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Reborn in Danmachi with a Tensura System
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MC dies and wishes to get reborn in Danmachi with a Tensura skill system.
- This is a rewrite of my fanfic of the same name that I wrote on another account
- NO HAREM!
- OP MC
- NO Ultimate Skills, skills are capped at Unique
- Romance (IDK who yet)
- MC looks like Data Khun Eduan from TOG (cover image)
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El autor está más preocupado por como hacer que el personaje no sea OP que en la propia historia. Una nota muy importante es que las habilidades y magias de Danmachi son inútiles salvó unas cuantas y con cualquier habilidad o magia decente, ya rompiste el "balance" con darle algo útil y el mismo se disparó en el pie al poder obtener habilidades por si mismo.
I like the story but i feel like Fortuna was not inculuded in a good way. Feels like all she has is a half developed cardboard personality and 1-liners that you can see in any Danmachi stories with some grammer. I also dont understand why you choose to even include her to the story. He could have gone to a diffrent familia of a newly desended god/goddess in orario and with it you could have incopareted some world development to the story.
What is the fetish that everyone has with the nonsense of the gods? (useless prologue) the usual op protagonist, he lacks charisma, his goddess is the goddess of luck, he has a voice in his head that gives him information about everything that exists, he is also a gusion of two souls making the god useless from the prologue
this story is good so far, but please don't make it like the last one where you abuse your mc
Honestly, the story started off pretty well. It had a lot of potential and I could see it being an above-average story at least. But that's when it took a nosedive. The author forced a situation, where the MC had to accept another, stronger Ego fusing with him, drastically changing him mentally. That was already a massive turn-off, but I persevered in hopes it wouldn't get too bad, but that was ruined when the fusion made him into a sociopathic, idiotic edgelord. He saved a badly wounded group of adventurers from death, only to immediately turn around and walk away leaving them to their deaths because "Babysitting you is not my responsibility". I mean what even was the point of saving them if he was not going to help afterward and leave them to a guaranteed death?
the story started decent but in my opinion was ruined by forced plot progressions wich while frustrating i am mostly unphased about, howhever that along a progression that kind of feels at least partially rushed may turn away readers
For all my nit picking in the paragraph comments I think this is a decent novel with potential. The power up of the mc seems a bit rushed but the author is trying and it makes sense his system wish would give a crazy boost. But also I have to ask, why are people so but hurt over the MC not thinking with his lower half and they feel the need to whine and give 1 stars over that?
So far, this has been fantastic, I love both Tensura and Danmachi, and this combination works well, I’ll definitely be keeping up with this (PS: Could you put his stats in an aux tab rather then sometimes at the end of the chapter? It’d be nice to have access to, of course, no pressure.)
I usually don't rate stories but all the 1 star reviews here are kinda irritating me. Don't pay attention to them, they don't even give a legit reason for being 1 star.
I'd like to know if this is the rewrite of the old RDTS with King Jahad like appearance. Thankss
The story is a little underwealming and the oc characters feel a bit bland but the story has huge potential for improvement regarding character development of mc and Fortuna with regards to the original canon story.
A lot of these reviews are from a bunch of children quitting before the story actually gets developed. The writing quality is very good compared to what you usually get on here. The story development is a little strange as you can't really notice/feel the passage of time, but the pacing seems good so far. The character design is good as well. However, there was a little stint where he somehow had the ego of one of his wishes despite never asking to be a clone of said person. This, I assume, was one of the biggest issues that led people away. Despite it being somewhat upsetting at the start, it wasn't a big deal. The updating stability is a bit meh atm, and as of writing this review, it's been a week with no update. The world background is Danmachi with no noteable changes, so there isn't much else to say about that. Overall, the story is pretty good. People are simply overreacting about the decisions the author made since they're a bunch of spoiled brats.
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Who focuses on a harem world when he doesn't like harem and who gives him an overpowered system when he doesn't want his mc to be too overpowered