raisin_man

male LV 14

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2019-03-06 Se unió Global
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raisin_man
10 days ago
Posted

Not bad, but there are some pretty crucial chapters that are just reuploads of a previous chapter, and the actual chapter is missing. This makes it a little annoying to read, but hopefully It will get fixed.

raisin_man
raisin_man
26 days ago
Commented

We’re back!!!!

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raisin_man
1 months ago
Commented

Bruh you can’t give us a cliff hanger when Ino is about to use his ice magic for the first time in a practical situation!!!! We gotta see how effective it is, why u do this to me If u do it again I’ll throw some punches at you. It will be virtual, but you will get the intention of intimidation, so be wary, and give us another chapter soon!!

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raisin_man
2 months ago
Commented

Yo I’m so glad that a naruto ff finally just killed kabuto. Like for some reason he always has mad plot armor and just always lives no matter what. At least I hope he stays dead and doesn’t regrow his own heart or something next chapter for plot related purposes

raisin_man
raisin_man
2 months ago
Commented

Thanks for the mass releases, i like this story a lot

raisin_man
raisin_man
2 months ago
Commented

Thanks for picking up this translation. I Really liked this one and was sad when it got dropped, so I’m excited for the upcoming chapters that I haven’t read yet

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raisin_man
3 months ago
Commented

I really like this story, someone had translated this before but dropped it, and I really hope that this one gets completed, because it’s a pretty fun story. It has a lot of unique ideas that I haven’t seen in other hp fics, translated or otherwise. Thanks for posting!

raisin_man
raisin_man
3 months ago
Commented

Thanks for translating this. I’m really enjoying it, and I hope you keep going!

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raisin_man
raisin_man
4 months ago
Commented

The translation quality is pretty good all around, but there is one mistake that is made pretty often and that is mixing up ‘his’ and ‘her’. When it’s a male character, the right word is ‘his’. Like Lynn waved ‘his’ wand. When it is a female character it is ‘her’. And for some reason Lynn is referred to as female a lot in this translation. It’s the only glaring mistake though, so it is still readable, it is just distracting to always mentally correct as I’m reading. Thanks for the chapters though 🙏