and then getting upset when the story has a slower pace, and spends more time with interactions than anything else. I have many more positive reviews than negative, but the negative ones hit so much harder, and I don't even know if I should defend myself, or leave it alone? Anyway rant over.

Reborn In Naruto As An Experiment

Reborn In Naruto As An Experiment

Anime & Comics · Balthizar_Blake

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Pense à y penser, quel maitre de la poésie, je broie la langue de Molière comme personne, Montesquieu fais gare à ton cul.

Deidara dans le monde de Fairy Tail

Deidara dans le monde de Fairy Tail

Anime & Comics · Zenox007

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+1

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